| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 23, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait!! Poor Marik, bitten by his own extremely kind son. Aria maybe but Aten........ it's just strange. Malik/Aku?!! He has got SOME nerve!! Or is it Malik?
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: super_jm (can't login at the moment)) On: February 23, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
laughs evil as i appear in the shadow realm with a booza. finds Steven and blast off the big end. when the smoke disappears. the whole shadow realm gone. "oops didn't mean to blow up the hole place."
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 23, 2004 15:04 CST
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oh...dont let malik in!... and some one get bakura out of the shadow realm....its so sad...but the great_bakurasgirl knows all *spooky music*... poor aten...i know aria will kick ass...or will she? i was worried about u bakurasgirl *gives you shirtless bakura plushy* hope ur computer wasn't that affected by the virus. and the snow? poor you..
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 23, 2004 07:54 CST
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Whisper-Chan, I was kind of joking.... but I really want to find out what's going to happen!
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Reviewed By: Cryptic Broken Moon On: February 22, 2004 20:42 CST
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Twistedly dark, And awefully addictive. ~Hands you a Bakura plushie~ Congratulations, you have one the Bakura plushie, which proves that this fiction is in the top 5 Crimson Moon Fiction Ratings. Which is hard to get onto, seeing as I am a tough critic.
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Reviewed By: Whisper-Chan On: February 21, 2004 23:46 CST
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*blinks at last comment* Ok..I know she hasn't updated for a day..but give her a brake..I luv this story! Long time reader, first time reviewing! Keep up the good work bakurasgirl! Wouldn't it b adorable if, Malik had a baby? ( if he and Marik forgave each other.) ^^ i just thought it'd b cute. Anywho, I'm awaiting u'r next update! * hands you candy and bounces off*
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 21, 2004 17:38 CST
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First you make Seto sad, then you don't update! Unless someone died, ( in which case I'm very sorry) or you have writers block ( in which case I'm sorry, BUT GET OVER IT!!!!) Then Update!!!! You're torturing me!!! :( You wouldn't want to make a girl with a Giant Purple Monkey ( I Borrowed it from Aten) cry... would you?
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 20, 2004 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This...is getting...sooooooooooooooooo...GOOD! My GOD!! Poor Aten, at least Marik was snapped out of his BIG daze/coma-thingy. Now Ryou has someone in THIS plane of reality that can help him at home. Otogi and Tristan have been really sweet helping Ryou, and Yami IS STILL BEING AN ASS! I think that tablet they found was RIGHT!!!! Something MUST be going on with him, he's being really cruel to EVERYONE! I like the cards, very good choices. Where's Malik/Aku anyways?
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Reviewed By: Amane Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 07:10 CST
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*cringe* I sooo don´t like reading about Aten being in pain like that. x_x *thumps up* But you´re doing a great job! *wants Yugi to slap Yami* MY GODDESS!!! That Pharao Ass pisses me off! *fumes* .. *rolls eyes* And he´s gonna force Seto to help him destroy the cute pie twins? *snorts* Oh pu~lease...gimme a break. -.-;; Delusional much? *gets way to worked up about these things* XD *squeals and huggleglomps bakurasgirl* Those cards are genius! The Loving Servant kicks ass (even the Dark Magician´s if she wants XDXD) and The Helpless Child makes all of my protective urges kick in. ~_~ Although...Aten´s card doesn´t seem to be good for much. o_o I still like it though! And the way they both protected Seth/Seto against Yami was amazing! *nodnodnod* ... *rereads the last review responses* Yeeeeeees, Aria RULES and Yami...DROOLS! ^___^ *cough* Once again you´ve created an amazing chapter, thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: Dark Sapphire On: February 18, 2004 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cool fic! Thank you for writing it! I've been reading your other fics & I finally caught up to the new bits!! Yay for me! Will Joey & Hayden ever forgive Seto??? OH I hope they do, he doesn't deserve this!!! & You guys make Yami seem so evil, it's good to read something different for once! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I want to say I loved it when Ryou went off on Marik (gotta love that anger) Second...NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Joey! Come back to earth! Where's Aku...let me at him! For a second I got kidna confused on the whole girl and the boy, but im sure youll come back with some much alter....THEY CANT BE APART THEY JUST CANT!!!! *jumps and down crying* wahhhhh!!!! its so sad! And he doesnt know..help...soul being destroyed on Seto's part...! *whines* YAMI AND AKU! I COME TO GET YOU! *throws cookies filled with sharp objects in them at them*GRR! Anyway nice anrgy emotions, looking forward to the update, would you like fires, i mean fries with that? *_*
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: February 17, 2004 22:45 CST
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noooo! seto and jou were made for each other..nononononono... this can't happen, and poor bakura, and poor aten...so sad...its my job as dark thief guardian to support bakura, and his son, so sorry if i do go on, but i'm really loyal to my fav. spirit. i hope bakura gets the key out of there soon, think i'll go deliver it my self...hm...thinky...keep up the good work bakurasgirl
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 17, 2004 07:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!!! * starts chucking rabid monkeys ( Rabid Monkeys are like Friendly-Death!) at Yami and Steven* Bakegeta jiji!!!! ( Foolish Old Man!!!! WHOOOOO!!!) Yeah Yugi! No more Meat or Balls for Yami!!!!! :) .... Poor Seto!!!!.....:( And updates on Friday?!?!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Oh... and... *sigh*.... Aten.... y-you can have my Monkey....:)
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 16, 2004 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yami deserved that! He's being SUCH AN ASS! I've said it a million TIMES BUT IT'S true!! aT least rYOU AND bAKURA GOT TO BE TOGETHER A BIT. Sorry, stupid cap lock key. Try to make sense of that. Been checking up multiple times everyday. Keep up the good work and GET MARIK OF HIS LAZY ASS!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 16, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry Im late! My comp hw was going to drive me insane and im sttill not done but anyway NOOOOOO!!!!! Yami you cruel bastard! I bite you! *bites him* I sick my puppy on you! *baku the puppy growls and runs after Yami* Your SO MEAN! *cries* *sings* no body want to be lonely, no body wants to cry!!!!!!!! Yami dont turn into a cruel bastard again! Please!...*runs around* NOOOO!!! WHYY!!!!! Yugi, you can do better than that meanie poo head!!!! *_* anywho...
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