| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: Prince Vegeta1 On: July 15, 2004 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fanfic and i cant wait to read chapter 17
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Title: ch.16 Take It
Reviewed By: library surfer On: June 05, 2004 00:03 CDT
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Nice chapter *^_~*. My favorite part is when Vegeta realizes he regrets pushing Bulma away...that whole little section when he knows she is the only one he trusts. I like when Bulma has a piece of paper stuck to her face as she wakes up ^_^...very vivid scene. {her little scene w/ Dende is nice too} I love when he suddenly crushes his lips to hers...and I love when he keeps telling her to 'take it'...great title for the chapter *^_~*.
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Reviewed By: Catreena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, what the heck is up with that cliff hanger??? Right when you get the reader to the best and I might add most anticipated part you stop!!! LOL I really love this story as well as your other ones, btw, hurry up with Feeding Genius, PLEASE! And PLEASE hurry up with this next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: May 23, 2004 05:33 CDT
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anothjer great g8 kool chappie!!!!! well done!!!!!! cant wait for more1!!!!!!!!!! b/v rock!!!! da footy chappuie has to be da best 1 yet tho lol xcellent work!!!!!! :0) gtg bye byez surfs up! (UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!!!) :)
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Reviewed By: Carla-phantomscribe72 On: May 21, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!! You keep leaving me hanging!!!! But I love every minute of it. I will refuse to leave my keyboard until you update. That means lots of stupid and pointless email for you. Come on now girl, do you really WANT me to clog up your precious email storage space?
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Reviewed By: Fibs On: May 19, 2004 15:06 CDT
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Oh my GOD !! Oh man this is getting good now! I SO cannot wait for the next update !! Hurry back ! Hurry back !! Hurry back !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The final scene was amazing. Actually made me feel warm and fuzzy inside... this chapter rocks !! I love you !! Fibs
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Reviewed By: freaky-grl1 On: May 19, 2004 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!..*_* Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: mischief not logged On: May 18, 2004 20:58 CDT
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Wonderful chapter. so good that I'll even forgive ya for ending it where you did. ~__^
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Don't worry about your chpaters being late! The chapters you put out are so wonderful that it's worth it; plus you hve like 2 or 3, mabey even 4 stories going right now. I totally understand. Anyway, that chapter was awesome, the indescision, the passion, but now, what will be the outcome?! I can't wait to find out, so please hurry!!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 17:33 CDT
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Nuuuuuu! How dare you leave it there!? Where's my lemon, goddammit! *cries* So close... SO CLOSE!!! ;_; haha, good story, though. Can't wait for any future chapters :D *huggles*
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: May 18, 2004 13:54 CDT
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It's getting old saying this every time I've read a chapter of yours, but I'll say it again: Great chapter!!! You really are the best B/V fics writer! I'm not kidding. And I'm GLAD Bulma finally gave into her desire and forgot about Yamcha. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Title: way to go, Vegeta!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 13:43 CDT
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Nice of you to drop back into this fic with such a satisfying chapter! The kiss was awesome, but I was reminded of the whole fic again, the compassion issue nicely highlighted by your great characterization of Dende. And poor Yamcha! The dynamic btwn him and the demon is highly original and promising. (more Yamcha, more Yamcha, we LOVE Yamcha!) What a pleasure to be hanging on waiting for another chapter. Bc I came late into the fandom, I'm used to gobbling up quality fics in one sitting. Waiting for the serial to continue is exquisite torture, and you are a master of writerly foreplay! :-) YEY! I am once again into this fic! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: May 18, 2004 13:07 CDT
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MAKE OUT SESSION!!!!!! ok can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: bimbo an ditz On: May 02, 2004 13:21 CDT
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!! surfs up! if ya need any help plz dont fail ta email us at bimbo_ditz@yahoo.co.uk gtg bye byez! surfs up!
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: April 07, 2004 06:13 CDT
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pzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oo this rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :0)surfs up!
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