| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: HardCanydVegetto On: August 22, 2003 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Lucy On: August 22, 2003 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY HELL! That is one fucking awesome story, its just amazing! Im really loving Vegeta's attitude you've got it down to a tee. Please get the next chapter out asap because i just cant wait to see whats going on with Bulma! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmmmmm....
Wonderful interaction between Bulma and Vegeta. I reallt enjoyed their conversation. But why I wonder would Vegeta be trying to touch her mind? Oh well, can't wait to find out! |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet. Please update soon...or I might die. Then what..huh!? Ok, Luv Ya;
Bye Bye,
Manda |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. i can't wait until your next chapter!! Please hurry!!! |
Reviewed By: strompf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!! YOUR GOOD !!!!
Gods, I don't know how you do it, but it's perfect. As always. Can't wait to read more.
THANX |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 25, 2003 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Veggie is such a comedian (unintentionally). And Bulma's mom is about as dense as they come. I loved it when Bulma told Veggie that "she was done with him" and that "he could go back to his sunbathing". LMAO!! I could visualized on big sweat drop and a couple of veins popping out on this forehead ^_^. Super chap and looking forward to the next! :D |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 25, 2003 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear no one can get into Veggie's head like you can. Good job! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 10:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. :) I loved Vegeta attempting to scare Mrs. Briefs, and Bulma watching him workout. Damn indeed. ^^ |
Reviewed By: LS On: June 24, 2003 22:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fun chapter!! I like the way Vegeta is 'toying' around w/ Bulma's mother, and then again w/ Dende...I can just see his evil little grin. My favorite parts are when there is something so right about the way it feels, when the back draft of power pushes the warm afternoon air up and over him...{I can really 'feel' it too ^_^} & also the whole section w/ him performing his katas {hyung}...I like that he is enjoying the workout sans 'ki'...[I like that idleness drives him crazy ^_~] I'm anticipating the next chapter you come up with ^_^...so fun!! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: June 24, 2003 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow another great chapter. I loved the way you showed Vegetas malaise with Earth. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 22, 2003 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you manage to get into Vegeta's head so easily. You have a real handle on him.
Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 11, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus Christ Ember you have the ability to grab a reader by the ovaries with your first chap and make them come back for more O_O. If Dickens were alive he'd be asking you for writing lessons. I love the way everyone's IC and the sexual tension that's already starting to build between B/V. To say that I can't wait for the next chap is an understatement. Can't wait to see what you have in store for our temperamental pair. Great job!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that prologue was impressive, sort of like a bedtime story and psychiatric treatment all in one. I have a feeling this'll be another one of your kick ass fics ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: June 10, 2003 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe its over! I feel so awful. Please write the next chapter already. Please. |
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