| "Everything Happens For A Reason" Reviews/Comments [ 156 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: March 19, 2004 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was a great chapter. And I think you did the right thing in making Vegeta be so cold to Bulma. I mean, if he acted all nice to her, that just wouldn't seem right. It wouldn't fit in the DBZ episodes. Cause when Frieza comes, Vegeta acts like he doesn't want anything to do with her. Even after Trunks is born he still acts like that. I think you should keep that in mind. And I think you _have_ done that so far =) So keep up the good work and update soon =D
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Title: ai yi yi yummy chapter!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: March 18, 2004 21:49 CST
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Oh please add me to yr mailing list. That last chapter rang like bells! Vegeta positively glowered with all that best Vegeta stuff! Good choices, whatever they were--you wrote a dynamic chapt 14! debbiechan shalombayit@juno.com
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Reviewed By: bimbo_ditz@yahoo.co.uk On: February 29, 2004 03:49 CST
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well done!!!! great work!!!!!!! again! we would b well happy and greatfuil if u could add us to your mailing list, our email address is: bimbo_ditz@yahoo.co.uk thankyaz!!!!!! byeeeeeeeeeee byeeeeeeeeez and surfs up! update again soon! :0)
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - If I logged in it wouldn't matter On: February 28, 2004 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate you, do you know that? I am getting damn sick and tired of leaving you glowing reviews. You are too talented for your own good... and it's sickening to us poor common folk! Wonderful chapter, sexy and intense.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful addition to your library of perfection. Vegeta was perfect; didn't find him too sappy at all. And it really took a lot of balls ( literally! Lol!!) for Bulma to do that. I just love the way you write. I pulls me in and won't let go until the chapter ends...and even then I don't want it to. Until next time...
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Title: what you're best at!
Reviewed By: debbie chan On: February 22, 2004 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that you're known for the inventive settings you drop B&V into, but I way prefer the emotional contexts you put them in! The psychological drama here is better than the football stadium. Your best story, imv, is the lemon-less one on fanfic.net (R?) It was the first story my nitpicky, holier than thou (well, in my worst moods--before coffee) pro writer self felt compelled to leave feedback on--and I must say, I'm such a DBZ freak, I've read them all in the past year! You're terrific!! Debbie chan
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 22, 2004 05:17 CST
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plz plz plz update this soon!!!!!!! the alst chappy woz well fune, lol u could just imagine it at a real footy nmatch couldnt ya lol btw we from england 2 know how ya feel bout sayign soccer lol well update soon and nice work bye byez surfs up!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, it took me so long to finally get to read this, but it was sooo worth it!! That was one of the most interesting a action packed chapters ever! I love your work so much. I was wondering if you'd want to help beta some of my work...if you had the chance. Having the best help me out would really bring my confidence levels up. I love you girl!!
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Reviewed By: bimnbo n ditz On: February 09, 2004 03:56 CST
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please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lauryn R On: February 05, 2004 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSALUTELY LOVE THIS FIC! please update soon though, because i am going to loose the net real soon and i really really really wanna find out what happens! hehe keep up the good work matey! bye!
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Reviewed By: 664 On: February 04, 2004 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good keep em coming.
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Reviewed By: bimbop n ditz On: February 04, 2004 13:06 CST
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plz plz update soon this fic rocks!!! we cant wait 4 b and v 2 actually get togetha yamcha deserves all he gets!! he eh eh bring on the bulma and vegeta!!!! ^_^ SURFS UP!
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - Carla On: February 02, 2004 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD! I would have LOVED to be at THAT game! Awesome chapter... Vegeta learned an important lesson indeed!
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Reviewed By: nona On: January 30, 2004 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving this so far~ this is probably the best B/V fic I'm reading right now. Wow ~ Veggie going streaking? I'd definitely pay to see that! So what's the next lesson in store? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: January 21, 2004 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, personally, I would rather see VEGETA streak naked across the staduim... but seriously, another awesome chapter!
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