| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Title: ch14
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: March 27, 2004 17:51 CST
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Hmmm I love the part when they each can't let go...and they are watching the moonlight on the water in silence for a long time...*^_^* nice. Another wonderful chapter. I like the bit about the battle she sees in his eyes too...and when she realizes something at that moment *^_~*.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 10:53 CST
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Yummy Yammy smokes roll-ups!! :D Cool!! All the best people do... :D I actually like the direction that the story is going in - OK, so I don't know what you had planned for it originally, but dang, I enjoyed this chapter... Hurry up and update... :D
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: March 21, 2004 04:33 CST
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another g8 chappy!!!! gud work!!!!! surfs up! cant wait 4 more!!!!! n soz 2 here bout ur back btw hope it heals soon!!!!!! surfs up! bye byez!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: March 20, 2004 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you think you were NOT doing the right thing when the chapter turned out so wonderfully! Great job!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: March 20, 2004 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you think you were NOT doing the right thing when the chapter turned out so wonderfully! Great job!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a total twist...and a shorter chapter than usual...or at least it feels that way. Anyway, I love it, but I hope everything turns out alright in the end. I can't wait for your next chapter; the angst and suspense are killing me!!Lol.
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: March 19, 2004 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was a great chapter. And I think you did the right thing in making Vegeta be so cold to Bulma. I mean, if he acted all nice to her, that just wouldn't seem right. It wouldn't fit in the DBZ episodes. Cause when Frieza comes, Vegeta acts like he doesn't want anything to do with her. Even after Trunks is born he still acts like that. I think you should keep that in mind. And I think you _have_ done that so far =) So keep up the good work and update soon =D
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Title: ai yi yi yummy chapter!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: March 18, 2004 21:49 CST
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Oh please add me to yr mailing list. That last chapter rang like bells! Vegeta positively glowered with all that best Vegeta stuff! Good choices, whatever they were--you wrote a dynamic chapt 14! debbiechan shalombayit@juno.com
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Reviewed By: bimbo_ditz@yahoo.co.uk On: February 29, 2004 03:49 CST
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well done!!!! great work!!!!!!! again! we would b well happy and greatfuil if u could add us to your mailing list, our email address is: bimbo_ditz@yahoo.co.uk thankyaz!!!!!! byeeeeeeeeeee byeeeeeeeeez and surfs up! update again soon! :0)
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - If I logged in it wouldn't matter On: February 28, 2004 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate you, do you know that? I am getting damn sick and tired of leaving you glowing reviews. You are too talented for your own good... and it's sickening to us poor common folk! Wonderful chapter, sexy and intense.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful addition to your library of perfection. Vegeta was perfect; didn't find him too sappy at all. And it really took a lot of balls ( literally! Lol!!) for Bulma to do that. I just love the way you write. I pulls me in and won't let go until the chapter ends...and even then I don't want it to. Until next time...
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Title: what you're best at!
Reviewed By: debbie chan On: February 22, 2004 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that you're known for the inventive settings you drop B&V into, but I way prefer the emotional contexts you put them in! The psychological drama here is better than the football stadium. Your best story, imv, is the lemon-less one on fanfic.net (R?) It was the first story my nitpicky, holier than thou (well, in my worst moods--before coffee) pro writer self felt compelled to leave feedback on--and I must say, I'm such a DBZ freak, I've read them all in the past year! You're terrific!! Debbie chan
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 22, 2004 05:17 CST
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plz plz plz update this soon!!!!!!! the alst chappy woz well fune, lol u could just imagine it at a real footy nmatch couldnt ya lol btw we from england 2 know how ya feel bout sayign soccer lol well update soon and nice work bye byez surfs up!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, it took me so long to finally get to read this, but it was sooo worth it!! That was one of the most interesting a action packed chapters ever! I love your work so much. I was wondering if you'd want to help beta some of my work...if you had the chance. Having the best help me out would really bring my confidence levels up. I love you girl!!
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Reviewed By: bimnbo n ditz On: February 09, 2004 03:56 CST
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please update soon
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