| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 20:27 EDT
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Beautiful ending. IT all tied up so well!!!
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Title: Holy!
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen -not logged in- On: October 17, 2008 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! I do love the story. I do think that any waiting was worth it. It was really good! Happy wedding for you as well!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 11:17 EDT
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This was really good! I liked it so much! This is such a great story! I'm glad that you managed to quickly put in all of the other characters at the end. InuYasha was funny! I love it when that kinda stuff happens! This was such a fabulous story! HAPPY WRITINGS!!!
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Reviewed By: beckyducky not logged in On: October 17, 2008 09:27 EDT
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OMG I LOVED THE ENDING!!!! I ABSOLUTELY MISSED THE STORY!!! Congratulations on marriage and also sorry for your loss. But overall a wonderful fic. I think i would have liked a bit more adjusting on Kagome's part (as in adjusting to Sesshoumaru's demonyness...) but creative license was taken and therefore it's your choice. I must say it did not detract from the overall tone of the fic. I loved Chapter 39 when it was the story retold. Omigosh i thought i was going to cry. It was like a flashback from Tales from the House of the Moon. With the lord and the priestess again (except it was a princess this time...) so i was hoping that the little girl in the last chapter was Kag's and sess's daughter...but it was rin and she was happy. The growth of sesshoumaru is very apparent in the fic (which is love!) i loved the last line as well. But again - i think a bit more of Kagome in the ending was needed. (Please dont take this as a flame) I hope you continue A Kiss for the Prince. I havent read 1000 yet. But am going to. Just needed to review before i die of non expression. Everything came around full circle and i'm happy it ended. (What happened to that one last lemon? lol) okay...so sayonara!!
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224isnotloggedin On: October 17, 2008 07:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, I have really enjoyed this story. Congrats on finishing it. Throws streamers and does a happy dance.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 04:43 EDT
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I"m happy! I got my happy ending! COngrats on the upcoming nuptuals, I'm sorry about your grandmother, and I hope that life moves on to bring you much joy and laughter.
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Reviewed By: Kira Delano [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 03:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FREAKING LOVE IT! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! I will admit, for a minute I thought the little girl was the futuristic daughter of Sessy and Kag. Oh well, one can only hope/imagine/whatever.
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Reviewed By: Yushi On: October 17, 2008 01:51 EDT
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Good god, no updates for an eternity, and then suddenly, BAM, all done! Geez, I feel a little deflated now. Still, it was incredibly frickin' CUTE, all the way to the end. Nice one! I'm a little disappointed by the ending, though... No lemons... kukuku Congrats on your marriage, btw! XD
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for taking the time to update. I've waited for so long to find out what happened. You scared me there for a minute, but I'm glad you went with the happy ending. Congrats on getting married and I'm very sorry about your grandmother. I hope everything is going good for you now. Thanks again for the update, and I hope to see a new story from you soon.
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Reviewed By: Kira Delano [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously could have cried. I was listening to the song and reading at the same time, and wow. So sad, but a necessary ending. Very well done. Could have been spared the sex scenes, but a very well put together concept. Good job.
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Title: NOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: Daydreamer999 On: October 16, 2008 23:39 EDT
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OMG so sweet!!!! But it can't end there!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 19:55 EDT
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O__________O if you take until next april to update my heart will bleed DDDD8 GAHHHHH CLIFFY!!!!! DX I too saw beauty and the beast right there XD totally gahhhhhh DXXX i dont want him to die
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 19:29 EDT
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OMG! The ending of this chapter... Beauty and the beast just showed up! I swear! But I liked it a whole lot! I can't believe that Sesshoumaru was going to leave her! I'm glad that both of the bad guys are dead, Kagome was awesome! I wonder why there wasn't an emergency button anywhere though. I'm sure that a guy like Sesshoumaru would of had one for a girl like Kagome. Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 17:56 EDT
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Gah! It has been SOO long. I seriously almost started sobbing there at the end. Update soon, please please please please PLEASE!! :O
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 15:35 EDT
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YAY!! you're back and writing on this fic again! Grrrr, I don't want Sess to die. LOL. I want my happy ever after, but then again I always want that. I have fiath that whatever you write, it will be very good and I will love it.
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