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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 18:57 PDT
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I liked this chapter so much that I made a simple fanart for it. http://kinky-typo.deviantart.com/#/d2x1kux . I know you hear this all the time but I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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Title: latest update
Reviewed By: Saeri Jenn On: August 19, 2010 11:04 PDT
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Ah! So we finally meet the killer. I have to say I love how you introduced him to us--seems very much like the average person on the street except for the creepy "pottery collection" and what not. I'm looking forward to how he will now interact with Bulma as you've written her to this point and Vegeta of course. By the way, nice work there on how Vegeta reacts to Bulma's strange demands. It's like he understands her need to be somewhat in control yet won't back down that much so he can still retain his pride and dignity (you're keeping wonderfully to his character with that). Beautiful editing with this chapter. ^_^ Definately awaiting more especially after the introduction to the third major character of the story.
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Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2010 07:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing!! please keep updating this story! i CANT wait!
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Title: AWESOME !
Reviewed By: Violet62. On: August 18, 2010 06:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So happy to see you ! Wonderful ! Can't wait to see the next chapter ! (And what about the sequel to 'Free My Soul' ? ^-^) Love you
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Reviewed By: pisq On: August 17, 2010 09:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful development. And the killer knows she's alive! OMG I expect a new chapter soon or I'll go nuts!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2010 19:15 PDT
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I love you. Period. That was an amazing chapter. No words. Just it was awesome. Can't wait for more. Thanks for another great story!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2010 10:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2010 08:59 PDT
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Okay so we know that the killer isn't any of the cast we've talked to recently, since he just now learned about it and your killer is quite psycho, you've set him up quite nicely. And I love Vegeta reminiscing about his past and about Bulma making him feel alive. You're such a great tease about their relationship, I love it. Vegeta's already having to use a lot of restraint it seems so hopefully he'll be able to hold on long enough to help both of them a little. Love the chapter, can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: fr1nkl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2010 02:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ! left hanging! i wish i had your imagination, but reading this gives me ideas! awesome writing and understanding :D
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Reviewed By: KB On: August 16, 2010 02:43 PDT
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...the ending scene made me go squee then pictured her like kissing him...going further(Because I WANT her to push it)...and he's like grasping the back of the couch like desperately before it like breaks. o.o
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 23:36 PDT
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You're a goddamn tease D:
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Title: latest update--ch. 8
Reviewed By: Saeri Jenn On: August 14, 2010 10:10 PDT
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Love the subtle brush off Vegeta gives to Yamucha. You're setting up a wonderful plot foundation with having Vegeta push and pick at Bulma. (Dare I think it?) It seems as though Vegeta sees himself within Bulma going through the similiar motions of dealing with the after effects of torture, and he has decided to keep pushing her forward as he would himself so she isn't lost--it's very endearing for Vegeta's character. Wonderful job. Longing for another update but please take your time.
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Reviewed By: Violet62. On: August 10, 2010 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more . Please continue ! Your fics are one of the best !
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2010 20:24 PDT
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I haven't been on the computer in awhile so sorry I haven't commented. Wow, love this chapter. I like the unspoken acknowledgement Vegeta and Bulma had when Yamcha was around and I'm excited to see that the sexual tension is brewing! Love it and look forward to more .
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 11:58 PDT
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this is a good fic so dont wait so long to update!!!
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