| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 17:12 CST
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I could kill Aku and you..if i have any kind of mad skills but i dotn so ill praise you instead*glomps you!* MUAHAHAHHA!!!!!! YAY I WON! chibi's soooo cute....*glomps them too and huggles them to pieces* yeah!!!! i love them!!!! ...where did the cause of aten blah blah ablh come from....? *pokes screem* lol
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 15:54 CST
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OOOO!!!! DAMN IT AKU!!!!! ::punchs random things:: But good update!!! Post up the next chappie real soon!!! I need to know what happens... Chau!!!! Emily
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 19, 2003 10:02 CST
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HOLY SHIT!!!! ::: Huggles Ryou :::
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu basher On: December 18, 2003 09:00 CST
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And what do you mean by ' Updates on Friday'!!!! * Starts growling quietly* :) Pleeeeease update early on Friday! :)
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Reviewed By: gralnak On: December 18, 2003 00:04 CST
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Ive decided to parade around school tomorrow yelling 'ITS BUM FUN!!!' :)gralnak
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Title: Bad Author!!
Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: December 17, 2003 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better hide behind her! Poor Ryou! And the thought of naked chibis dancing...:) If Marik wasn't watching me like a hawk I'd 'squish' them too! I r e a lllllll y hope he doesn't do that at school... *Shudders *
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: December 16, 2003 20:05 CST
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*is crying* Poor Aten!!! It may have not been real, but that's so mean! Steven is horrible!!! ah!! *continues to sob*
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOH I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVED THAT LEMOOOOOONNNN!!!!!!!!!!! Evil EVIL ending though!!! How the hell could Steven be back? HE'S DEAD!! DEAD I TELL YA!! Ahem... anyway, you better not kill Aten or I swear you're going down BG!! Sorry that was a death threat... *ahem* anyway, great work!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 16:35 CST
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yay! this got me so relaxed before i took exams(until i acatully took them! lol)and yay i didnt leave it in the printer! yes you are evil for having a cliffe but ull upidate quick *huggies* nice lemon, nice to see ryou get so much attention right about now ^_^ sorry to hear about the aunt, but i review to make you feel happyful and goodjoby!!!
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 15:23 CST
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::gets hit with random books:: I know i know! I didn't reveiw! I didnt check my mail for a while so I didn't know you updated. But omg no!!! gigantic evil cliffie!! ::glares:: ^_^ But plz continue it right away! i need to know what happens!!! Hmm... oh yes, and good lemon! Chau! Emily
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Title: DAMN YOU!!
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon-don't wanna log in On: December 16, 2003 15:23 CST
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YD: DO NOT hide hide behind me! DD: Me either!! YD: Geeze, just when I was becoming a puddle of Dragon Ooze from that lemon... DD: You are SO in trouble!!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: December 16, 2003 12:35 CST
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::: Grabs Aria and hides both their eyes :: OHH NO!!!
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Title: You are soooo gonna get it!!
Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 09:32 CST
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That was like...Woah! Ryou x Malik....sweet!!Damn Aku! Arrgghhh!! *anyway* Totally coolies story and I hope that this continues! The chibi's really are too cute for there own good! *squishes Aten and Aria* Updates soon!!!! Take care dear!
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Reviewed By: PharaohYamisPrincess On: December 16, 2003 06:34 CST
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O.O You didn't just end it like that!!! That is just so disturbing. Hehe Marik/Ryou! I loved it! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Seto lover and Bakura worshiper On: December 15, 2003 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Aten! I hope he makes even more friends... the cute little chibi... * runs over and hugs him... until she sees Marik...* Oh hi Marik..... I'm NOT Anzu... don't worry...I won't give him a balloon.. eh he...* runs away quick;y*
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