| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 00:43 CST
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Poor Aria...got all sick again. x_x Though why anyone would want to eat that many coffee beans is beyond me. *doesn´t drink coffee, and yes, knows how weird that is* I´m gonna treasure this line forever -->"Unkie Togi? I need my white dress and my sparkly black shoes! I gonna go there, kick Auntie Yami's butt, and be back in time for my nap!" XDXDXD I bow to your sense of humor. ^___^ *shivers with anticipation* Aria vs. Yami! ARIA VS. YAMI!!! O_O Kick his assholian bee~hind! *cackles* And she now wants to kick mommy Malik´s butt too...damn, I love that girl! n_n *wallows on the ground* Bakura...collapsed... @_@ Awesome writing. *nodnodnod*
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 26, 2004 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aria on a sugar AND coffee high? Ohhh boy, not good, but HILARIOUS!! Alright!! Go Aria!! Kick Yami's BUTT! That is one tough chibi yami, really resembles Baku, ne? Heh heh. Aku is REALLY cruel. I wonder if Ryou will figure it out. SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY!*repeatedly bangs heads against wall.* I *bang* can't *bang* belive *bang* that *bang* I* bang* missed *bang* so *bang* many *bang* UPDATES!! My computer was HIDING THEM!! How evil.
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Reviewed By: Cryptic Broken Moon On: February 26, 2004 21:31 CST
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This is the part I have been waiting for. As much angst as you manage to fit in, you always manage to get the battles of the strong in. This is why I enjoy your fictions
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 19:15 CST
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Fluff! Wonderful! This last chapter was one of the bestest ever! Keep up the good work! *Stabs at Yami* He's so mean! Aten and Robbie are just too cute! Even Aria and Umi!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 26, 2004 08:02 CST
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Go Robbie! Kick that bad guys shin! * hands him a giant chocolate heart* Giant chocolate hearts for everyone!.. except Aten... he can have this applesauce....:) Poor Baku! :( ..... I hope Aria kicks Yami's butt a lot! ..... :( That was like, the best chapter e v e r !!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww look Otogi is all girly like!!!! ^_^ hehe..poor Aria...*gives her veggies* they'll make you feel better! *grins* anywho cute chappie..I feel so bad for Aten, he's hafving such a hard time... and that is why i say...COFFEE IS EVIL! muwhahaha
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 25, 2004 23:04 CST
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oohhh! sounded like me and coffee ('cept for the chucking it all up). Otogi is so kawaii! awww! tristen and his poiny hair can take a hike if he keeps teasin' otogi. poor seto, jou and them should make up (lemon style). baku-kun reterning soon? squee!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 25, 2004 08:16 CST
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* laughing hysterically * Hahahah!!! Chibi running around trees! Poor Robbie..... he's so doomed... so is Seto... Doooooooooomed...... Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 23:32 CST
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Ooooohhh...The Helpless Child -is- a good card. ^_^ ...Aria...chibi Anzu... XD *wallows on the ground* Poor poor Malik. x_x It´s so sad how he´s being used by Aku! *blinks* I loved the lines about how Aten gets lonely without Aria, and also when he said he missed her. ~_~ *swims in the happy fluff* Dear me...I´m such a sap for that kind of stuff. ^_^;; Aria and coffee beans! *is eager to read about it*
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Reviewed By: Rheatemis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:32 CST
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Gods I'm so sorry. I didn't know you used Aria for a name. When I started writing my fic it just seemed like a pretty name that popped up into my head. If you'd like me to change it, I'd be happy to, so that there is no further confusion. Please accept my apologies for this. I didn't know anyone else used that name.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally can get here! I was starting to atcauly get worried about you and hte sake of your computer but anywho,m was reading this on the bus and I wanted to cry...Aten is now afriad of liek all men except Robbie and Ryou..poor little guy....are you going there with Anzu getting in Aria's head? O.o lol anywho WAHHHHH!!!! SETO! JOEY! nooooooo! Joey....poor puppy...reminds me of my puppy...*sniffles* looking forqward to what happens next...adn seeing just what the hell Aku is up to now..
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 24, 2004 18:16 CST
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oh thats so sad...poor every one...cruel fates!...can't wait to see what happens next :)
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 24, 2004 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eep.... chibi Anzu on Coffee-High! O-o... They are SO doomed....:) Poor Seto! Joey has a right to be scared... but still...:(
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 23:01 CST
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*runs around wailing* The Evil Grandad from Hell wants Aria killed! x_X Argh! And Malik /Aku is gonna (attempt) to do it! O_O My Lordess, Good thing Malik doesn´t remember his little "adventures" because he would need some serious therapy afterwards. >_< *wallows on the ground* Oi...Aten´s afraid of his own dad, which of course is understandable, but it´s a damn shame. *tilts head* Explaining the family situation to strangers must be quite difficult. ~_~ *grins* Robbie&Aten fluff is good for the heart! *huggles it tightly* Neeeeeee, I´m worried about Aria. *sigh* I think Steven wins the award for Worst Dad&Grandpa Of The Century...or maybe just Decade, but still... -.- *blinks* I was kinda worried that something had happened to you when the update didn´t show up for days. ^_^;; Good to know that it was just life´s little interferrences that were keeping you away. *nodnod* o_o I´ve been in "Hostile Takeover" withdravel. XD I´m most definitely eargerly excited about the next chapter!
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Title: Yeah!!!
Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 23, 2004 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! You're alive!!! * hugs you and Dragon Dreamer tightly* 10 ft.? Wow..... I'd be so far under... actually... almost 6 feet under! :) I hope you guys had TV though! * shivers at the thought of no TV for that long* That was a great chapter! Poor Aten-kun.... and Ryou-kun..... :( * grabs the Millennium Rod and whacks Steven and Yami-jiji ( I don't really know if it works like that...oh well ) Updates are like Friendship! :)
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