| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 12, 2003 12:03 CST
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LOL.... Those kids get into more trouble!!!
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Title: who do we squish first?
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon-don't wanna log in On: December 12, 2003 09:04 CST
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YD: OH DEAR GODS IN HEAVEN!! DD: Must. Fight. Urge. To. Squish!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 18:02 CST
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YEEHEEE!!!!!!!*squeals in happines and crazyness* Total yaoiness and hyperness! At least for me. I'm happy, in the Christmas spirit, and love reading your new story! Yay to Aria and her pink balloon! *falls off chair and twitches in a convulsion...of happines..* Merry Christmas, bakurasgirl!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: December 11, 2003 14:40 CST
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Yaoi... HOBUNAI!!!! if you have lemons soon... Tano shimi!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: December 10, 2003 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Drools* Mmmm.. Bakura, blood, and a shower...:) That was THE best image of Bakura I will ever have!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 22:17 CST
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*Grins* Aria is such a bad child, but a wonderful one. The lemon was wonderfuller than usual and the suspense is killing! Keep up the good work! One question, does karma ever come and bite Eric Barnes and his mother in the butt?
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao, i like fell out of my chair that was sooo great!!!! She has become a ballon sword fiend! I love it!!! *rolls around dying of the laughter* yup, poor Bakura...its not so wrong to truly love someone else too because theyre all a happy go getter family! Yeah!!! anywho friday will be my lucky day the way this is going! (nice begging Kura!!! muwhahahahaa!)SQUEEEEEE!!!! where did you come up with that? Today I was thinking about this in my head like, Joey held a m in his hand and a skittle and he was like meet M's cousin, it is the new M, try this skittle. Okay it was fun in my mind hehe lol SQUEEEEE!!!!!! *giggles*
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal ^_^ On: December 09, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i was crying with laughter when Aria was playing sword with Bakura's dick... that was funny! Yeah, i fully reckon you should get yami to mindcrush anzu one day.... v good idea.... i liked the Marik/Bakura shower scene too... but it should have gone further! lol anyway.... when are the next lemons? Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 09, 2003 10:33 CST
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Whooops!!! I hit enter instead of the tab key... oh well and for u leaving off in the middle of a lemon... shall I pour m's on you and sick the chibis on u?
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 09, 2003 10:31 CST
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 08, 2003 09:56 CST
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Sorry I havent reviewed sooner... I've been working on a new story, and work has been quite... interesting.... So far Story's good...
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Reviewed By: Kaiba lover and Bakura worshiper On: December 06, 2003 17:56 CST
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NOW I find out how to do reviews here... :P I just did it on Sweet Release... both rule!!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yess!!! It finally worked! I just had to add this story to favs...anyway! God Anzu was scary *cringes* That wouls have scared the living daylihghts out of me in like elemtry and probaly still would! lol anyway, and it made me sad Ryou thought that all he did didnt go to any use, but it did and yeah. Will Ryou ever tell Bakura about what really happened when he was with Steven? Yeah, damn Aku, hes screwing it up THE BASTARD!!!!!!!Heh heh, I used a word that was in the story anyway, yeah good stuff and thumbs up seven up!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: December 06, 2003 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey BG... no offence but I think you need to check some of your spelling and grammar before you post up your chapter! I found quite a few mistakes, but it's okay! Besides that... WHAT A GREAT CHAPTER!! I nearly died laughing when Umi said he had been in hurricanes worse than Anzu lol. You should get Yami to mindcrush her one day ^.^
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura Awai On: December 05, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved your story so far *hugs bakura* just wandering if you could add a few NCS scenes with Malik and Marik, like what happend in the past between them...
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