| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 16, 2004 20:45 CDT
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What did Aku mean when he said he was meant to be someone's yami in 12 years time? Is that in the future, or the past? Marik needs to control his temper and boy, can Miranda banter! WAHOO! She's becoming one of my favorite characters! She fits right in with everyone else. Otoga, heh heh.
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Reviewed By: Broken Times On: April 15, 2004 22:01 CDT
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S'ok... Just hurt a little that day. But Anyways, on with my review. Isn't Ed the guy who was Jessica's pimp? Or am I mistaking him for someone else... and what ever happened to that lady Bakura helped in your story other story. She was like... related to Tom C. or something... She seemed nice enough
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Reviewed By: goldensea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea!!! You update! I'm so happy you update. I love all of your fanfiction. Keep up the good work girl! It gets better every time. Cool!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 15, 2004 14:39 CDT
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Hmm...you woulda thought that they wouldnt forget something to major like i dunno..the ring! oo noo! *runs around* theyre gonna die! NOOO! *gives them yami cold medacine, all except yami* yay! and just for me, i though robbie and aten were so cute! dont me scuured marik! *hugs* o.o;; *run away in fear of being sent to some cold dark place* XD Seto...kick ass dad! woootonnng!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 15, 2004 09:48 CDT
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My Computer messed up.... :( I meant: * Blushing furiously* Oh Dear..... Maybe Aten and Robbie shouldn't have done that.... If Marik had a heart... he would have had a heart attack! Poor Ryou! He lost the ring! Ohhhh O-O I hate Aku!!!!Ohhhh....O-O.... Aku yami...... Cooooool.... :) And Seto still Rules!!!! I love how Hayden trusts him! Awww..... he's so cute! Poor Hayden.... :( and Joey.... :(..... He hit Moki!.... But he's still cute!!!!! Amazing Chapter!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 15, 2004 09:46 CDT
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Aku!!!! Poor Ryou! He lost the ring! Ohhhh O-O Ak* Blushing furiously* Oh Dear..... Maybe Aten and Robbie shouldn't have done that.... If Marik had a heart... he would have had a heart attack! I hate Aku!!!!Ohhhh....O-O.... Aku yami...... Cooooool.... :) And Seto still Rules!!!! I love how Hayden trusts him! Awww..... he's so cute! Poor Hayden.... :( and Joey.... :(..... He hit Moki!.... But he's still cute!!!!! Amazing Chapter!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 13, 2004 22:59 CDT
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*sings* Im a barbie girl..in a barbie world! ...no..not really. SETO ROCKS MY SOCKS!!! he's the best...!!! buying everyone stuff..not that money solves evrything..but its all sweet and everything. *ponders* i wonder what the significance of finding marik and bakura's remains are.... O.o ...poor aten..he goes threw way to much...u.u
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Reviewed By: Broken Times On: April 13, 2004 20:08 CDT
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Ne, BG, that was so happy-sad. *Sniffle* So sad... merrrrr, Boyfriend died today. On his birfday, too. I call to say happi birfday and his mom told me ;_; I feel so alone
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Title: mmm
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Barbie world lol. nice chapter. oh I did update Star child.
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Reviewed By: thunderchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 10:23 CDT
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Whoa...a dead Marik and Bakura and an ALIVE MARIK AND BAKURA????AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!Just kidding.That was a great chapter.Aw, Seto is so nice, getting them a house...hey, couldn't he just have bought a house for sale so he wouldn't force those people out of their home?And I thought he was smart...well, good chapter!!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 13, 2004 09:14 CDT
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GO SETO!!!!! *clings tightly to his shirt, nuzzling into his... chest.... drool....* Attack of the Barbies!.... * Gulp*... at least Aria's happy.... Seto bought them a house! Awww.... here!* gives you a "Seto Plushie with Kind Face Hugging Crying Ryou Plushie"!!* So good!!!! Keep up the ULTIMATE work!!!!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Rezyra Sugamori On: April 12, 2004 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would just like to say that your fanfics are awesome!!! I manage to read all six of your fanfics, from Servant Yamis to Hostile Takeover, in just 3wks!! I've got alot of time on my hands ^^;; I haven't had a chance to read Nanny Bakura yet, but I'm workin on it. I do have an idea for your next sequel: Since you mentioned that oone of the yamis will be a victim of the Yami Virus, maybe Yami Yugi will be the victim and the other two yamis have to bring him back to stop the virus because he is a key to ending it. Of course they aren't pleased with the fact of bringing the jerk back. And maybe Marik could have a long lost sister who taught Marik everything he knows about the fine art of maiming! This is just an idea I had. I can choose to not use it. I won't mind. Keep up the great work and can't wait for the next update! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 11, 2004 10:32 CDT
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My God!Yami you..you.. ASS! ASS! ASS! ASS! You're even MORE of an ass than I thought!! Sorry about missing an update, parental troubles. Poor Bakura. Mirada is so sweet, she's a GREAT original character. You REALLY did a good job on her.And what about the Ring that Aku was sealed in?
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Reviewed By: thunderchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 09:34 CDT
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Cool chapter!!!Yami should rot in the Shadow Realm for burning the house...death to Yami!!!HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!Um...sorry bout that.
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 11, 2004 08:31 CDT
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...... You were right!..... no one really listened.... chapter 70......o_o...... Poor Aria! That fuckin' Yami almost killed her!... whoops.... Well he deserved it!!! He tried to... umm.... rape... Bakura too!!!.... why can't they just, tell Yugi and he'd smash 'da Puzzle!..... *Sigh*... At least they weren't doing IT... then, they wouldn't even have clothes........ So sad.... But sooooooo good!!!!! Yeah updates.... on Tuesday?!?!?..... x_x
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