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 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: January 28, 2004 21:03 CST
Comment/Review:
i cant wait for the next sequal then...uh oh...poor aten...what card is he going to be.. may i suggest change of heart?
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher  On: January 28, 2004 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
And you can have Bakura if you update Shadows of the Past reaaaaallllly soon!
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher  On: January 28, 2004 20:45 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Actually... since you hurt Yugi... Here ya' go! * pushes a shivering hikari towards you. Ryou has a Bakurasgirl plushie clutched in his arms* Ryou: She told me she'll do horrible things to me if I don't give you this. * Shoves the plushie toward you* Goooood Ryou.... my preciousssssss.... but I want him back after your next chapter... but if it's a reaaaaaalllly good one... you can keep him.... :) Thanks again for hurting that baka Yugi-boy! * whacks him hard on the head with another Bakurasgirl plushie* I don't like him as much as Anzu.... and that's saying something! :)
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher  On: January 28, 2004 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm... you can have him... AND Bakura * kicks his butt so he falls cutely to the ground, a collar identical to Ryou's around his neck* tomorrow night ... IF YOU UPDATE TOMORROW... NOT LATE... TOMORROW! * hugs the 2 cuties on the leash!* Great chapter!
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher  On: January 28, 2004 16:54 CST
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Update update update update update update update update!!! Hurry up! * scowls angrily*
 Title: ZL_Chan
Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2004 23:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, I just read the last couple of chapters. Very intense indeed. I shed a few tears when I read chapter 25. Poor Marik *sniff*. And I, yet again, had more tears when I finished reading chapter 26. I really should start keeping a tissue box next to my computer from now on.
 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: January 27, 2004 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohh....so sad...i think bakura-kun is the only one that hasn't been raped yet...i hope it stays that way, T.T poor marik...i cant wait to find out what happens next.. maybe its just me but i think the whole malik maril thing could have been more violent... i dunno... ur ryou one was a little more... but hey, you did a great job!! although the_wonderfully_talented_bakurasgirl is always great
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher  On: January 27, 2004 08:56 CST
Comment/Review:
* Starts bawling like Hayden* so sad! Poor Aten....... at least part of Steven's dead... kind of.... I don't want to strangle you since you updated other things too.... but if this keeps up..... I'm sending Bakura! * pulls him by a leashe*...mmmm..... Baku....:)
 Reviewed By: Maruken  On: January 26, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I suggest Marik run, REALLY fast. That is, if can walk first. Poor Yami, payback's a bitch, ne? I won't be able to review till Friday, sorry! Till then, ja! Good chapter! You write the GREATEST things!!And you draw EXCELLENETLY!!
 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: January 26, 2004 19:08 CST
Comment/Review:
SQUEE!SQUEEEE!SQUEEEE! Totaly SQUEE tastic!... good, good, chappy!!! bakurasgirl_kicks_ass_as_a_writer! good job bakurasgirl...more chapters like that i hope....
 Title: O.o
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2004 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
aww poor Marikcries don't do that to my favotior Yami. good chapter.
 Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2004 16:31 CST
Comment/Review:
EEEKKK!!! DAMN IT! I just read all the chappies I have not reveiwed on yet- superb! Poor Marik...Why does he have to be baaackkk? And why Malik? ::cries:: Well, getting normal, Superb chappie, and I'll be waiting, skiping my class's and watching for your update. Chau!!! Emily
 Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher  On: January 26, 2004 08:27 CST
Comment/Review:
....If I didn't like Yami Dragon's lemons too... I'd strangle you both........Poor Marik!!!! *slumps to the ground with a sad, dazed look*........
 Reviewed By: Maruken  On: January 25, 2004 22:02 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm now officially hooked. It took me 2 days straight to finish everything in this series. 2 DAYS STRAIGHT!! Can't wait till Monday!! Just can't!!
 Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox  On: January 25, 2004 21:51 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh...spooky, spooky malik!....SQUEE! silly aria, books like that are for adults....dum, de, dum, de , dum...i think the_great_bakurasgirl keeps getting better... Hey! if any one would like to talk about bakurasgirl's fic, mail me! bakura_itemri@yahoo.com! hehehemwahahaha! squeezy cheese goes good with crackers and bakura/marik....! hope we get some marik or bakura action, marik can keep his sticky book... as long as he works for it...we need a threesome...hm.....?
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