| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Title: Keep Writing!
Reviewed By: katrina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was very good. I cant wait for Vegeta to get back to Earth and realize he loves Bulma! I understand if you dont get a chance to write for a while, but I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: stryderf0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 10:51 CDT
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come on woman update its been like three month's. anyway the storie is tight.
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 05:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They should have an addiction rating up there. =) I read this originally on adimra's site and was disappointed at the long periods of time between updates. Thank you so much for directing me here! I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and portrayal of the characters. *LOL* Especially poor Shuma. I can tell that part is going to be extremely interesting! Keep up the amazing work and please update this as soon as you can!
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Title: Everything Happens For A Reason
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes but it was worth the wait..so now i think i understand the plan..but to take vegeta out now do you think it was to soon..yamcha is very sneaky but i think that Shuma is going to do just find...update soon..great chapter...maria
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 23:09 CST
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Woo hoo - another wonderful chapter, Lynn! I just love your writing style - it was so easy to envision the Kai's having their little meeting and discussing the consequenses of their meddling. Hmmm. I swear it almost sounded as if they were using the Zero System... ;) So. What does your devious little mind have planned for Shuma, huh? You so don't want to know what ideas I've come up with! ;)
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a great chapter. I love the way you brought the Kais into the mix. This is a very fresh approach to the story and I think it;s absolutely wonderful that you thought of it. I can't wait for your next chapter. Please hurry!!!!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: January 25, 2005 14:21 CST
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awesome new chapter... I can't wait for the next chapter... this is a really great story as they all are
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 14:16 CST
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oh! OH! OH! I LOOOOVED this chapter. I was all pleased as could be, reading the exchange bwtn Shuma and Yammie that I was (gasp!) almost disappointed when Vegeta showed up in the narrative for a bit! Then the bit with the Kai--I love the divine intervention bit in this story. And your dialogue and playfulness has never been better! oh thanks for it! Reading this was such a bright spot in a long day! d
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Title: chapters 17,18,19
Reviewed By: LS On: December 01, 2004 22:52 CST
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I can't remember if I left a note after I read 'Found Out' or not...I reread it before moving on to the last two posted chapters...and again, my favorite part is when Vegeta notices how Bulma deals w/ her conflicting emotions by 'physical movement' in an intriguingly similar way to his use of training that day. This chapter had several little moments like that...when he catches himself relating to her...like he's already missing her, knowing he will soon depart. I am enjoying chapters 18 & 19 too...in how honest Bulma's reactions are...conceding (in her heart) that Yamcha is right in being pained by her behavior...and how it's loving toward her that he is pained...but still not being able to deny her real feelings for Vegeta as well. (I think my last review here was about the 'Paranormal Gooseberry'-but I called it ch.17...I appreciate your note at the bottom of 'found out', explaining the title. I got the 'paranormal' bit, but this made it more clear ^_~.)
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (didn't feel like signing in) On: November 29, 2004 22:26 CST
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Oh my...what a twist. I'm sure Bulma will be ecstatic about the gorgeous new sexpot living in Yamcha's apartment...:D Great chapter, though I think Bulma was a little soft on Yamcha...If that was me, there'd have been some serious ass kicking going on!!! *giggle* I think I've been writing Vegeta too much lately...he's starting to rub off on me.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That is hilarious!!! Shuma's going to be having one hell of a time on Earth looking like that. I hope Yamcha and Bulma don't get too cozy, because we all know everyone's favorite Saiyajin is going to be coming back. Please hurry with the next chapter; the whole Shuma situation is priceless.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:01 CST
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I LOVE YOU! That was a satisfying chapter--I was just enjoying the ride, the details, the turns of phrases ("He'd already served one sentence; he didn't want to serve another") and the introspective stuff with little descriptions you're so good at, and then--surprise!--I wasn't expecting a fun plot twist! I love that demon (although I was hoping the midnight blue haired temptress was going to be a little Southern gal named Debbie! :-D) and I love Yammie in this fic. This is an original, and I can't believe I'm actually not caring when the plot veers away from Vegeta for a spell. Your writing is getting crisper but it's the stories that amaze me--does that well ever run dry? This one is turning out to be quite an inventive piece of work. Yey for Yamcha in all this! You're doing the feller right!
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Reviewed By: Tempest/Tempting On: November 25, 2004 10:36 CST
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OMG! That explains everything! You are so good at the relationship junk, the new and the old. I love how you resolve Yamcha's and Bulma's relationship without making him out to be an ass. And now Shuma is a woman. I can see it coming from Bulma's point of view. I almost feel sorry for Yamcha. Almost.
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Title: Everything Happens For A Reason
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 25, 2004 06:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope that this story is a long one...and i'm glad that it's a girl..lol yes your very BAD but thats ok..really like how this story is coming out....can't wait to read more..but i really don't want to see bulma so innocent with yamcha..didn't she learn anything from vegeta at lease..update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy On: November 22, 2004 18:00 CST
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Oh my gosh that chapter was creepy, the fact that yamcha's ghost had free reign in the real world and was colouring the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta with sinister undertones really gripped me. That was soo different it added a kind of chilling excitement to it and makes me wonder how far yamcha will go in his quest to seperate Bulma and Vegeta. I'm also unsure about his sanity but then again love makes you do crazy things. And the fact that Vegeta sensed him damn this is sooo cool
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