| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual another astoundingly wonderful chapter! I would never let anyone do that to me, though. It's so evil. I could never be naked in front of that many people. I don't know whether to hope she wins or loses. Either way it'll be quite interesting to see what she does to Vegeta for embarassing her. I can't wait until the next one!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_bulma69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! That was GREAT! I cant wait to read more!!
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Title: ch11
Reviewed By: Library Surfer On: December 14, 2003 20:00 CST
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I'm enjoying this chapter...lots of Vegeta's 'thoughts & emotions' to peruse. I love that he has previously wondered about how she would respond to his kissing her neck...that her answer is important to him. I like that he recognizes his own resolve in her eyes...she is not 'easy'...(when she does 'give in' to him, he can know that it is because she wants him...and not just 'action' etc.) I love to read how his reluctant emotions battle his 'thinking'...Bulma is drawing *feelings* out in him and he is trying to fit it into the framework of his experience, but this is all new. He may be able to 'pin' her w/ his strength, but it seems she is inadvertantly 'pinning' his heart, and he doesn't even realize it ^_~. While I'm waiting to see what comes next, this will be a fun chapter to re-read...more nuances to 'catch' ^_^.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 10:10 CST
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Wow. Another great... and intense chapter. You keep writing, girl... and I'll keep reading... and standing around with my mouth hanging open in awe!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 20:11 CST
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Jeez, I was thinking they were going to get down and dirty, but noooooo - Ember has to make us wait even longer... :P I love how you had the two of them discussing honor and compassion, and Vegeta's little attempts to throw in a visual aid here and there were so cute! And don't tell anyone, but you had me almost feeling sorry for Yamcha. I said almost!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your stories so much girl, and this one is no exception. This chapter was amazing, I really thought they were gunna do the nasty too. But I like it when it's drawn out and comes to a wonderful conclusion as well. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: December 11, 2003 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, great story so far, but I hadn't expected anything else from you ;-) Please update soon !! =D
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Reviewed By: kat8125 On: December 11, 2003 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...I am one of those who are guilty in not reviewing everything I read...well; all the good ones anyways. But I have changed that in the last few days. I really like your stories and have been a big fan since I started reading DBZ Fanfiction. Kepe up the good work girl :)
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Reviewed By: Dark_bulma69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If i could put 100 on the overall rating I would!! That was the best fic I read in a long ass time. You so need to write more!!!! Hope to hear from you soon!!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 13:21 CST
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I dunno what you were worried about. this was an excellent chapter. ^__^
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Reviewed By: mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 13:20 CST
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I dunno what you were worried about. this was an excellent chapter. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe On: November 28, 2003 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Worried? You were worried??? What on Earth for? It was brilliant, Ember... just like everything else you write. I love it when you write B/V interaction. You have such a gift for it. I also love that you can get away without the lemon when you want to. That is a testament of how great your writing is... you can do it if you want, but your stories are never dependant on it.
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Reviewed By: ch 10 On: November 27, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Can't wait for the next one. And boy, isn't Yamcha going to be pissed when he sees what's going on!!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ember, you've done it again. I think that every one of your chapters is a masterpiece within itself. I can't wait for you next one.
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 21:07 CST
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Oh man, how many updates did I miss??? I don't have anything specific to say other than I love it, all of it. Yamcha spying on Bulma, the smoking on the balcony, Vegeta going to find her. I can't wait to see how that turns out!! ^__^
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