| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kandy On: June 10, 2003 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness that was just too wonderful. I cannot even begin to explain my reasoning for which I have rated your fanfiction. I love you. I love your story. |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, fantastic work from you, I love the interaction between Vegeta and Bulma - there seems to be just the merest hint of sexual tension, which I absolutely love. Can't wait to read more of this ficcy.
Please update soon. :) :) |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED ITT!!!!! But then again ur work is exelent !!Please UPDATE SOOOONNNNNNNNNN!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: GoldFusion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear you have these B/V stories down to an art form. Very nice. Your way of presenting the characters makes it very easy to slide right into the story. I never feel that nagging sense of dejavu when I read one of your stories. I don't know how you can keep spitting them out but please don't stop. |
Reviewed By: TrunksChick87 On: June 09, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: June 09, 2003 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree you have Vegeta and Bulma characters spot on. Once Bulma has the training room done she will have to work on the harem. I wonder who will have who down flat. Vegeta with a gifted mind and body, Bulma is in for it. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 13:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ember, if I promise to bring you some Reeses Pieces when I come over there, will you please promise to post a new chapter every day? :)
I think Akira would be proud of you to see the job you've done on Bulma and Vegeta's characters so far, kiddo! Their personalities are perfect so far, and the insight you've given us through Bulma's thoughts are brilliant. Even little Dende is his adorable self!
This promises to be another fantastic fic, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice character analysis there Ember!! Beautifully worded, and a pleasure to read. Looking forward to the rest!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also wonder how you keep doing it. This is wonderful and as always keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start to a promising B/V get-together! Both Bulma and Vegeta are very much in character - especially when you explained Bulma's "secret" in the prologue. There are still a few years until Trunks is born so there seems to be plenty of time for their intriguing relationship to develop. Once again, very nicely done! Can't wait for the next update ~ |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The character exposition in your prologue was excellent. 'scribe's right- you do have these characters down pat! i especially like how you use dialogue between Dende and Bunni to help us understand Vegeta.
the chemistry is excellent. i caught the mental attraction between bulma and vegeta, first woith bulma being taken aback by being able to share her thougthw with another man, who was not her father! (freudian! ) then Vegeta when he said she put too much value on the visual.
great start. |
Reviewed By: bbs On: June 09, 2003 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've only read the prologue but I love the way you are getting into her character. I can't wait to get back to it and read the first chapter. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 09, 2003 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you keep doing it???
Another master piece in the making! You have Bulma ad Vegeta's characters down flat! I can't wait until the next update! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 09:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very Nice...!!! It's amazing how you keep writing the best stories!! You're so talented!!!
So, she's going to build him a training room and she has given him her private guest room to use as his quarters...wonder what Yamcha's reaction will be once he's wished back...of course he'll be to late to save her from the sexy Saiyan Prince...not that she will want or need to be saved...hahaha!!!! Seems like she can handle Vegeta quite well on her own...
Waiting............................................................................................................................................ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I love the way you get into Vegeta's head. You have a true gift for writing his character. |
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