| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 03, 2004 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That ikeike!!! * starts yelling random things in Japanese at Yami...... grrrrr....* Baka!!! Chikai ikeike!!! He's a ketsunoana!!!! He's a migurushii baka!!!!! An I'm telling Yugi..... :(....... Poor Aten!.... even though you are sick... don't let anything happen to Aten!!!! ...... oh... and here.... * chains Seto, Joey, Marik, and Malik by your bed*... :) There may be one problem though..... they'll tell you how to write your story....... especially Seto..... :) Please get well soon! * shoves some more cold medicine down your throat* What are you sick with??? I hope it's just a cold....
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Reviewed By: Black moon dust On: April 02, 2004 22:50 CST
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...... XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!! Oh my Ra, that was the funniest chapter I have ever incountered. Go Seto-chan! Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 02, 2004 20:55 CST
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I needed to review! I hope its nto too late! Im so sorry your so sick! *sad* i want you to feel all better! but anywho, the double lemon was quite enjoyable, *drools* YAY! feel better *gives her girl scout cookies and tea* I hope those arent to heavy for your tummy....but anywho, *grins* lemony goodness....muwhahaha
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 01, 2004 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Looks petrified and starts to squeek* Noooo!!! You're sick! :(... Runs over to you and forces some cold medicine down your throat* :( Please feel better soon!.... And the chapter was great.... reaaaaaaaaaaly great.. :) * chains Bakura and Ryou to your bed* ... Umm.... somebody's going ta' have to feed them..... oh well!
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Reviewed By: Naiho Neko On: March 29, 2004 20:27 CST
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*whines* Now I want christmas!! ;_; Good lemon... oh! My cake *holds out a lemon cake and boiws respectively* With gay icing ^_^
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 28, 2004 21:25 CST
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'_'*.... Oh dear.... * hand Seto some stomach medicine, carefully so he won't see her* Miranda has good taste... * stares at the picture of Seto*.... I thought I stole that.... * sigh* .... Great chapter! * hands you a plushie of Puppy painting the picture of Seto* I hope you start the story about Seth and Aria soon! The Joey and Seto one's great!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: March 28, 2004 21:15 CST
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Yay! *does happy dance* anyway! that was cool, i feed so proud, aten is learning up and down man score! And the major fliritng thing that was going on was really kick ass...haha...seto thinks women are bad...*snickers* ok anyway..loved the lemon..love the idea of two lemons next chappie..it makes me want to cry out in joy *leaps for joy and gives you lots of big walrus hugs* walrus pride 4 life!!! you rock! you rock! whoot whoot!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 27, 2004 11:24 CST
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YAMI YOU DECIEVING ASS! Oh no, were're in a whole new story and Ryou still has that mantra.Whaty bed luck, running into Jessica's sister, yeouch. Is she gona come back? Miranda's a good friend and, DANG!!!! Bakura's bloodlust is somethig to REALLY be terrified of! YEESH! How will the Holidays go? GOOD WORK!! I probably won't be able to review on Sunday, so here's a bag of sorries and groveling in advance, SEE YA!
