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 Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2004 16:13 CST
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God, Yami is freaking pissing my off! He's such a meanie-head!*mumbles* Stupid, compassionless bastard. He can't hold a grudge that long, can he?
 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: February 16, 2004 15:01 CST
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poor bakura-kun...nooooooooo! not even a good bye! cruel fate, *grabs yami by the neck and says: u evil creature. sends yami to anzu's mind. that'll teach him to trap bakura* ...poor aten, he'd need the strength of aria's nightmare dragon to ever be strong...poor crying chibi.... and if its not seto, hayden, or aten i give up... i guess the_great_bakurasgirl will have to write it in
 Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2004 10:45 CST
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o_o ...Yami´s no better than the villains. *twitches* Why is Yugi with him again? Because of the sex? Because they´re two halves of a whole? *wallows on the ground* Damn him. -.- *blinks* I knew that the kids were Darkness and Light, sorry for...seeming stupid. *cough* English is my third language, so I don´t always come across the way I want to. ^_^;; *merfs* I still think that Yugi should dump Yami...and throw him out of the house....which of course then could lead to Yami sending -Yugi- and the entire gang to the Shadow Realm and...well yeah. >_> Damn it all! *shakes fist* Oh! Beautiful lemon! *huggles it close* XD Can´t wait to see what happens next. ^___^
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper  On: February 16, 2004 06:43 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Poor Ryou... let's seal Yugi in the Puzzle and see how Yami likes it! * pounces on the trembling Hikari* Guess what I got for Valentines Day? A giant, purple..... MONKEY!!!!!!!!!! * hugs it tightly* I hope you had a good one too!.. :)
 Reviewed By: Maruke  On: February 14, 2004 17:05 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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That's cute, that's just too cute. Bakura's little outburst was HILARIOUS, for some reason or other. Most little kids think babies are pets, it's pretty funny.
 Reviewed By: Valea  On: February 13, 2004 23:39 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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well valtentines isnt here yet but for whenever you update bleh...HAPPY VDAY! Aten my boy! Im so sorrry! (my puppy is back safe and sound now if only aten could be!) I love you robbie! THe cource of makig everything better! *content sigh* That was the cuteest thing..he high light in eveything...theyre so cute and chibilike it makes me get all giggly! The love is in the air! *_* hehe!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2004 17:40 CST
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Ohh, that last chapter was so sweet!! Right before Valintines day too. I just kept drooling over that last scene with Aten and Robbie. Aww...*eyes slowly and sickly mutate into disgusting hearts* Even though they're young, they're cute together. I'm glad Aten found Robbie. ^_^
 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: February 13, 2004 16:51 CST
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aww chibi cuteness SQUEE! wouldn't it be freaky if when every time aten returns to the shadow realm he transfoms in to the monster, but when he leaves he returns to normal *spooky* poor bakura...i know it is getting kinda used, but bakura is my fav. char.... by the way hayden wouldn't be the father of aria's child would he?
 Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2004 08:46 CST
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Aria wants lots of babies... XDXDXD *is trying to imagine how her parents will react to her getting (unexpectedly) pregnant* Oi... o_o *snickers* Aria has quite the habit of running around naked. ~_~ It´s incredible how different her and Aten are from each other, very much like light and darkness...although it seems that the light gets all the tough luck. x_x *melts* Awwwwwwww, by Goddess, Robbie and Aten just scream 'KODAK MOMENT!' ^___^
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper  On: February 13, 2004 07:47 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh... Malik... duh.... Poor Bakura..... now Aria's talking about babies.... great.... and poor Aten..... "Mine".... ughh.... when Malik sees that ( normal Malik) HE'S going to have to go to the hospital.... Aww.... Robbie kissed Aten... :) * gives you a Robbie Plushie, holding a little heart that says, " Happy Valentines Day!"* Great chapter!
 Reviewed By: Maruken  On: February 12, 2004 22:34 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Surprised Aten isn't dead. Which monster would he be? NOT ANZU!! You're right, he HAS been through more than enough torture. How can Yami just sit on his lazy fat ass and WATCH?!! Marik's gone into a mantra now, will seeing Aten snap him out of it?
 Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2004 21:06 CST
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*is a whimp when it comes to chibi angstyness* o_o I was actually shaking when Aten returned to the real world and there was all the screaming and panicking and crying and-*chokes* BREATHE, GIRL! x_x Dear me, I loved the Tristan & Aria angst/fluff, Tristan´s so very underrated. Why do most people hate him?! *sulks* He´s sweet, always there for his friends and for Pete´s sake, LEAVE HIS HAIR ALONE PEOPLE!It´s not as if it´s anymore unusual than Yugi´s or Yami´s. >_> *cough* ... *worships this line* -->'Aria closed her eyes. "Ra, don't let my brudder seep."' So touching. ;_; *cringe* Damn, Aten must be in a lot of pain. o_O *twitches*...*imagines Aten in a good -good- place* Special scene? *eyes light up, big smile* OMG, it´s Christmas! XDXD Well, it feels like it anyway. ~_~ You´re doing such a wonderful job, keep it up! *huggles...runs away*
 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: February 12, 2004 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
srry havn't reviewd in a while, the website said there weren't any new chapters >_< poor bakura, some one needs to spring him soon *runs over to give bakura some ice cubes and check on the newly installed AC*... poor aten, *writes unfaithful guardian down on hit list next to yami* i hope aten gets better...poor marik, poor malik *adds aku to the hit list too*, keep up the good work great_writer_bakurasgirl
 Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2004 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohh.. that was an interesting chapter... I feel so bad for Aten. Why does everyone like him? Especially the old man (Steven)? *contemplates why middly ages men during their mid-life crisis are so perverted* Even though that chapter wasn't an action packed one, I was really strung on it. I'm just so sad... God, I'm a freakieeee case. *unenthusiasticly* Happines.
 Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2004 15:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Dun dun dun...Here I am, the unreliable revewiwer. Great CHAPPIES but I freaked out when Aten was in all that pain... o.< Other than that...It was good. lol Chau! Emily
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