| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 15, 2004 18:25 CST
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yum...Ryou's chocolate erection(aka ryou's chocolate cover nuts)...sounds good... lol... that was such a good chappy, my heart was racing at the end..sex,blood,angst,violence,fear a good chappy does make...so sad for malik though...poor thing....*hugs malik*...awww poor hikari... i hope aku leaves poor malik alone... if any one is going to be in malik's sould room...its going to be marik...
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:37 CST
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Oh my lord I have NOT reveiwed in a while...-__- but OMG good chappie!! I REALLY enjoyed this chapter...lol great work,your a wonderfull writer, I'll be waiting for the next chappie! Chau! Emily
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 15, 2004 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shivering with a bar of chocolate in her hands* .........EEP! * jumps under her desk* 5 minuets later: That was so good! Creepy, and making it so you now have Bakura... not me... * runs into her room and unchains him from her wall* It seemed so innocent.... chocolate and Yaoi... then.... Baka Aku....* darts under desk again* 10 minuets later: YEAH Aku! Bringer of the hot, Egyptian, Yami's! :)
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 13, 2004 19:55 CST
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*squeezes the yami plushie* *yami plushie "SQUEEK"* *raises eyebrow* hmmmmm.... *gives the_great_bakurasgirl_best_bakura/ryou_ autheress_in_the_world a bakura plushie*... fair trade ne? cant wait till the next chappy great_autheress_bakurasgirl, sounds good...
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 13, 2004 09:58 CST
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WHAT!?! That was sooooo short...:( Incredibly good... but short....
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 13, 2004 08:55 CST
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Does happy dance, if you liek lemon coming up scream!*ahh!* if you love bloodlust scmream!*ahh!* yeah thought i had to do my own little cheer. man..people and their gardens...but roses are pretty! ^-^ *cheers* go Malik fight fight fight for youyr rights! Yeahhh!!!! Make Tea come and kill AKu! Yeahhh!!!!! lol...that would be the day...O.o
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA!!!!!!! BUNNIES! Wait..thats the name of my walrus..Bunny..anyway! Taht was pretty ding dang darn hilarious! Hah..Seto afarid of spiders though I am too, but poor boy, and nice lemon by the way, i have used up all good thoughts of a review on the last one, but muwhaha, Aku got a little trace of payback..that would be funny, if like anzu saved the day by shuddering aku with happiness...*cackles* o.o; anywho...what coule be his punishment oo...gonna find out gonna find out..the scandal! mcdonalds..im lovin' it...lol *_*
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im back! and Im black! which is actaully true! But *sniffles* damn evil...aku..gahh!!!*runs around in cirlces* anywho, man seto..dont make him loose it please! though i think that maybe he should give up the toys, burn them, BURN BABY BURN! though im not sure when the revuews will come back for you i want you to know that its all good what your doing and even if i cant review, know that somewhere, someway I am here and what am I doing?! I am reading and thinking about your story and about malik coming back and someone notcing something and aten poor little chibi and aria making things dissappear ahhh!!!! *said that all really fast* feel the love in the room right now, feel it! done now loevmuch valea
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Title: Best Chapter EVER!!!!!
Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 10, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm dying! I can't breath! Laughing.... too... much! That had every thing! And more! Scared Seto...more Seto..... Anzu squishing.... Crying Aku.... Baka Aku.... Screaming Aku... and more scared Seto!!! That... was THE BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!! could you do another one like it soon?! If you do... I may need to go to the hospital! YEAH HOSPITAL! ....* runs and washes mouth out with soap*
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 10, 2004 20:13 CST
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wat?! ewww not yugi, how about i give back bakura for yami? although i keep marik... is it a deal good-fic-writer-bakurasgirl? the chocolate moose thinks its a good trade, i say squee! here me squee!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: January 10, 2004 19:08 CST
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*gasps* GOMEN NASAI!!! I forgot to update last time!! Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Baka desu!!! baka baka baka baka!!! *sighs* I am very sorry! But, getting to your story - Seto is afriad of spiders! AHHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA! And Aku tried to scan Anzu's brain! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHEHEHEHEEHHAHAHAHA!!! What a freakin idiot! Everyone should know Anzu is a freakin mindless twit! Ahahahahahahaha! Go You!!! Anzu Bashing rulz!!!
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Title: kwl
Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 09, 2004 18:11 CST
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SQUEE! neat chappy...poor aten *hands aten a lolly pop*...poor haydian *hands haydian a race car*... poor joey * hands joey seto*... poor misguided aria *hands aria anger managment books*....poor crazy me *grabs bakura and marik and runs off* mwahahahaha! keep the chappys comin!
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Reviewed By: Valea's Messinger service! On: January 08, 2004 22:44 CST
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Hey, this is a friend of Valea's, and she just asked me to tell you that she won't be able to review for a while 'cause she has no access to a computer that will let her do so, but I've been e-mailing her chappies of your story! That would count as a good review, ne?
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 08, 2004 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Poor Aten... Maybe Seto should just move his 'toys'.... Poor Hayden too... I was wondering where he went... and Anzu.... any more Anzu bashing in the future?? I can't wait till Aku meets her... even he's not as demented as she is! And by any chance could you update Sweet Release any time soon?? It's soooo good!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: January 06, 2004 19:03 CST
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...EVIL AKU!!!! EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!.... stupid Aku.... meanie... so mean to Aten>< Guess what? I got beat up today! Go me!! *raises her arms then stops midway* owwwie u.u
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