| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 25, 2004 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eww.... sticky book...* runs into the bathroom* OHHHH!!! Naked chibi in the tub! * runs over to him until Marik grabs her from Aten* OHHHH!!! Owner of the 'Prey upon the innocent' thingy! * hugs him really, really hard. OHHHHH!!!!!!! Updates, TOMORROW!!! * hugs you, then, again, sees Seto!*
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: January 24, 2004 17:50 CST
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Teeheehee! That teachers a freakin' jerk, so he got what he deserved!! bwuahahaha! toture/blood/gore sex! woot!
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Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 23:26 CST
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Haven't had a chance to read or review in a while. Thought I'd make an appearance again. Lol. Impressive work. I thought it was interesting and cute that Bakura taught Aria how to hide a body >giggles
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 23, 2004 23:06 CST
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the next chappy sounds absolutly wonerful, you do a great job of making people want to read some more bakurasgirl...or maybe blood, gore, and sex justs attracks me....*think, think*... any way...i cant wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 23, 2004 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Daddy's blood lust! * hugs you tightly, then sees Seto and Bakura and hugs them* Thanks! This was a GREAT chapter! I was starting to get worried that he'd let her grow up without being able to hide a body! :) really wish the Enjoyment Factor:10 thhingy would go up to 1,000,000,000! That's what my rating would be!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 22, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read 20 chapters!!! YEAH!!! Have you noticed that your ratings keep going up? First PG13... now.... A GLORIOUS N17!!! * hugs Bakura till he turns blue, then does the same with Seto.... then both at the same time!* I'm so like Anzu.... sometimes....:) I was wondering.... could you have a scene where Aku sees a Garden Gnome? Those things scare the heck out of me.... *shivers and whacks one really, really hard*
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 22, 2004 20:47 CST
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Oh my Ra! Anzu said something intelligent! "Friendship is like Ryou! Soft, cuddly, and sugary sweet"! * grabs the chibi Ryou, ignoring a very cranky yami*
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 22, 2004 20:38 CST
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I found it! * Does a little happy dance... then trips...and lands on her face...*
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Reviewed By: Confused Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 22, 2004 20:27 CST
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* Is annoyed because she just spent the last 30 minutes trying to find Nanny Bakura on Fanfiction*..... Where is it?
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Reviewed By: Confused Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 22, 2004 20:00 CST
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Umm... is Nanny Bakura on Mediaminer? Or only on Fanfiction? I wanted to read it!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 21, 2004 23:00 CST
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*turns in my comp. chair laughing myself into oblivion* (loved the last line!) *giggle fit* lacy panties....mmm lacy panties...! Anywho back to seriousness...man Ryou, if only you could take out your anger by cracking a whip at them...but anywho it was all good! Thats what that meanie teacher gets! And yeah, so now i know its all because of that PTA woman person..*growls* and if i could send the etachers i didnt like to the shadow realm...well, there wouldnt be very many teachers left. anywho, i felt happy from the sad chapter before (though it was really gerat to se ryou angery...) and i got the computer back hooray!!!! love much valea
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 21, 2004 22:32 CST
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*gets a kiss from bakura, suddenly jump to my feet and carves a pyrimid sized statue of bakura* pant, pant, worship him!!!! *constructs a city in the middle of the dessert dedicated to bakura* i proclaim this is where all bakura fans shall live! *turns to bakura and says: forget the world we'll worship you* squee! good chappy great_autheress_bakurasgirl, bakura and marik better keep a close eye on aria, she just might become the destroyer that she was ment to be...although aten...well.... maybe not...but he still has his cuteness and robby... calisto is a bad person for hurting bakura-sama's mate ryou, she needs some good smoteing...do you plan on making a sequal to this bakurasgirl?
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 21, 2004 22:17 CST
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Are you going to update Sweet Release anytime soon? * Makes chibi eyes*
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 21, 2004 22:16 CST
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Poor Aria!.... And Yeah Aria! My favorite line ever, " Who has daddy's blood lust?" " I do! I do!" :) And leave Seto and Puppy.... Leave Seto alone!!! * Growls like Aria and threatens to hurt her precious, A.k.a. Malik, for his safety.*
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Aria. such a cute little chibi. hug her until she turn blue. hehe another good chapter.
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