| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 13:21 CST
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I dunno what you were worried about. this was an excellent chapter. ^__^
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Reviewed By: mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 13:20 CST
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I dunno what you were worried about. this was an excellent chapter. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe On: November 28, 2003 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Worried? You were worried??? What on Earth for? It was brilliant, Ember... just like everything else you write. I love it when you write B/V interaction. You have such a gift for it. I also love that you can get away without the lemon when you want to. That is a testament of how great your writing is... you can do it if you want, but your stories are never dependant on it.
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Reviewed By: ch 10 On: November 27, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Can't wait for the next one. And boy, isn't Yamcha going to be pissed when he sees what's going on!!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ember, you've done it again. I think that every one of your chapters is a masterpiece within itself. I can't wait for you next one.
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 21:07 CST
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Oh man, how many updates did I miss??? I don't have anything specific to say other than I love it, all of it. Yamcha spying on Bulma, the smoking on the balcony, Vegeta going to find her. I can't wait to see how that turns out!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, that was refreshing. I love your story and writing style. Please hurry with your next update! Good authors are always appriciated.
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Reviewed By: soo On: November 13, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the romance. Often has more passion than pure lemon. I was interested to find you are a fellow Brit. I thought i was the only female Bulma/Vegeta fan in the UK
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Title: ch9
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: November 10, 2003 10:34 CST
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The way you describe Vegeta's experience and responses to being on the cusp of turning Super-Saiyajin is so perfect Wow! It's fascinating. I like when the ship's searchlight falls across Vegeta's face...great little visual ^_~. My favorite part is that Bulma's words keep repeating in his mind...and she is the one he wants answers from concerning the most important issue in his life (I love this stuff! ha!).
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Title: chapters 7 & 8
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: November 03, 2003 22:42 CST
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I was through reading ch.8 when I realized I must have missed reading ch.7--I am so glad I went back and checked, because this chapter is so fun! *^_^* I love the whole exchange in the kitchen *hilarious*! I love the line about 'do you really want your only daughter to spend two weeks w/ a s**thead like him' ...ha! I was dying hehe. It's funny how he keeps calling her 'idiot', 'witch', and 'whore' under his breath...but following her around, spying on her during all his free time...he is so hooked *^_^*. I like Bulma's line about 'train hard and love life'(I always like imagining that she helps him somehow, to achieve his goal, by some 'off the cuff' wisdom ^_^...this is a nice moment). My favorite part is when she rests her head 'full' on his shoulder...hmmm, nice. In the following chapter, I like the way it begins w/ Yamcha's perspective of the B/V exchange...interesting. I like when Yamcha notices Vegeta's eyes 'burning into hers' before dropping lower *^_^*. Later, I like the line about Bulma's moment being 'peaceful and hers' ^_^. It's cute when Vegeta is asking her 'were you serious?'...well, cute for a minute anyway...before he gets all riled up again ha! I like the part when Bulma is thinking 'no matter how many times her mind said no! no!...' the teenager fluttery thing 'wouldn't go away'. This is very easy to identify w/...pulling us into her experience. It's intense when Vegeta is telling her 'Do not wish for it, Bulma'... *whew*. My favorite part is when he is 'lost in a vision that was completely his own'...affording her a view into his heart.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, your story blows me away every time. Very well written. Oh, and I'm sorry about your illness. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an excelent chapter!! Please hurry with the next one, I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: kmf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 04:55 CDT
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Very nice chapter. My favourite part had to be Bulma getting told off for swearing when Vegeta got away with it because he was a guest. Brilliant! Keep it coming please ^_^
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: October 03, 2003 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you, Ember! Here I sit at 5:30 in the morning bored out of my mind and you just happen to update! It was a great chapter... Ilove the exchanges between Bulma and Vegeta... especially the smoking on the balcony. And I knew what a wanker was... (I know Barb, don't I?)... but your explanation had me howling!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: September 20, 2003 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, you can generate more heat between Bulma and Vegeta with suggestive conversation then most of us can with a full blown lemon. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
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