| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: May 22, 2007 17:14 EDT
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You know that you have a vested interest in a character when you spend 1/2 of the chapter wondering where he went and if he was ok. The fire was terrible. 1) Where was Chance when Naraku came into the house? 2) How did he get out? 3)Why did he turn human tonight, just when Kagome needed him? 4) Will Naraku get charged with the fire, too? 5)Who was Naraku on the phone with? Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for writing for us.
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Reviewed By: luvluvalicia On: May 10, 2007 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was great! I don't think I can wait for your next update, I'm going crazy!!
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Reviewed By: Kage No Neko(not loged in) On: May 09, 2007 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as usual.
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:23 EDT
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Well of COURSE we want a better summary! But we also want higher wages, lower rent and peace on earth but you don't hear us complaining about tha--- Oh. Right. But now we know the truth behind sneaky Naraku and the fact that he's working for someone else! Dun dun dun! And what's up with Sesshoumaru turning human a lot more often and during the full moon eh? Some spells starting to weaken even more? Oh! I completely forgot about the guy who can imitate him. Who are we really seeing. Hm. Lovely chapter as always! Can't wait for the nice cute little bow that you will wrap this all up with...eventually. *sits in the corner & tries to wait patiently..gives up and paces*
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:08 EDT
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Another chapter fabulously done. Sess knows now how much Kagome truly loves chance. Which is good. Naraku is finally out of the Picture, also nice. You have no idea how much I love your story! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: gradualwisd0m [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:38 EDT
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Wonderful! I didn't see that coming! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon~Not signed in On: May 08, 2007 17:03 EDT
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Latest Chapter: Amazing! OMG Amazing! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter! I mean, Sesshomarou's such an awesome guy, and, OMG! I can't wait. *hyperventilates, jumps off her chair, and crashes*
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 11:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this update! So much that happened... It leaves room for so much new things to happen. Ah, and I bet that the "Sesshoumaru" that called was that impersonater-guy. It was a very smart move to add him to the story. :) Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 09:11 EDT
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yes, definitely want a better summary... So I thought Fluffy had decided to put some distance between himself and Kags? So when is he gonna realize he's in love with her and spill the truth? Wheeeennnnn????? yes, yes i am impatient!
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Reviewed By: luvluvalicia On: April 29, 2007 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! You are such a fantastic writer!! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you so much for this spiffy fic ;).
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Reviewed By: gradualwisd0m [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been enjoying this story thoroughly. I can't wait for your next update!!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 04:53 EDT
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Mah! Please do continue, with more Sesshoumaru, and more of Sesshoumaru's demon! I like how you made Souta so smart, that was pretty cool, I have no idea how that stuffs would be hooked up, OR managed myself!
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Reviewed By: Kage No Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 07:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter . . .
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 11:25 EDT
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Gotta love the filler. Anywhoodle... my b-day's in May too! Woo hoo! I hate colds... sniffles and popping ears and sore throats... grrr... Update soon?
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 20:17 EDT
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ohh, next chappie sounds exciting. can't wait :)
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