| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: gralnak On: December 14, 2003 21:29 CST
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this isn't in aff, so I came here to read it. good chappie :)GRALNAK
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Reviewed By: Mistress Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great hon! I love your writing.
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Title: great fic
Reviewed By: Bakura_Otaku On: December 14, 2003 14:07 CST
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i feel so sorry for aten, poor chibi. Some one mentiond that when aten and robbie grow up, they go out with each other, is that true? are you gonna write in any cures for poor robbies club foot? i must know, oh, and is there going to be more bakura-kun action any time soon?
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Reviewed By: Senef On: December 14, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, heard your going to post a marik X malik NCS scene... just wondern what chapter thats going to be in...or like when...
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: December 13, 2003 19:33 CST
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awwwww, poor Robbie... that's gotta hurt man. As for your relative... I feel so bad for you.... I hope you get over it soon, tho, all things like that are hard for me.
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal -_- not logged in On: December 13, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*big bubbly watery chibi eyes* You didn't give me a review response! *wails* I feel so deprived! lol kidding... great chapter, can't wait until the next lemons!! Poor Aten, I nearly cried over his dream sequence! I don't like Eric... or Jason!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 16:55 CST
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Mehehehe!!! Down the Drain's a funny chapter! Aria with her trademark balloon, and Aten with his hungry bellybotton! How cute! Can't wait until I get kids like that. ...Devil.. };->
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 01:24 CST
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Sqee!!!!!!!! Oh yeah anywho must share i printed this out to like read on the bus and i left it in the printer and i came home and my mom read like the second half and corrected some of the grammer (would thought she relized it was a little kid) lol. anyway! Man, if you really experienced this im sorry, evil bushes! Have you heard of bush diving? Its a more fun way of playing with bushs you just dve into them a few times and then you can like kill the bush ebfore it kills you. (wrote in one of me fics very fun) anyway! i loved the convo between robbie and aten i was like doing to die from laughter!!! I wonder what would happen if someone popped the ballon of Aria's....heh heh..no thatd be mean, bad valea *bonks myself on the head and slips into sweet uncontioness*
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Title: Looovvveeddd it!
Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye(too lazy to log in) On: December 12, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so sorry to hear about your aunt. Many prayers and vibes of comfort coming for you and your family. As to the story, they are sooooo cute!! *grabs Aten, Robbie, and Aria into giant hug* I think just about all of us can at one point in time understand the pain of a bully. Poor Aten. Hey, I read on Janime's site that in the manga they have the first three or four letters of Yami's true name revealed. They are A-T-either I or E- and possibly N, depending on where you read....hmmm...
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 12, 2003 12:03 CST
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LOL.... Those kids get into more trouble!!!
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Title: who do we squish first?
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon-don't wanna log in On: December 12, 2003 09:04 CST
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YD: OH DEAR GODS IN HEAVEN!! DD: Must. Fight. Urge. To. Squish!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 18:02 CST
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YEEHEEE!!!!!!!*squeals in happines and crazyness* Total yaoiness and hyperness! At least for me. I'm happy, in the Christmas spirit, and love reading your new story! Yay to Aria and her pink balloon! *falls off chair and twitches in a convulsion...of happines..* Merry Christmas, bakurasgirl!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: December 11, 2003 14:40 CST
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Yaoi... HOBUNAI!!!! if you have lemons soon... Tano shimi!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: December 10, 2003 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Drools* Mmmm.. Bakura, blood, and a shower...:) That was THE best image of Bakura I will ever have!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 22:17 CST
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*Grins* Aria is such a bad child, but a wonderful one. The lemon was wonderfuller than usual and the suspense is killing! Keep up the good work! One question, does karma ever come and bite Eric Barnes and his mother in the butt?
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