| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: pisq On: January 12, 2011 23:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes!!! they`re gonna catch him! Loved this new perspective. |
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2011 19:56 PST
Comment/Review:
Can't wait to see what happens next; I bet he's a creep! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2011 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, two updates in a month. You rock! I love how you are so descriptive in your writing. The details you write regarding the investigation is amazing. It allows the reader to get to know all the minor characters in this story. Thanks a bunch! Hope you update soon. Can't wait to read what happens next. |
Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2011 14:43 PST
Comment/Review:
Thank you for this chapter but please dont wait another three months to update. |
Reviewed By: viking1843 On: January 10, 2011 06:14 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
what a nice way to start a year, with a new chapter of my favourite author :) I like that Bulma is getting her groove back! |
Reviewed By: PrinceVegeta88 On: January 09, 2011 06:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story, it is very well written, I feel that you have perfectly captured Vegeta's nature which few writers ever manage to do. You've taken your time instead of rushing into the intimate parts, you've built a growing relationship with a more natural progression of how a two hurt souls can come together. I love how you keep with the inner monologue of Vegeta's conflicting feelings, your style has a very Dexter-esc feel to it, and I am eager to read the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Maatlockk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2011 18:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see Vegeta's next move, and how he struggles with the urge to avenge Bulma, and what that realisation means to him. I can't wait for the new chapter! I read this last night on my Blackberry because my brother hogged my laptop, and I was writing a review, but the spam filter letters weren't decipherable because it was distorted. But I've come back today to tell you that I'm loving this new chapter, and I can't wait to see more. The interaction between the two main characters are awesome! |
Reviewed By: IfYouOnlyLovedMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 18:03 PST
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Ok at first I thought I wasn't going to be able to get into this story, but after I read it you got me hook! I love the organicness and suspense you have brought to it. I truly appreciate taking the time to write such amazing fiction! please update soon!! I can't wait to see if Bulma will actually be able to kill her killer or not! |
Reviewed By: chewy booey On: January 05, 2011 09:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last! Another absolutely amazing chapter! Thank you! Can't wait for the next chapter :D BTW, the spam filter is messed up. It's almost impossible to see what the letters are! Took me 40+ tries until I found one I could kinda read. |
Reviewed By: princesstracybrat On: January 04, 2011 17:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is totally original. I love every part of it. I need you to finish it. I would love to know in detail exactly what was done to Bulma in her time with the killer. I think she should remember and tell Vegeta . Please let me know when you add anothjer chapter. princesstracybrat1@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 10:52 PST
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YAY!!! im so glad to see the update! as always extremely well written and creative! keep it up! and sorry to hear you were ill..hope u get completely better and that next semester goes easier! good luck! |
Reviewed By: pisq On: January 02, 2011 04:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Thank you for updating!! I can't believe Bulma is thinking of killing this guy! |
Title: thank you
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 18:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to thank you for updating. I hope you are feeling better. This chapter was a nice little treat for the new year. I loved this story. You are an amazing writer. Your talent is beyond words. Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting patiently for the next update. |
Title: ellisande
Reviewed By: ellisande [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2010 19:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOO!!!! I have literally been waiting for years for this chapter and can honestly say it was worth it. Thank you soooooo much for updating! |
Reviewed By: danceindark On: November 24, 2010 02:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love vegeta in chapter 11!! and I love how you are pacing it out between the two, it makes the excitement last longer! I hope you won't finish it with chapter 12 like your other recent stories! make it longer cause this is good stuff :)) |
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