| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: LS On: September 20, 2003 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!! a new chapter...and it is so full of interesting moments ^_~. My favorite is when she notices the contrast of the shadows playing on Vegeta's face w/ the whiteness of his teeth as he is smiling derisively...great visual! I am pulled into the moment every time she notices an unexpected heavy ache in her heart when he shuns her advances...even though she 'thought' she wasn't going for any other response...(I love that stuff! Even if Vegeta is a mystery to her...she is learning new things about her own heart.)I like the way the cold breeze billows her hair in the last sight Vegeta has of her that night...*^_^* Very nice chapter. |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a really great chapter!! Please hurry with the next one, I can't wait. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: August 23, 2003 09:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
mmm, naked Vegeta walking through the living room....
Heh heh. sorry. Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: August 22, 2003 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you think writing that chapter was fun, you ought to try reading it. I've said it before and I'm sure I'll say it again... I love the way you get into Vegeta's head! I can just HEAR him saying those lines. Another great job! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor Ember! School time's almost here.. I can hardly wait too! God! I hope you have time to write more soon! This is absolutely breathtaking!! I'm reading your others too!(I have read some, but never finished.. sorry!!) |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An' here I thought I'd read them all!! This is definitely one of the best B/V get together fics I've had the pleasure of reading! Land'sakes girl, you should be published! Your writing style is exquisite! Perfect Characterization! I love Vegeta's thoughts in this! And what he did to Bulmas mom was just outstanding.. never read that before! :) |
Reviewed By: HardCanydVegetto On: August 22, 2003 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Lucy On: August 22, 2003 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY HELL! That is one fucking awesome story, its just amazing! Im really loving Vegeta's attitude you've got it down to a tee. Please get the next chapter out asap because i just cant wait to see whats going on with Bulma! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmmmmm....
Wonderful interaction between Bulma and Vegeta. I reallt enjoyed their conversation. But why I wonder would Vegeta be trying to touch her mind? Oh well, can't wait to find out! |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet. Please update soon...or I might die. Then what..huh!? Ok, Luv Ya;
Bye Bye,
Manda |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. i can't wait until your next chapter!! Please hurry!!! |
Reviewed By: strompf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!! YOUR GOOD !!!!
Gods, I don't know how you do it, but it's perfect. As always. Can't wait to read more.
THANX |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 25, 2003 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Veggie is such a comedian (unintentionally). And Bulma's mom is about as dense as they come. I loved it when Bulma told Veggie that "she was done with him" and that "he could go back to his sunbathing". LMAO!! I could visualized on big sweat drop and a couple of veins popping out on this forehead ^_^. Super chap and looking forward to the next! :D |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 25, 2003 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear no one can get into Veggie's head like you can. Good job! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 10:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. :) I loved Vegeta attempting to scare Mrs. Briefs, and Bulma watching him workout. Damn indeed. ^^ |
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