| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, that was refreshing. I love your story and writing style. Please hurry with your next update! Good authors are always appriciated.
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Reviewed By: soo On: November 13, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the romance. Often has more passion than pure lemon. I was interested to find you are a fellow Brit. I thought i was the only female Bulma/Vegeta fan in the UK
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Title: ch9
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: November 10, 2003 10:34 CST
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The way you describe Vegeta's experience and responses to being on the cusp of turning Super-Saiyajin is so perfect Wow! It's fascinating. I like when the ship's searchlight falls across Vegeta's face...great little visual ^_~. My favorite part is that Bulma's words keep repeating in his mind...and she is the one he wants answers from concerning the most important issue in his life (I love this stuff! ha!).
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Title: chapters 7 & 8
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: November 03, 2003 22:42 CST
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I was through reading ch.8 when I realized I must have missed reading ch.7--I am so glad I went back and checked, because this chapter is so fun! *^_^* I love the whole exchange in the kitchen *hilarious*! I love the line about 'do you really want your only daughter to spend two weeks w/ a s**thead like him' ...ha! I was dying hehe. It's funny how he keeps calling her 'idiot', 'witch', and 'whore' under his breath...but following her around, spying on her during all his free time...he is so hooked *^_^*. I like Bulma's line about 'train hard and love life'(I always like imagining that she helps him somehow, to achieve his goal, by some 'off the cuff' wisdom ^_^...this is a nice moment). My favorite part is when she rests her head 'full' on his shoulder...hmmm, nice. In the following chapter, I like the way it begins w/ Yamcha's perspective of the B/V exchange...interesting. I like when Yamcha notices Vegeta's eyes 'burning into hers' before dropping lower *^_^*. Later, I like the line about Bulma's moment being 'peaceful and hers' ^_^. It's cute when Vegeta is asking her 'were you serious?'...well, cute for a minute anyway...before he gets all riled up again ha! I like the part when Bulma is thinking 'no matter how many times her mind said no! no!...' the teenager fluttery thing 'wouldn't go away'. This is very easy to identify w/...pulling us into her experience. It's intense when Vegeta is telling her 'Do not wish for it, Bulma'... *whew*. My favorite part is when he is 'lost in a vision that was completely his own'...affording her a view into his heart.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, your story blows me away every time. Very well written. Oh, and I'm sorry about your illness. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an excelent chapter!! Please hurry with the next one, I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: kmf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 04:55 CDT
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Very nice chapter. My favourite part had to be Bulma getting told off for swearing when Vegeta got away with it because he was a guest. Brilliant! Keep it coming please ^_^
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: October 03, 2003 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you, Ember! Here I sit at 5:30 in the morning bored out of my mind and you just happen to update! It was a great chapter... Ilove the exchanges between Bulma and Vegeta... especially the smoking on the balcony. And I knew what a wanker was... (I know Barb, don't I?)... but your explanation had me howling!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe On: September 20, 2003 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, you can generate more heat between Bulma and Vegeta with suggestive conversation then most of us can with a full blown lemon. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: LS On: September 20, 2003 00:09 CDT
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Yay!! a new chapter...and it is so full of interesting moments ^_~. My favorite is when she notices the contrast of the shadows playing on Vegeta's face w/ the whiteness of his teeth as he is smiling derisively...great visual! I am pulled into the moment every time she notices an unexpected heavy ache in her heart when he shuns her advances...even though she 'thought' she wasn't going for any other response...(I love that stuff! Even if Vegeta is a mystery to her...she is learning new things about her own heart.)I like the way the cold breeze billows her hair in the last sight Vegeta has of her that night...*^_^* Very nice chapter. |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a really great chapter!! Please hurry with the next one, I can't wait. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: August 23, 2003 09:38 CDT
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mmm, naked Vegeta walking through the living room....
Heh heh. sorry. Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: August 22, 2003 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you think writing that chapter was fun, you ought to try reading it. I've said it before and I'm sure I'll say it again... I love the way you get into Vegeta's head! I can just HEAR him saying those lines. Another great job! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor Ember! School time's almost here.. I can hardly wait too! God! I hope you have time to write more soon! This is absolutely breathtaking!! I'm reading your others too!(I have read some, but never finished.. sorry!!) |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An' here I thought I'd read them all!! This is definitely one of the best B/V get together fics I've had the pleasure of reading! Land'sakes girl, you should be published! Your writing style is exquisite! Perfect Characterization! I love Vegeta's thoughts in this! And what he did to Bulmas mom was just outstanding.. never read that before! :) |
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