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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YAY you updated. I am so happy, I look forward to these chapters an insane amount. It's like getting to see someone you love after them being away for months. I sooooo can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Really?
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 00:28 EDT
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So there may be about 15 more chapters then? Woot! That's great...then again I don't want it to end cuz it's really good ^ ^ I can't wait for the next update and thumbs up on the great work you are doing on the fanfic ^ ~
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 16:11 EDT
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Sooo... when is Fluffy going to tell Kags he's Chance? Kinda a big thing... and you know there will be like three chapters devoted to their fight and reconciliation once he's honest w/her about it... and then Naraku will get out of jail and then big dramatic scene where Kags is taken prisoner... so get to it already! Not to question your almighty plan, but I hate being left hanging!
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Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really like this story! I stumbled across the fanart Youkai Yume did for you and she linked to it so I had to check it out. Glad I did! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 14:03 EDT
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I'm glad that Sess got to see how much he means to Kagome. It was really funny how everyone wouldn't let Kagome talk. It would have annoyed the hell out of me. If that happens in the next chapter when she goes shopping, or anytime in the future... can you have her blow up on them, 'cause that's is how I, and I'm sure many others, would have reacted. This is another great chapter. I love your story so much. Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Soleil Chev [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 11:48 EDT
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so cruel...write more! you cant leave it at that. and when is kagome going to figure out about Sesshomaru? not just that he is her dog, but that he and inuyasha are demons?
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I can't remember if I've reviewed before but I would like to say that this fic is wonderful. Although, I do miss the cute little convos at the end of the chappies. I love the play like feeling to it. It was sooooo much fun. Ah well, we can't always get what we want. Anywho, great chappie and can't wait until the next one. I will try my damnest though.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: laa_girl ( nsi) On: June 01, 2007 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You cease to amaze me! great twist! KEEP GOING!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 22:05 EDT
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loves the new chap..update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 20:53 EDT
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Chapter 30: That's very nice of Sesshomarou! Is Inuyasha falling in love with Kagome too?
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 18:19 EDT
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"Please, sir, I want some more." Seriously. I did a little happy dance when I saw you'd posted another chapter. Not that I got up or anything. Just wiggled around in my chair happily. The writing is very well done. The plotline is original. You're keeping the characters true to form in this original universe. And best of all, it's not completely predictable. I'm eagerly awaiting what will happen next because I honestly have no idea. Plus, of course, I really want to see what kind of punishment is doled out to your creepy Naraku. And how the hell is it all going to be resolved? Who knows? Only you. So... please... more?
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 14:38 EDT
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OMG....great chapter...Sess is a softie when it comes to her. But why would Inuyasha think it's a bad idea?
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 01:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! I loved it! Great Chapter! I thought it strange that a person in your story has the same name as a person in my story. Small world, or maybe not? Haha, just kidding; but really though....how did you come up with Shiori? I'd love to know, cause I read it somewhere on some site. But I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Thanks so much!!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 17:51 EDT
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I am absolutely addicted to reading this fanfic >< I can't get enough of the story and I am overjoyed that you updated again. Thanks a bunch and I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon please ^ ~ thanks a bunch!
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Title: Chapter 20-29
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters. Update again soon. Can't wait to read who it was that Naraku was talking to,if Sesshomaru admits his love for Kagome, and if Kagome ever realizes that Sesshomaru and Chance are one and the same.
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