| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: chewy booey On: May 11, 2011 17:43 PDT
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Awwww shit! Fooled all of us! I absolutely love how you threw that twist in there. Totally didn't see that coming. Can't wait for the next chapter! You're amazing! |
Reviewed By: Can't Wait On: May 11, 2011 13:59 PDT
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This just keeps getting better and better! I hope Vegeta and Bulma get to him before the cops do. It would be nice for Bulma and Vegeta to mess him up really badly before they kill him. I'm so excited for the next chapter! Pretty please try really hard to get the next chapter up soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Creatlach On: May 08, 2011 03:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems the majority of the B/V angst fics are focused on healing Vegeta's tortured mind. It was a novel change to see him playing caretaker to Bulma's demons, with an intriguing story line and highly readable prose. Well done. |
Reviewed By: Feuria On: April 13, 2011 22:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAY I'm so giddy now that this story isnt finished and i dont have to post a comment at a dead end |
Title: o___O
Reviewed By: Boonie On: April 08, 2011 04:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Ummmm I've officially ran out of words that can describe how incredible is your work! |
Reviewed By: Can't Wait On: April 03, 2011 09:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like how V&B are progressing, and I liked Vegeta's internal struggle. Very fun to read! Like I said before, this keeps getting more and more exciting. :D |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2011 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how u depict vegeta's internal battle between the individual he once was against the person he is becoming. It is a very realistic portrayal of his character. The interaction between b/v seems so real and passionate. I love this fic. |
Reviewed By: chewy booey On: March 31, 2011 09:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was awesome! So much attention to detail, I could picture everything happening. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Coralista On: March 31, 2011 08:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes! Your V/B at their best :)I hope you don't finish it too soon, I'm enjoying this too much :D |
Reviewed By: Can't Wait On: March 28, 2011 14:12 PDT
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This keeps getting more exciting! I can't wait until the next chapter! Please update soon! :) |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2011 13:25 PDT
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Wow, interesting development! Wonder if he's the guy? I have a feeling Bulma's going to have to face her fear. I like seeing the police investigation too; it's hard to be away from my two favorite characters (lol) but you've made that part interesting enough, I've come to like the cops too, especially the younger one. Poor kid. Great update, looking forward to the next one! |
Title: Great Development
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2011 01:37 PDT
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Okay first off, I got a nice surprise today when I logged in to read the new chapter and realized I had missed the notification for this one! So lucky me, I got TWO new chapters to read, woo hoo! On to the story, this was a great development. I love the way the guy used the maid to torture poor Bulma, and I love how Vegeta is staying so much in character, even if it does make him look like an uncaring ass. To that end, I liked the observation of the cop noting that while he didn't embrace Bulma, neither did he shove her away. I also like how he was keeping an eye on her, and protecting her, almost instinctually. It's the most you can expect from Vegeta, I think. Oh! Loved that Bunny threw him for a loop, though! All in all, enjoyable chapter and great plot development. Off to read the next one! |
Title: ?! :)
Reviewed By: shibalover On: March 13, 2011 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is he the dude or not....?? I wont jump to conclusions just yet. You might have a twist up your sleeve. ;) Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Can't Wait On: March 12, 2011 14:16 PST
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I can't wait for more! I'm glad they found the bastard, although I wish Vegeta and Bulma were in this chapter, too. I'm a little depressed that this is almost over, but I can't wait to see how things end! :) |
Reviewed By: MiniC On: March 12, 2011 10:43 PST
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again no V&B??? It was ok to have like one chapter of the cops side of story but 4??? I kinda like the story better without them. |
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