| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao, i like fell out of my chair that was sooo great!!!! She has become a ballon sword fiend! I love it!!! *rolls around dying of the laughter* yup, poor Bakura...its not so wrong to truly love someone else too because theyre all a happy go getter family! Yeah!!! anywho friday will be my lucky day the way this is going! (nice begging Kura!!! muwhahahahaa!)SQUEEEEEE!!!! where did you come up with that? Today I was thinking about this in my head like, Joey held a m in his hand and a skittle and he was like meet M's cousin, it is the new M, try this skittle. Okay it was fun in my mind hehe lol SQUEEEEE!!!!!! *giggles*
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal ^_^ On: December 09, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i was crying with laughter when Aria was playing sword with Bakura's dick... that was funny! Yeah, i fully reckon you should get yami to mindcrush anzu one day.... v good idea.... i liked the Marik/Bakura shower scene too... but it should have gone further! lol anyway.... when are the next lemons? Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 09, 2003 10:33 CST
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Whooops!!! I hit enter instead of the tab key... oh well and for u leaving off in the middle of a lemon... shall I pour m's on you and sick the chibis on u?
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 09, 2003 10:31 CST
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 08, 2003 09:56 CST
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Sorry I havent reviewed sooner... I've been working on a new story, and work has been quite... interesting.... So far Story's good...
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Reviewed By: Kaiba lover and Bakura worshiper On: December 06, 2003 17:56 CST
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NOW I find out how to do reviews here... :P I just did it on Sweet Release... both rule!!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yess!!! It finally worked! I just had to add this story to favs...anyway! God Anzu was scary *cringes* That wouls have scared the living daylihghts out of me in like elemtry and probaly still would! lol anyway, and it made me sad Ryou thought that all he did didnt go to any use, but it did and yeah. Will Ryou ever tell Bakura about what really happened when he was with Steven? Yeah, damn Aku, hes screwing it up THE BASTARD!!!!!!!Heh heh, I used a word that was in the story anyway, yeah good stuff and thumbs up seven up!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: December 06, 2003 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey BG... no offence but I think you need to check some of your spelling and grammar before you post up your chapter! I found quite a few mistakes, but it's okay! Besides that... WHAT A GREAT CHAPTER!! I nearly died laughing when Umi said he had been in hurricanes worse than Anzu lol. You should get Yami to mindcrush her one day ^.^
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura Awai On: December 05, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved your story so far *hugs bakura* just wandering if you could add a few NCS scenes with Malik and Marik, like what happend in the past between them...
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 12:20 CST
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Sorry i didnt review! I just noticed that you updated!!! -_-U Anyway, it's great, and I thought you wrote those flashback/memory things prety well. And poor Aten!!! Those mean kids suck!!! lol keep writing Emily
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Reviewed By: Valea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off i really wish that i could log in and get to this page so itd be a signed review but it wotn work because this wtory doesnt show up on your page. But to more important things that I have elft in my past a long time ago, I had a learning disablity and I couldnt read in the 2nd grade and I could write my name in kindgarden, but I got out of there, eventually and now I go to a private school, so I can relate to Aten, so im rooting for him, despite allt he kids that are very ignoirant! *growls at the little boys who are probaly having 3 somes anyway* Yes anyway, wont be mean, but yeah it was a cool chapter, facing reality with your kids...and trying to think about what could Aku be up to...dun dun dun!!!! (And I would type in my accoutn name CynicalspiritValea but it says that name is already used and its mine!!!! ok im done complaining now)
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: December 04, 2003 13:50 CST
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awwwwww, poor Aten, that is so sad.....
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal (not logged in O_____o) On: December 04, 2003 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh this is just getting better and better! such painful memories ;-; anyway, keep it up it's great work!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: December 02, 2003 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lets burn Aku! *has an angry mob behind her* lol anyway! good stuff...its no fair...hes getting all of his energy so easily! but anycrud i thought yugi's pep talk was really sweet...i remember when i got teased by the other kids...even tough i know its bad, cant wait til aku posses him so he can kick the other kids butts! excuse my language! lol..ok the bad is out of my system now, looking forward to robbie and aten kawiiness! yay!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal ^.^ On: December 02, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AKU IS SOOOOOOOOOOO EVIL!!!!!!!!!!! But why would he wanna do any harm to Seto or Joey? And what's up with that email I got about your other story called 'My Brother's Keeper'? That totally gave away what happens in Aten's future with Robbie!!! Not that it's bad... I reckon Aten will be HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT when he's older!! I agree with Bwubewwy Sugar Pwincess... WE NEED ANZU BASHING!! By the way... do you know any good websites that I could find some Seto/Joey yaoi pics?? I can't find any at all!!! Anyway, keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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