| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 12:20 CST
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Sorry i didnt review! I just noticed that you updated!!! -_-U Anyway, it's great, and I thought you wrote those flashback/memory things prety well. And poor Aten!!! Those mean kids suck!!! lol keep writing Emily
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Reviewed By: Valea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off i really wish that i could log in and get to this page so itd be a signed review but it wotn work because this wtory doesnt show up on your page. But to more important things that I have elft in my past a long time ago, I had a learning disablity and I couldnt read in the 2nd grade and I could write my name in kindgarden, but I got out of there, eventually and now I go to a private school, so I can relate to Aten, so im rooting for him, despite allt he kids that are very ignoirant! *growls at the little boys who are probaly having 3 somes anyway* Yes anyway, wont be mean, but yeah it was a cool chapter, facing reality with your kids...and trying to think about what could Aku be up to...dun dun dun!!!! (And I would type in my accoutn name CynicalspiritValea but it says that name is already used and its mine!!!! ok im done complaining now)
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: December 04, 2003 13:50 CST
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awwwwww, poor Aten, that is so sad.....
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal (not logged in O_____o) On: December 04, 2003 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh this is just getting better and better! such painful memories ;-; anyway, keep it up it's great work!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: December 02, 2003 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lets burn Aku! *has an angry mob behind her* lol anyway! good stuff...its no fair...hes getting all of his energy so easily! but anycrud i thought yugi's pep talk was really sweet...i remember when i got teased by the other kids...even tough i know its bad, cant wait til aku posses him so he can kick the other kids butts! excuse my language! lol..ok the bad is out of my system now, looking forward to robbie and aten kawiiness! yay!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal ^.^ On: December 02, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AKU IS SOOOOOOOOOOO EVIL!!!!!!!!!!! But why would he wanna do any harm to Seto or Joey? And what's up with that email I got about your other story called 'My Brother's Keeper'? That totally gave away what happens in Aten's future with Robbie!!! Not that it's bad... I reckon Aten will be HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT when he's older!! I agree with Bwubewwy Sugar Pwincess... WE NEED ANZU BASHING!! By the way... do you know any good websites that I could find some Seto/Joey yaoi pics?? I can't find any at all!!! Anyway, keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 30, 2003 12:28 CST
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tha was the cutest thing i ever read!!! Umi, Aten, Aria and Robbie were so adorable!! *bounces up and down and laughs like a maniac* maybe I should stay outta the sugar stash, ne? lol... wait a sec... is there gonna be Anzu bashing? Hope so, I love anzu bashing... almost as much as....... Yaoi and sugar high.... ummmmm ALMOST O.o
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal ^_^ On: November 30, 2003 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! That was the cutest thing ever!! Umi sounds like a cute lil kid... I've got a couple of chibis in my other story who I'm thinking about having them start preschool! Keep up the great work BG! Eric is a bully... poor Aten *hugz* I hope he stops being bullied!
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Title: I only read your fanfics, everybody elses stink like Anzu's underarm.
Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu basher On: November 29, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Pacing in front of the screen* Two more days.... just two more..........ARGHH!!!! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen!........... And this is for you... * gives you a little plushie of yourself...*...... now I worship you too..... * grovels*...To change the subject completly.... I'm going to call myself Seto lover and Bakura worshiper for a while..... I still hate Anzu though.... did you see the episode today? I love it when Joey says," As far as pep talks go, that was your worst"...... then she had to go and yell " We're with you!" ....:P..... I keep on thinking that she'll pull out a scorpian and chuck it down Seto's pants... just like Fluffy....... I miss him...... but I would eat him if I could...* grabs Malik's Mellinium Rod* I'll get you for hurting MY Seto..... Joey's Seto.... Seto's Seto.... whatever.... I had M's again...... Please update early on Tuesday! Wait..... Tuesday????!?!?! ARGGHHH!!!! 3 days till updates....* runs off and cries in a corner, while hugging Plushies of Malik and Seto.*
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Reviewed By: valea On: November 28, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh that was so mean! poor aten! THe world needs to learn to accept artistic differences man i tell ya! But at least He got a new friend and that was coool! and then it maeks me happy! Make Bakura sende what-cha-ma-call-it to the dark and cold place! Hell send them all to dark and cold place! ok my eyes hurt...im sick...this made me feel oh so very much better,later, check back on tues.! Yay!!!!!!!
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Title: So cute!
Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu basher On: November 28, 2003 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Aten! I hope Marik goes to that kids house one night.... and un-plugs his night light! .... I had to many M's today....:) Updates on Tuesday?!?!?! NOOOOOO.......I can't wait that long..... THAT'S THREE WHOLE DAYS!!! * sniff* .....Way to many M's.....
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: November 25, 2003 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
* squeels and hands Malik plushies galore* Thank you, thank you, thank you! * wips out some paper* Let the record show, I am also a Seto hugger and Bakura worshiper.* chucks some Kaiba plushies at random people* :) Thanks again! Your fics just keep getting better!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: November 25, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omfg that was so hilaroius! I feel speical! That reminds me of numerous things that have gone on in my house...very funny I can totally imagine it man trying to go to sleep, if only Bkaura had gone int he secodn time and like sepertaed them. *laughs* btu yeah that was so great and adding Aria into the mix waking you up every hour On the hour! Please let Aten be okay! *crosses fingers!*...new friend you say? And its so great, I got M&M's today and i have now oficaly started to call them M's without even thinking about it, ahh...funny world, no one else got it but it was fun in my mind!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 25, 2003 20:18 CST
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*falls over laughing* Poor Ryou and Bakura...
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww poor Bakura and Ryou! It's horrible not getting a good night's sleep, particularly with children who are up and down all night! Will Hayden be going to the same school as Aten and Aria? Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: I_HATE_ANZU ^_^ On: November 24, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing it was kawaii and funny your my favorite author update soon ~I hate Anzu~
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: November 23, 2003 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Marik gave Aria my present... YEAH!... no more M's for me.... or mini marshmallows... or caramel... :) Could you have a scene where Bakura showes Aria how to steal the Mallinium Puzzle? I just really want Yami to lose it... for awhile at least... :) Can't wait to see the chibis at school!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal ^_^ On: November 23, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU FOR THE BATH SCENE!!!! Malik is so hot. I'm looking forward to seeing Aten and Aria's first day at school... no doubt Aria will keep the other kids in line! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: valea On: November 23, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Cuteness! I forgot to say....ice cream cake but oh well, I enjoyed very much so. I liek how you made Aten and Hayden so close, even if Araia is being a meanie, but yay! lol *smiles* it was all good...damn aku, stay way away! make aten like aria and have him tell whats going on!!! wahhhh....yeah hehe...
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 23, 2003 14:14 CST
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Alright!!! Kawaii-ness of Aten, Aria, AND Hayden.... cho kawaii^^. Kidsgo to school soon, huh? I'm looking forward to it. Jaa ne
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 13:54 CST
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omg! I've been reading the whole story, but I'm not sure that I reviewed, (opps) But when I saw you put this next part and I was so excited! plz continue! Its great! ^_______________^ Emily
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