| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 18:27 PDT
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Amazing. Just amazing. I hope you decide to update again sometime this week because I can't wait to see how Vegeta plays a part in this. I'm thrilled with this story and addicted already!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: August 11, 2009 17:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...You managed to capture the reaction of a tortured human being perfectly. Bulma is disturbed and it's going to take a while before she allows anyone to come close to her.
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Reviewed By: this is creative On: August 11, 2009 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Very dark, great idea, you are moving quite well with it for its subject matter. Character development is excellent. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 15:15 PDT
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Disturbingly creepy. Poor Bulma. :{
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Reviewed By: holymic10 On: August 11, 2009 12:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do NOT stop with there!!!
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Reviewed By: KB On: August 11, 2009 11:57 PDT
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Gorgeous story, dramatic and scary, but deeply moving. keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 09:45 PDT
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I hope you are still planning on continuing "Fixation". I'm excited to see where the plot is going and how Vegeta is going to help Bulma over come her fears. I can only imagine how much trauma she is suffering from after being kidnapped, probably tortured, and then decapitated.
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Reviewed By: not sure On: August 02, 2009 11:34 PDT
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Ooooh! I am so excited to read this and I think it will be fantastic. Your writing, as always, is beautiful.
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Reviewed By: blime On: July 29, 2009 19:41 PDT
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wow, creepy, i like it lol. i'm not partial to your teaser, the 'nothing to fear but fear itself' thing. isn't that like an FDR quote? kinda seems out of place
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Reviewed By: coeur noir On: July 28, 2009 00:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! Really a great idea! Who could be the killer? I guess it will take some time to know that...but that is even better! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2009 12:35 PDT
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As always, you have quickly commanded my interest. What a different twist! I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: July 26, 2009 09:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Through all these years you're gracing us with yet another original story of your creative mind! Halleluja! Can't wait to read the whole thing, but as always, don't update too soon! -X-
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Reviewed By: pisq On: July 26, 2009 05:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Psychological thriller is my fave! Reminds me of Seven, I hope we hear more about the serial killer!!!
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Reviewed By: Unholy_Rage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2009 04:52 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Absolutely brilliant start to what looks to be another awesome story. I look forward to more chapters. Different indeed; a nice departure from the average B/V. All of what you listed in your disclaimer: 'crime drama, psychological thriller' (and of course the romance) are among my favourite genres! This, and Free My Soul are what's sustaining me through this difficult semester at uni xD. Cheers!
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 16:18 PDT
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Wow this is great! So original and brilliant! I'm already hooked. I can't wait until the next update :)
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