| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 22, 2004 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhh, Yami FINALLY apologized for being an ass! I'm SOOOOOOOO HAPPY! Poor Aria, and poor Umi. What exactly DOES Marik find? And the thing between "Seth" and Aria was cute. A child? I didn't know they had a child, or maybe I wasn't paying close enough attention.
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Reviewed By: Shattered Light On: March 21, 2004 23:21 CST
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DAMNIT!! Yami, you hot, sick, twisted... hot bastard!! RA DAMNIT!! Why does he have to be so.... evil?.....Oh, by the way, aparently, Marik (Yami no malik) is only 6, he was created on Malik's 10th birthday, and does nt live in the rod. Although, the rod does increase his power.... Yea^^; just thought I'd let you know... Bai^-^
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Title: Action Packed!!
Reviewed By: Valea On: March 21, 2004 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE! First part og the chapter with the potty scene had me laughing so hard i even made an away message for it! And dude Aten in like yami mode was kick ass! Kinda freaked out but extremly like coolish though! Just goes to show...no means no!!!! anywho just a toally kcik ass chapter with all of that good stuff, aria and seto's pawst all coming together, it was so cute! seto all like out there like whats going on and then they cuddle up in their sleep ^_^ eeeek!!! kawii!!!!!!!!!! and though bad came to follow, thought it was just a tad bit cute when aten was looking around the bathroom like where am i hearing this weird odd voice from, and the twin vs. twin was a very surprising fight and then hayden is all cool cause he watches over everyone yayness! *waits for tuesday* hehehehehe!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Seth-o Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 21, 2004 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was funny! I wish Seto would yell at potties more often...:) Awwww...... Aria so cute with Seth-o!... :) He really does love her... It's so cute! Here! Have a plushie! * shoves a Seto hugging older Aria towards you* Yeah Seth-o! * hugs you*
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 05:48 CST
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*runs around flailing her arms wildly* Neeeeee, Aten went into protective mode for his big sissa! ^_____^ *squeals* That was freakin awesome! *bows and worships bakurasgirl* I lurve Aten´s new yami-mode. *nodnodnod* Aten can feel what his sister is feeling and...stuffage?! O_O *loves that...and hasn´t been sure if the two siblings could do the connection thing like fx. Ryou and Bakura* ^_^;; Poor Mokuba. o_o Getting all drunk-ish. *twitches at the non-con alike scene between Joey and Seto* Oddly enough it feels very iffy to me when someone is overpowering our hunky CEO. ~_~ *smiles* Groovy chapter, e-v-i-l cliffy... *waggles finger*
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 19, 2004 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aten's going yami?! I thought that you said he would go yami for Robbie, not Aria. Or maybe I messed up. You are the mighty author you CAN'T mess up!! This is your world! Anyways, Seapeople Salad was a funny touch, and everyone seeing Marik in that demeaning attire! And Marik's comment on, I think it was Tristan, and his coffee addiction and the never-ending "losing of quarters". HAHAHAHA!!! Aku likes the limelight, doesn't he?
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 18, 2004 07:56 CST
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*Slips in between the sleeping Seto and Joey, slowly petting his hair*.... :( now he's gonna yell at a potty!... *Sigh* Well.... that'll be funny! :) It was sooo cute how Aten knew that Aria was in trouble! At least Aten been doing w-..... *Thinks*I'd better not finish that*... Umm... Great chapter! At least Aku's not in Moki any more!
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 23:27 CST
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Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! Not Mokuba! ;_; He´s too sweet to be possesed! *sighs* But then again...I´m a firm supporter of Bishie Torture, be it mental or physical, so... ^_____^ Holy crapola...I almost fell off my chair laughing when I read the Seaman Salas incident. ~_~ Oh, oh, oh!!! And Aria telling about Otogi´s and Tristan´s "quarter in the pants" adventures! XDXDXD Damn, you´re a funny woman. ^_^ I reeeaaally have to get my girlfriend to read your fics. *nodnodnod* I need someone to talk to about Aria and Aten and...and...all the funny stuff! *shudders* Tristan...coffee...Marik...spit.... o_o;;; *isn´t a great fan of spit* XD I bow to your superior writing skills and eagerly await a new chapter.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 22:28 CST
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Omg! *gets into giggle fit* Poor Marik, being critized in his happy work place! Anywho...thats so evil! I hope they win *waves a big foam finger around* its so sad to see joey in this state, trying to get away from the addiction, i wish him luck...looking forward to see what aku does to mokuba..*shivers* eep! good stuffing!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 20:43 CST
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All I can say is, "Poor Mokuba." Everything is progressing beautifully, though! I love it! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl Worshiper On: March 16, 2004 08:28 CST
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0:-)............ Haha! .... :) Yeah!!!! Seto and Joey laughed at Marik...... AGAIN!... :-) ..... Wow..... Tristen.... loves that coffee..... and Bakura knows just how to make fun of him... :) I was re-reading 'Watch over Me', and are you going to have 1 more Chibi-on-Sugar-High, before Aria grows up? That was sooooooooo funny! Please say you are!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 14, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, there's a place where all lost reviews go, and i'm going to find them. THEY'VE BEEN STEALING YOUR REVIEWS!! I just wanted you to know I'm behind you sll the way in writing I'd NEVER abandon you! Alright, enough mushy stuff. GREAT JOB!! Chapman seems like a okay guy, hopefully he'll help poor little Aten to get better. Uh oh, Joey's got some problems and poor Hayden! Reminded of his Uncle by JOEY! TUESDDAY!! BUT THAT'S SO FAR AWAY! Alright, I'll quit my complaining so you can get back to whatever you were doing. Toodles! PS: I LOVE the little hair twitching fights between Artia and Bakura.. HILARIOUS!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blows nose* ahhh. It made me happy even though there was serious stuff going on in the doctor persons office, and aten like kidan trusts him now and so yay! its the young artist at work...and as far as seto adn joey now go*runs around and cheers and whoops!* YESSS!!!!!!!! theyere back at home..iu hope hayden can trust him again..*whimpers* and just to put it out there, the last scence with joey just drooling over that picture was totally....ang!!!!!!!!!*drools and pets the picture* hehe! i wish i could draw more realistically...but i can work up to it! when i grow up ill be a painter just like joey!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 14, 2004 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Philadelphia'....... I just got a reaaaaaaly bad feeling about that guy.... I know I shouldn't have .... but.... PHILADELPHIA?!?.... Aten didn't even ask Mr.Philadelphia where he was from!....... :) Anyway... I don't think Marik-aka-Rod-Boy Is going to want to go in there for a while... hehehe... :D ... One second... * Runs into Joey's studio, grabs the painting, stands looking at it... and drooling, then runs back to her computer* :) YEAH!
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 07:01 CST
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omg! Just read all those chapters I missed! ô.ô Great job! Better continue soon! Chau! Emily
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