"Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: LS On: June 24, 2003 22:33 CDT Comment/Review: Fun chapter!! I like the way Vegeta is 'toying' around w/ Bulma's mother, and then again w/ Dende...I can just see his evil little grin. My favorite parts are when there is something so right about the way it feels, when the back draft of power pushes the warm afternoon air up and over him...{I can really 'feel' it too ^_^} & also the whole section w/ him performing his katas {hyung}...I like that he is enjoying the workout sans 'ki'...[I like that idleness drives him crazy ^_~] I'm anticipating the next chapter you come up with ^_^...so fun!! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: June 24, 2003 18:32 CDT Comment/Review: Wow another great chapter. I loved the way you showed Vegetas malaise with Earth. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 22, 2003 07:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love the way you manage to get into Vegeta's head so easily. You have a real handle on him.
Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 11, 2003 00:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Jesus Christ Ember you have the ability to grab a reader by the ovaries with your first chap and make them come back for more O_O. If Dickens were alive he'd be asking you for writing lessons. I love the way everyone's IC and the sexual tension that's already starting to build between B/V. To say that I can't wait for the next chap is an understatement. Can't wait to see what you have in store for our temperamental pair. Great job!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2003 23:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, that prologue was impressive, sort of like a bedtime story and psychiatric treatment all in one. I have a feeling this'll be another one of your kick ass fics ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: June 10, 2003 02:22 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't believe its over! I feel so awful. Please write the next chapter already. Please. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: June 10, 2003 01:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my goodness that was just too wonderful. I cannot even begin to explain my reasoning for which I have rated your fanfiction. I love you. I love your story. |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 22:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: As always, fantastic work from you, I love the interaction between Vegeta and Bulma - there seems to be just the merest hint of sexual tension, which I absolutely love. Can't wait to read more of this ficcy.
Please update soon. :) :) |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 19:46 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOVED ITT!!!!! But then again ur work is exelent !!Please UPDATE SOOOONNNNNNNNNN!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: GoldFusion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 19:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I swear you have these B/V stories down to an art form. Very nice. Your way of presenting the characters makes it very easy to slide right into the story. I never feel that nagging sense of dejavu when I read one of your stories. I don't know how you can keep spitting them out but please don't stop. |
Reviewed By: TrunksChick87 On: June 09, 2003 19:22 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: MORE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: June 09, 2003 14:20 CDT Comment/Review: I agree you have Vegeta and Bulma characters spot on. Once Bulma has the training room done she will have to work on the harem. I wonder who will have who down flat. Vegeta with a gifted mind and body, Bulma is in for it. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 13:46 CDT Comment/Review: Ember, if I promise to bring you some Reeses Pieces when I come over there, will you please promise to post a new chapter every day? :)
I think Akira would be proud of you to see the job you've done on Bulma and Vegeta's characters so far, kiddo! Their personalities are perfect so far, and the insight you've given us through Bulma's thoughts are brilliant. Even little Dende is his adorable self!
This promises to be another fantastic fic, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 13:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice character analysis there Ember!! Beautifully worded, and a pleasure to read. Looking forward to the rest!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 10:38 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I also wonder how you keep doing it. This is wonderful and as always keep up the great work. |
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