| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Seto lover and Bakura worshiper On: March 07, 2004 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It wasn't really Malik I was mad at....*sigh*.... I think I'll still keep him on my wall...:) Maybe I should get Joey and beat Aku out of him! That would be gooooood... :) That was a great chapter! And thanks for the hug... I needed that. :)...
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 07:01 CST
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*bangs head on table repeatedly* No, no, no! Bad cliffy, BAAAAAD CLIFFY!!! *spanks it* O_O *falls to the floor twitching* Can´t. Wait. Too. Exciting. x_x My Lordess, my mom is gonna ask what´s wrong, in a minute, when we´re going out for dinner. *ckecks mirror* Oh yeah, I´ve definitely got the wild and half crazed look down. XD Majorly great chapter, I´m still sizzling.~_~
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 06, 2004 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shields you with her body* Poor Joey! ..... and just when I decided he wasn't the worst guy ever.... *sigh*.... I'm sad about Malik.... but I'm kinda' hating him now.... soooo.... I guess... a slight yeah?.... * long sigh*...... :(...... Can I have a hug? *starts crying* :(
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Reviewed By: MoonLightAlabaster On: March 06, 2004 18:46 CST
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Oh noes!! Malik-sama is going to die?? And poor Jou-kun, he's going to hurt Seto-kun??
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 06, 2004 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO! Poor Chibi Yami! Poor Big fluffy CEO!! POOR Marik! Poor Malik! Poor Ryou! Poor Bakura! Poor Aten! POOR Everybody!! What will Malik do now that he's not posessed?
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Reviewed By: Valea On: March 06, 2004 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
but you said you werent gonna kill him!!!!!!!!! you lie! but i will not take any action against you because you used a song which is on the favorites of Valea. *roar* *sniffles* WHY!!!! NOOOOO!!!!!! Small amount of pills...cant be..*in denial* CAn joy right it! *hopes* but good use of the song and suidical thoughts though *hugs and growls*
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 10:36 CST
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O_O *screams and faints* ... *twitches* Joey...Aria...Malik...killing...suicide...stuffage... @_@ *wails* It´s all so EBIL!!! (yes, I meant to say -ebil-, not evil) *really likes Mr. Cullen* He reminds me of my old teacher, Erik. ^_^ *yes, people here call their teachers by their first name, it´s common practice since the 70s* Dan~g, I´m at the edge of my seat waiting for the next chappie! It´s all so exciting. *nodnodnod* This is most definitely my fave YGo fic ever. ^___^ Well, the entire Arc so far could sorta count as one too. *grins*
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 06, 2004 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My Ra, I thought...I thought... I thought I was going to cry. I started sniffling! You're good at gaining sympathy from the readers. Poor, poor Marik. What a sec, if Aria takes after Bakura, can SHE get Bloodlust as well? Intresting idea. THAT'S SOOOOO SWEET! Aten goes yami for Robbie!! AWWWW!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 00:05 CST
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First off I want to say that I love that song along with Fields of Innocence, and that oh no! Malik cant you see Aku has trapted you! i cant bear it *feels faint* No! He cant kill himself or else like them wont Marik be like gone too? O.o eek!!!!! And i loved the cute meoment when they were all cuddling and the chibi's gave Bakura their plushies! it was sooo sweett!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 19:24 CST
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*sniffles* That whole suicidal part was so sad... I was getting teary... Malik-kins isn't going to go "splat splat die", is he???? Evil Aku! Go, Aria, and smish (yes, I said smish) the evil, perverted, middle aged, sagging men out there who don't give a damn about FRIENDSHIP!!!! *Suddenly pops into Anzu* YEEHEE!!! *abruptly stops and cries*
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Title: FRIDAY????????????
Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 16:26 CST
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You are making me wait until Friday for an update???????? AAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! I like the story. Don't make Malik kill himself... They have to find out it's Aku some time!
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Title: :(
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is getting sad. start to cry. Great chapter. can't wait for the next one. Oh I was wondering if I could use Aria and Aten in a story. if not I wouldn't.
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: March 03, 2004 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
* Squeals and clings to Bakura* YES!!!!! Now I can finish decorating my room! * chains the growling yami to her wall* *sigh* ....Now I'm t o t a l l y happy!..... Wait..... NOOOOOOOO MALIK-KUN!!!!!! * clings to him and cries, while sloooooowly dragging him towards her room :)* Don't even think about it, Mister! * chains him to her wall, right next to Bakura* Hurt him, and I won't get Ryou. Anyway.... NOW I'm happy!!!!! Great chapter!!!!!! * Shoves cake at you and DragonDreamer *
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Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 21:37 CST
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Just finished reading the last few chapters. There's one part that I surprised and a bit amused. Aria shattered the puzzle and Yami got sealed back in it. Go Aria! Lol, okay, I won't do that again. Bakura's back, but not too well? Hope things look up for him, even though it may be slowly. Aten... I wanna give him a hug!!! >ahem< Anyway, and Steven and Aku want Aria now? GASP! Poor Malik. But anyway, enough with my talking. Great last few chapters!! ^_^ I'll read again when I can.
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 23:18 CST
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*shudders* Those last 4 lines with Aku and Steven grossed me out considerably. All that talk about enjoying Aria and breaking her. x_x You know, I think you made the situation with Malik and the two psychos quite beliavable. *nodnod* I mean, he´s scared to death (who wouldn´t be? >_>;;) and he´s trying to answer their questions so they won´t hurt him (too bad *cough*). Other authors might have made him all brave and yelling things like "I´ll never tell you anything, no matter what you do to me!", but honestly, not that many people would be that way in a situation like that. ~_~ You´re good at this. *blinks* Note to self : Watch original Japanese YGO. o_o I´m watching the German dub and Yami´s all "Oh Yugi, I´ll always be there for you...now let´s go find that sessy ass Kaiba and stick to him like the Tomb Robber to raw meat!" ^_^
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