| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 00:16 CST
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OMGOMGOMG!!! O_O I can´t believe that Aria said -that- in her sleep! *flails arms wildly* Awwww, more sibling fluffness... *melts into a satisfied puddle of goo* ^___^ Holy cow, I loved the Aria potty scene! It was so cute. *giggles about the whole 'positive reinforcement thing'* Waaaaaiiiiii, Aria loves running around naked! XDXDXD *can just imagine her doing that when she´s older* XDXD OMG! That scene where Aria mentions her vagina and Bakura gets all freaky is so precious! *snickers* A shotgun and shovel indeed. ~_~ Oh, I really liked that scene between Aria and Gabby. *nodnod* They´re so sweet together. That line with "I've been looking all around the wide, wide world for you!", was just adorable. *cackles* And Aria misses Umi! ^____^ *squeals* Chibi yami vs. Daddy yami! *rolls around laughing* That was a freakin wonderful scene! An angry Aria is simply the coolest. *nodnodnod* This was definitely a most awesome chapter, arigatou! *bows deeply to bakurasgirl*
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 12, 2004 21:54 CST
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'Cocksucker'......... I an SO glad Hayden wasn't there.... the handcuff thing already scared him... poor little guy...:( Hope he becomes... well.... LESS scared..... :(... And I wanna Captain Happy Ass too!... * chibi pout*... but only if 'Kura was running the cash register... :)....... once again... I must say it..... They're all dooooooooomed!... Or at least Marik, Kaiba, and Joey are..doomed... ....I wish Yami was 'Seaman Cheesy Weiner'... :) Or Mr. Happy Pickle... :) That would NEVER get old... :) Unless he was forced to marry Anzu... that's always been my dream... hehehe... little demented, air-head, Chibi Yamis... :)
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Reviewed By: Valea On: March 12, 2004 13:34 CST
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Awww Joey!!! I am relaly glad he's hoepfully unde the influence of alchol...or else! But yay the first part of the chapter was so cute, and meaningful! aten is mine! Muwhahahaha! Anywho....so next chapter we can oly hope that well joey gets better? And iliked the face own with Aria and Bakura ^-^ coolness....*sniffles and gives Joey a cookie with calm down sleppiness stuff* O.o
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor Seto. Poor Joey. now I"m going to cry. ok I"m ok. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Princess On: March 10, 2004 20:38 CST
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Oh no! Joey! How could you doooooo that? JOOOOOOEEEEEEYYYYYY!!!! What's Seto going to think....
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Reviewed By: Valea On: March 10, 2004 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude first part of the chappie! OMG! Wonderufl lemon! and also the dark angel remidns me of my nickname (dark mistress) soo whoot whoot on that! ^_^ *drools over Ryou and Bakura's sexiness* Gahhhhhhh, theyre all together again and its kickass and lovely! i mean yeah man, that lemon was super long...back to back to back! *big goofy grin*... *sniffles* someone find joey and put him on a mlik carton!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 10, 2004 07:26 CST
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That was THE longest Lemon..... e v e r..... wow... * giant chibi eyes*.......... Poor Joey! * Throws money at him* ... ..... .... ....zzzzz....zzzzz...Wha?!?! ... sorry.... to early.... .. .....went to bed at Midnight....... must * yawn* fight a Munchkin..... ( seriously... In a way I do..... )..... don' wanna fight an evil Munchkin.... wan' sleep...... ..... ....zzzzzzzzz... :)
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Reviewed By: Valea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 00:07 CST
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and paste this review: Thank you! *jumps around and dances shaking my butt all over the place* lol. *snickers* Ryou said vagina. Okay more seriousness, ryou and aten moments are so sweet! And now theyre kinda happy again and there's going to be a lemon next chappie and *squeals* i feel really happy *priases her* though im sick i prise you and im happyful, though i hope that aten can forgive malik in time *corsses fingers* ^-^
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 14:41 CST
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*squeals all giddy alike* Sibling bond fluffness! ^___^ XD *loves Aria&Aten moments* You used your wife´s coffee line! XDXDXD Aa, I absolutely loved the whole Aria bath scene. ~_~ I love the fact that she´s the only girl in the house. *nodnod* So...Ryou´s the only completely gay one? o_o Makes me wonder what Aten will be, since we already know that he and and Robbie... *cough* OMG! That means Aria will be the only straight one! XDXD Unless you have some lil lady waiting for her at the sidelines... *shifty eyes* ^_^ Aww, Malik will have a hard time getting back into the family. x_x *cheers* Loverly chapter(s)! *nodnodnod* I was going crazy wondering who or what would save Aria from Aku-Joey. *sighs happily* I lurve this ficcy soooo much.
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 09, 2004 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeahhhhhhhhhh lemonnnnnnnn!!! * throws Lemonade at people* :) Good chapter! Ummm what did Aten mean when he said "taptin"? Napkin... Captain... I couldn't figure it out..... to early to think... :) That was a good chapter.... EVIL CLIFFY! But goooooooood!.... I wish I could be invisible......*grabs the Millennium Ring and runs to KaibaCorp* Kaiba had better be in the shower! Or asleep.... one gust of "wind"..... and he'd be mine... ")
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Reviewed By: Valea On: March 09, 2004 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking that idea for the sequel, but anywho *sniffles* Joey!!!! Stop drinking! *trys to pry the bottle from his dead lifeless fingers* (meet the parents) i liked your moment though with mokuba and hayden..he's finally trustuing him somewhat and it was cute and made me happy and yayness!*half smile* Otherwise im happy, now can they make the connection of malik and aku *crosses fingers* justice migth be served*does little dance* O.o *hugs her* yay!
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Reviewed By: Dark Sapphire On: March 08, 2004 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've worked your magic yet again! I just love it! I feel so sorry for all the cast though! *Sniffs* Please keep Aria safe for me!! I just love her & her nightmare dragon! Hehehe!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 08, 2004 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you SURE about that? I've got some pretty vicious and horny Baku and Ryou and Marik an Malik plushies! I really do! Neeways the interaction between Hayden and Seto was REALLY cute! Poor Joey. FINALLY! Ryou knows everything happened because of Aku! Aku really IS the epitome of all evil! How on EARTH do you defeat the epitome of ALL EVIL?! Mixed with Ryou's dad as well?!! IT SOUNDS IMPOSSIBLE!! REALLY IT DOES! YAY!! I can't WAIT for more!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! It's soooo addicting, like a drug, like caffine! CAFFINE IS GOOD! Speaking of caffine, I need to get more, ja! GOMEN NASAI!!! I MISSED AN UPDATE!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I shall now skip my sob excuse and go straight to the groveling.
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Reviewed By: Joey Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 08, 2004 08:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm... I don't have A N Y T H I N G!!!... * sweatdrop*... but if you need words to some good music ... I've thought of a lot that would work!.. :)... The sequel sounds great... If I let you into my room, will you tell us?*( A sign outside the door says," Now featuring... Naked Snarling Bakura chained next to Naked Whimpering Puppy!) Ohhhh!!! Hug 'da Puppy!!! *hugs his chest reallllllly hard* See!? They can't run away!!... take this! A gift for a great chapter! * She pushes a little, plastic, ticket into your hand* 2 Free Passes to.... my room! Unless it's morning..... or night time..... but any other time, you can pet 'da Puppy!! :)
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Reviewed By: Valea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok you no lie maybe he's NOT dead. Joey! He's drinking again! Though i cant remember him drinking in the first place so now i feel bad. But anywho nooo!!!! They cant kill Aria it cant be o.o *runs around in panic* ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *claws at screen* must stay for updatey *whimper*
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