| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 15:23 CST
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::gets hit with random books:: I know i know! I didn't reveiw! I didnt check my mail for a while so I didn't know you updated. But omg no!!! gigantic evil cliffie!! ::glares:: ^_^ But plz continue it right away! i need to know what happens!!! Hmm... oh yes, and good lemon! Chau! Emily
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Title: DAMN YOU!!
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon-don't wanna log in On: December 16, 2003 15:23 CST
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YD: DO NOT hide hide behind me! DD: Me either!! YD: Geeze, just when I was becoming a puddle of Dragon Ooze from that lemon... DD: You are SO in trouble!!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 16, 2003 12:35 CST
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::: Grabs Aria and hides both their eyes :: OHH NO!!!
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Title: You are soooo gonna get it!!
Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 09:32 CST
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That was like...Woah! Ryou x Malik....sweet!!Damn Aku! Arrgghhh!! *anyway* Totally coolies story and I hope that this continues! The chibi's really are too cute for there own good! *squishes Aten and Aria* Updates soon!!!! Take care dear!
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Reviewed By: PharaohYamisPrincess On: December 16, 2003 06:34 CST
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O.O You didn't just end it like that!!! That is just so disturbing. Hehe Marik/Ryou! I loved it! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Seto lover and Bakura worshiper On: December 15, 2003 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Aten! I hope he makes even more friends... the cute little chibi... * runs over and hugs him... until she sees Marik...* Oh hi Marik..... I'm NOT Anzu... don't worry...I won't give him a balloon.. eh he...* runs away quick;y*
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Reviewed By: gralnak On: December 14, 2003 21:29 CST
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this isn't in aff, so I came here to read it. good chappie :)GRALNAK
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Reviewed By: Mistress Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great hon! I love your writing.
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Title: great fic
Reviewed By: Bakura_Otaku On: December 14, 2003 14:07 CST
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i feel so sorry for aten, poor chibi. Some one mentiond that when aten and robbie grow up, they go out with each other, is that true? are you gonna write in any cures for poor robbies club foot? i must know, oh, and is there going to be more bakura-kun action any time soon?
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Reviewed By: Senef On: December 14, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, heard your going to post a marik X malik NCS scene... just wondern what chapter thats going to be in...or like when...
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: December 13, 2003 19:33 CST
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awwwww, poor Robbie... that's gotta hurt man. As for your relative... I feel so bad for you.... I hope you get over it soon, tho, all things like that are hard for me.
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal -_- not logged in On: December 13, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*big bubbly watery chibi eyes* You didn't give me a review response! *wails* I feel so deprived! lol kidding... great chapter, can't wait until the next lemons!! Poor Aten, I nearly cried over his dream sequence! I don't like Eric... or Jason!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 16:55 CST
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Mehehehe!!! Down the Drain's a funny chapter! Aria with her trademark balloon, and Aten with his hungry bellybotton! How cute! Can't wait until I get kids like that. ...Devil.. };->
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 01:24 CST
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Sqee!!!!!!!! Oh yeah anywho must share i printed this out to like read on the bus and i left it in the printer and i came home and my mom read like the second half and corrected some of the grammer (would thought she relized it was a little kid) lol. anyway! Man, if you really experienced this im sorry, evil bushes! Have you heard of bush diving? Its a more fun way of playing with bushs you just dve into them a few times and then you can like kill the bush ebfore it kills you. (wrote in one of me fics very fun) anyway! i loved the convo between robbie and aten i was like doing to die from laughter!!! I wonder what would happen if someone popped the ballon of Aria's....heh heh..no thatd be mean, bad valea *bonks myself on the head and slips into sweet uncontioness*
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Title: Looovvveeddd it!
Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye(too lazy to log in) On: December 12, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so sorry to hear about your aunt. Many prayers and vibes of comfort coming for you and your family. As to the story, they are sooooo cute!! *grabs Aten, Robbie, and Aria into giant hug* I think just about all of us can at one point in time understand the pain of a bully. Poor Aten. Hey, I read on Janime's site that in the manga they have the first three or four letters of Yami's true name revealed. They are A-T-either I or E- and possibly N, depending on where you read....hmmm...
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 12, 2003 12:03 CST
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LOL.... Those kids get into more trouble!!!
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Title: who do we squish first?
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon-don't wanna log in On: December 12, 2003 09:04 CST
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YD: OH DEAR GODS IN HEAVEN!! DD: Must. Fight. Urge. To. Squish!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 18:02 CST
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YEEHEEE!!!!!!!*squeals in happines and crazyness* Total yaoiness and hyperness! At least for me. I'm happy, in the Christmas spirit, and love reading your new story! Yay to Aria and her pink balloon! *falls off chair and twitches in a convulsion...of happines..* Merry Christmas, bakurasgirl!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: December 11, 2003 14:40 CST
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Yaoi... HOBUNAI!!!! if you have lemons soon... Tano shimi!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: December 10, 2003 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Drools* Mmmm.. Bakura, blood, and a shower...:) That was THE best image of Bakura I will ever have!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 22:17 CST
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*Grins* Aria is such a bad child, but a wonderful one. The lemon was wonderfuller than usual and the suspense is killing! Keep up the good work! One question, does karma ever come and bite Eric Barnes and his mother in the butt?
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao, i like fell out of my chair that was sooo great!!!! She has become a ballon sword fiend! I love it!!! *rolls around dying of the laughter* yup, poor Bakura...its not so wrong to truly love someone else too because theyre all a happy go getter family! Yeah!!! anywho friday will be my lucky day the way this is going! (nice begging Kura!!! muwhahahahaa!)SQUEEEEEE!!!! where did you come up with that? Today I was thinking about this in my head like, Joey held a m in his hand and a skittle and he was like meet M's cousin, it is the new M, try this skittle. Okay it was fun in my mind hehe lol SQUEEEEE!!!!!! *giggles*
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal ^_^ On: December 09, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i was crying with laughter when Aria was playing sword with Bakura's dick... that was funny! Yeah, i fully reckon you should get yami to mindcrush anzu one day.... v good idea.... i liked the Marik/Bakura shower scene too... but it should have gone further! lol anyway.... when are the next lemons? Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 09, 2003 10:33 CST
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Whooops!!! I hit enter instead of the tab key... oh well and for u leaving off in the middle of a lemon... shall I pour m's on you and sick the chibis on u?
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 09, 2003 10:31 CST
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 08, 2003 09:56 CST
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Sorry I havent reviewed sooner... I've been working on a new story, and work has been quite... interesting.... So far Story's good...
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Reviewed By: Kaiba lover and Bakura worshiper On: December 06, 2003 17:56 CST
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NOW I find out how to do reviews here... :P I just did it on Sweet Release... both rule!!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yess!!! It finally worked! I just had to add this story to favs...anyway! God Anzu was scary *cringes* That wouls have scared the living daylihghts out of me in like elemtry and probaly still would! lol anyway, and it made me sad Ryou thought that all he did didnt go to any use, but it did and yeah. Will Ryou ever tell Bakura about what really happened when he was with Steven? Yeah, damn Aku, hes screwing it up THE BASTARD!!!!!!!Heh heh, I used a word that was in the story anyway, yeah good stuff and thumbs up seven up!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: December 06, 2003 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey BG... no offence but I think you need to check some of your spelling and grammar before you post up your chapter! I found quite a few mistakes, but it's okay! Besides that... WHAT A GREAT CHAPTER!! I nearly died laughing when Umi said he had been in hurricanes worse than Anzu lol. You should get Yami to mindcrush her one day ^.^
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura Awai On: December 05, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved your story so far *hugs bakura* just wandering if you could add a few NCS scenes with Malik and Marik, like what happend in the past between them...
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