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Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 00:05 CST
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Gasp! I could believe Aku made Aten do that to Aria. That was scary. And Yami is still... well, an ass. 0o0 Scary Pharaoh.... And the holidays are always fun. ^_^ Yeah, I write strange reviews, but they're not bad ones. Btw, your lemons rock!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 22:56 CST
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*shivers in a corner hiding from Anzu* my god i thought she was dead! rats *snaps fingers* anywho...im starting to develop this thing for blood...and i owe all to the blood lust men! whoot whoot!!!! but anyway, besides all that fun stuff, i liked all the holiday shopping yay they got to see each other again!!! and as far as gifts go... can you give Aten a plushie walrus from me? And it says phrases in arabic!!! *begs* i would love for SOMEONE to have that gift so badly!!! or even a little plishie heart, since he cant have another new heart...*sniffles* i wish i could get him a new heart!! its ok aten! *huggles him* we all still love you to death!! and im reading others reviews..and im bringing up just how wonderfully mysterious thye were and how it was all good in the neighborhood. Now...I say peace! *sings stevie wonder* Bunny the walrus- Arh arh! *flies away* -valea
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 25, 2004 10:45 CST
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Eeep! I forgot Hayden!... :)... Umm....... A card necklace like Seto and Moki's... but with Puppy, Seto, Hayden, and Mokuba in it.. :) For Seto ( might as well get stuff for them too.. ) a Blue Eyes Plushie! And a Puppy plushie...Awww.... And Puppy gets a Red Eyes Plushie and a Seto plushie!...... Ohhh... and could you put this on Ryou/Bakura/Malik/Marik's front door? After they leave for Seto's? * hands you four envelopes, with all their names, but no return address* :) I thought of this while I was going to sleep. Since Aku took their money... and they probably don't want to impose on Seto.... it's chibi funds... :) $2,500 for each parent... :) Yeah chibi care!!! * hugs Aten gently, and fights the urge to squish Aria*
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 24, 2004 20:21 CST
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Yes! * jumps up and down hugging her new Ryou plushie* Chibi Presents! Umm..... Aria... Umm... the 6 Dark Magicians.. DM Girl, DM, Red DM, Dark Paladin, the Combo of Flame Swordsman-DM, and a REALLY rare card I have.. It's the DM, but with the tablet of Seth and Yami's duel behind him... It's so cool! * Shoves a Purple/Red package toward you* Aten... such a sweetie.. The Helpless Child Card, and The same rare card as Aria, only with the Blue-Eyes.:) And... my favorite necklace... It's a small, silver heart... my mom has a bigger one just like it... :) * pushes a Blue package* Moki... had to get him somethin'... The Blue-Eyes Ultimate.. he deserves it... :) Robbie... so kind! A Segway! I wish.... Umm... well... I guess a blue Scooter... :) and another silver necklace like Aten's... awww! They're twins!...... maybe not... Great Chapter! Have a Robbie plushie!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 16:16 CST
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Whoa.. a freaky and interesting chappie. My fav! Marik exploring Aten's mind was scary... That makes me feel glad my mind is empty. Well, except for a bit of dust here and there, but that's besides the point! +_+ The One must be Robbie, right? Sure hope it is! ^=====^ (That's my smile now that I have braces. Sick, I know, but strangly interesting in a blocky kinda way!)
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 01:27 CST
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Eric is back? ;_; Damn him! If I ever met a kid like that I´d have an aneurism. x_x *twitches* You need him for Aria´s future? Oh hell no...if he tries -anything- in their teen years (of the sexual sort *shudders*) I´m gonna insert myself into the story and make a an extremely bloody corpse out of him! *runs around screaming in horror* ATEN HURT ARIA!!! O_O *cough* Okay, so it was Aku-Aten, but still... >_> At least it wasn´t Aria getting in trouble this time. ^___^ *ponders* The One...The One...Robbie? o_o Must be, considering all that bonding stuffage. *jaw drops* Seto...Aria...past butting in! o_________o Holy Freakin Effin Cow! Seto´s Seth persona is blubbering about -loving- her and not knowing what to do without her! *feels like resorting to nailbiting* This is so damn exciting. @_@ Yami lied straight to Yugi´s face! o_O;;; I mean...say he kills the other yamis AND the two kids...wouldn´t that make Yugi put him -back- into the Puzzle and never let him out again? Hmm, but then again...I don´t think Yugi could do that, he probably needs Yami too damn much. Damn it all! *stabs Yami with a wooden fork* ... *smerfles* Poor Malik, he´s acting like a kicked puppy these days. ;_; *quirks an eyebrow* Bakura is acting mighty "tense", he definitely needs some anger management. *nodnodnod* XDXD *falls to the floor* Well crop...these two last chapters were more than splendid, especially ch.61. ^_____^
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 21:59 CST
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Wow... That was wonderful... Poor Aten. Were there any hints as to who The One is? Have we already met them? Robbie? Aria and Aten going yami was really very interesting. Never thought it'd happen to Aten, though. On another note, Fox in Socks is my favourite Dr. Seuss book, too! I think it'd be cool to give Aria and Aten Fox in Socks to share, a few new dolls and an M&M plush backpack for Aria, and a monkey plush backpack with a matching plushie stuffed animal family for Aten! ~Bettina Kei
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