| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 21:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: aniiii On: August 25, 2009 12:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
original!!please update soon!!
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Title: AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2009 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great storyline. I've never read something like this before and I'm usually not into torturing Bulma. I love the way you write Vegeta. He's such a fun character. I had to laugh in Ch.2 the way he named everyone without using names... Loved it!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: August 20, 2009 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! She's nothing but a shadow of her former self. What a magnificent portrayal of a victim! Even though she's broken she's still freaking smart and knows her way arounnd the prince! lol
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Reviewed By: Bulmaveg Otaku On: August 20, 2009 12:20 PDT
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Wow. I bow down in humility and awe. I've really enjoyed all of your past works and I was sad when you said that you were done with fanfiction. Thanks for coming back. I know it's hard to ignore that call when it's thrumming in your veins and itching in your fingertips. I hope your mind never stops turning with such wonderful ideas and that you are always able to share them with the rest of us hungry souls. This piece will be your best yet, I can tell. Keep up the good work and know that there are many of us that admire and love your visions and stories.
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: August 19, 2009 21:10 PDT
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Another good chapter from you. Please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2009 17:43 PDT
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;) Smart girl.
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Reviewed By: starbrella On: August 13, 2009 10:21 PDT
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Wow, really interesting fic. THis is the first time i've ever read something like this. I really like it alot! this psychological twist. Please update soon! i look forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: coeur noir On: August 12, 2009 04:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god...!!! That was so intense!!! Poor Bulma? How is she supposed to recover from such an experience? I think this ff will be one of you bests! You are incredible! Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: chewy_booey On: August 12, 2009 03:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter that had me rooted to my seat leaning forward nearly pressing my nose to the screen as I read it. I could clearly picture every moment in my mind and it was disturbing as much as it was thrilling. I can't wait for chapter 3! I know that I'll be re-reading this story over and over when it's complete. Keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: janelynn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A powerful piece of writing. I can almost feel her fear so much it's disturbing.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 18:27 PDT
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Amazing. Just amazing. I hope you decide to update again sometime this week because I can't wait to see how Vegeta plays a part in this. I'm thrilled with this story and addicted already!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: August 11, 2009 17:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...You managed to capture the reaction of a tortured human being perfectly. Bulma is disturbed and it's going to take a while before she allows anyone to come close to her.
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Reviewed By: this is creative On: August 11, 2009 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Very dark, great idea, you are moving quite well with it for its subject matter. Character development is excellent. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 15:15 PDT
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Disturbingly creepy. Poor Bulma. :{
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