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Reviewed By: I_HATE_ANZU ^_^ On: November 24, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing it was kawaii and funny your my favorite author update soon ~I hate Anzu~
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: November 23, 2003 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Marik gave Aria my present... YEAH!... no more M's for me.... or mini marshmallows... or caramel... :) Could you have a scene where Bakura showes Aria how to steal the Mallinium Puzzle? I just really want Yami to lose it... for awhile at least... :) Can't wait to see the chibis at school!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal ^_^ On: November 23, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU FOR THE BATH SCENE!!!! Malik is so hot. I'm looking forward to seeing Aten and Aria's first day at school... no doubt Aria will keep the other kids in line! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: valea On: November 23, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Cuteness! I forgot to say....ice cream cake but oh well, I enjoyed very much so. I liek how you made Aten and Hayden so close, even if Araia is being a meanie, but yay! lol *smiles* it was all good...damn aku, stay way away! make aten like aria and have him tell whats going on!!! wahhhh....yeah hehe...
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 23, 2003 14:14 CST
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Alright!!! Kawaii-ness of Aten, Aria, AND Hayden.... cho kawaii^^. Kidsgo to school soon, huh? I'm looking forward to it. Jaa ne
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
omg! I've been reading the whole story, but I'm not sure that I reviewed, (opps) But when I saw you put this next part and I was so excited! plz continue! Its great! ^_______________^ Emily
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