| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Title: Dark & Devine
Reviewed By: pmedic505 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2009 19:11 PDT
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You have a very unique angle on all of your story lines. I can literally feel this one and believe its developing into one of the best I have read. Didn't do the rating thing but its a 10 across the board.
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: chewy booey On: September 08, 2009 01:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh. my. god! i was sitting here completely tense as i read this. its like i can feel the terror and pain coming from bulma. i love how you can evoke all of these emotions in your writing. as always, i can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: coeur noir On: September 01, 2009 04:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really love the way you describe Bulma and her fears. Although she is another person right now, she still is a genius. And the way you described Vegeta in this chapter is absolutely perfect. His behaviour is so comprehensible! Excellent work!
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Title: grinning from ear to ear
Reviewed By: jambacute [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow, wow, WOOOOOOWWWWW!!!!! another amazing story. please continue to update.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 21:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: aniiii On: August 25, 2009 12:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
original!!please update soon!!
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Title: AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2009 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great storyline. I've never read something like this before and I'm usually not into torturing Bulma. I love the way you write Vegeta. He's such a fun character. I had to laugh in Ch.2 the way he named everyone without using names... Loved it!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: August 20, 2009 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! She's nothing but a shadow of her former self. What a magnificent portrayal of a victim! Even though she's broken she's still freaking smart and knows her way arounnd the prince! lol
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Reviewed By: Bulmaveg Otaku On: August 20, 2009 12:20 PDT
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Wow. I bow down in humility and awe. I've really enjoyed all of your past works and I was sad when you said that you were done with fanfiction. Thanks for coming back. I know it's hard to ignore that call when it's thrumming in your veins and itching in your fingertips. I hope your mind never stops turning with such wonderful ideas and that you are always able to share them with the rest of us hungry souls. This piece will be your best yet, I can tell. Keep up the good work and know that there are many of us that admire and love your visions and stories.
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: August 19, 2009 21:10 PDT
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Another good chapter from you. Please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2009 17:43 PDT
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;) Smart girl.
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: August 13, 2009 10:21 PDT
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Wow, really interesting fic. THis is the first time i've ever read something like this. I really like it alot! this psychological twist. Please update soon! i look forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: coeur noir On: August 12, 2009 04:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god...!!! That was so intense!!! Poor Bulma? How is she supposed to recover from such an experience? I think this ff will be one of you bests! You are incredible! Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: chewy_booey On: August 12, 2009 03:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter that had me rooted to my seat leaning forward nearly pressing my nose to the screen as I read it. I could clearly picture every moment in my mind and it was disturbing as much as it was thrilling. I can't wait for chapter 3! I know that I'll be re-reading this story over and over when it's complete. Keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: janelynn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A powerful piece of writing. I can almost feel her fear so much it's disturbing.
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