| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: February 12, 2004 10:05 CST
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Anzu had better not visit him, I'll have to hang her with her lil hoe socks.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 12, 2004 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My dog is still gone! But at least Aten is back! My poor, poor dearheart! This reminds me of when I was in the hospitals for diebetes...minus the coma i was in. This was cool, but it made me oh so vey sad! Some people are just too cruel..*sniffles*
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 12, 2004 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really...... weird.... but I was re-reading "Baby of mine"...... and I just realized something...... without Anzu hitting Malik in the groin with her golf ball ( one of your BEST works :) ! )....... Aten.... wouldn't have been conceived.... ewwww.....* gives you an Anzu plushie with golf cluub*......... yuck.......
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 12, 2004 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww.... poor Aten.... at least he's going to get a non-Anzu visitor... poor Malik too.... he is soooo toast...:( This was probably... The BEST Chapter..... EVER!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 12, 2004 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i didnt tell you but I named my new puppy Baku, and he's gone, and Im relaly sad and I hope he will be okay, but I still needed to give you a review and tell you that I hope they can be okay too even if Aten comes home all bad, at least he's home, not like Baku, my poor puppy he is out alone tonight, but I would like to say i love Evenescence and the song you put in there was just perfecto, now I must go and pray for my dog, please pray for him too, he's only 10 weeks old.
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 22:49 CST
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*sniffles* Damn, they have a rough life. -.- Ryou seems to be very responsible though, having children will do that to you. ^_^ Good job! *bows* Very heartfelt chapter. *sighs* I got all teary when Ryou was remembering Aten playing in the playpen. Oh! Lovely lemon, had a very...serious feel to it. *nodnod* ... *grins* I knew Aria would be more sexually interested than Aten, she already has aninteresting fascination with all of Seto´s & Joey´s toys, and...other phallus looking things...*coughballoncough* XDXD *gasps* ATEN IS FOUND?!! O_O *runs around in circles* OMGOMGOMG!!! My Goddess, I´m looking forward to that! >_> ...I wonder what that old bastard has been dong to him. If I remember correctly you once mentioned something about him almost being turned into a dragon...or something like that. ^_^;; Ah, I´m looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work, your writing rocks!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 11, 2004 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah... I was wondering if anymore Chibi-related Birthday parties are going to happen soon?? They were soooo much fun!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 11, 2004 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! Lots of lemony goodness! 3 stories full! The lemons are like... well.... FRIENDSHIP!!!! .... Aten's almost found!!! * gives you an Egyptian Aten Plushie* Yeah!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 13:48 CST
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Pooorr Aten... Where's he being held? The shadow realm? *shivers* Can't stand him with Steven or Aku.
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: February 11, 2004 11:05 CST
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Gods... I've missed so much... I really need to get my puter fixed, with me working on two stories and all, work and the short time I get at the library...gads.... Anyway... Yikes this is angsty, but angst is good... :: Hands Aria a lollypop and Ryou a tiger plushie ::
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 02:54 CST
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Argh...so much bloodness. o_o *shivers* I feel so sorry for Malik! Aku´s getting him in so much truoble and making him lose his family and-*twitchtwitch* So much angstyness. x_x I loved the line about Ronda. XDXD *sighs* Poor Mokuba, I always did have a soft spot for the little guy. *nodnod* And now he´s almost all alone and has to take care of everything. >_< *bounces up and down* Good thing that Seto won´t be the father. ^_^ That would really screw up the relations between all the couples and such. *thinks a bit* I actually never considered Aten as the father, I just don´t see Aria and him getting it on like that. Their sibling relationship is wonderful the way it is. *nodnodnod* Umi would make a nice father. ~_~ But...you probably have someone entirely different in mind. *can´t wait for all the other fics* That reminds me! I had the freakest dream with the kids in their teens (and oddly enough, the parents hadn´t aged). Aria had run away from home, was working as a Dominatrix in an S/M club, spied on Aten and Robbie outside their school (to protect them and such ^_^;;) and was dating Mokuba on and off. *rolls around laughing* That´s the result of me reading a bunch of fics with a vide variety of "plots", right after each other. ~_~ Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 23:58 CST
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Aww, poor Aten... I hope he's okay... Steven and Aku both need a good murdering. Would the father of Aria's kid happen to be Umi or am I imagining that he seems to crush on her? Keep up the amazingly wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: Valea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gets a hanky and blows nose* Dark Magincain! Come otu come out! I want aten back...*sniffles* he's too cute and squiahable!!!
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 09, 2004 18:23 CST
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ohhh...spine tingly...can't wait to find out what happend to bakura...is the mystery father umi? its not seto and its not aten.. cant wait to know...
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Title: make a sad face
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make a sad face. noooo. turn holding on to Bakura. "Why Aten he's never done anything wrong" cries. Bakura sighs. "your getting tears all over my fav shirt" Bakura whines. rolls eyes, can't wait for the next chapter
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