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Title: Something Special(entire story)
Reviewed By: Sadness Without Regret On: November 13, 2004 21:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your own devotion to keeping with some reality shows that you truly love writing. If you are not already you should become an author to characters of your own design. The story is vivid and true romance is portrayed by a a love that never wanes even after four and a half centuries.Although I'm not exactly sure I would keep the rating at R, the sexual scenes are tasteful and real. You have a real talent. Your only flaw was that you rushed the passage of time between each child but anyone would have difficulty with that because if you use too much time setting them up then not only do you have to include them thoroughly but you have to give them side stories.However, if you don't spend enough time on them, they seem meaningless which they are anything but.You used a constant good sense of humor which also is difficult to balance yet you did very well.Good luck and may your stories be many and your future be bright. The world does not know itself and cannot know if it is to survive.The truth is what we ask, but lies are what we need.This is the Sadness Without Regret.
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Reviewed By: Mandy234 On: November 12, 2004 22:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW great story i love it ^_^ keep on writing you are really good at it!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Ikiwi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 18:20 PST
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Do you understand how amazing you are at writing!?!? It's truely unbelievable how well you interpreted the characters and made such an amazing story. However, I think that your creation of Yukio was even greater. I simply loved this character, and I thought that you really developed his personality well. It took me such a long time to read this story, and I am very happy that I took the time to finish with it! It was so great. I loved it!
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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: SylverAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 12:03 PST
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I wish I'd had time to read this earlier, but then again, maybe it's better because now it's all finished and i won't be waiting for updates :) I'm not totally finished yet, but so far I'm liking what I've read. I can see where some people might have thought Inuyasha is out of character, but you just have to project him a few years into the future :) He seems to be one of the harder characters to work with and keep well in-character anyway-- his personality seems somewhat more open to interpretation than most of the others, or something. It's harder to have him participate in a normal, every-day conversation than any of the other characters, that's for sure! I think the hardest thing I have problems with in this story is realizing that not much time has really passed, since Yukio grows much more quickly than humans! That's just my own brain getting it confused, though. You do play him out to be cute, and easily imaginable :) It makes you wonder what Inuyasha was like as a young pup, at least at the age Yukio's at, when he wasn't really old enough to realize other people weren't going to accept him. Great job with the writing, and hopefully I'll get more time to read the rest soon! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 08:43 PST
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i loved this story so much!!! it was the best story i've ever read and i loved how they came back on their wedding day...it made me cry. this was a very heart-warming (is that how you spell it...i dunno...i've gotten very little sleep because i just couldn't take my eyes away from this) story. in the words of that Saturday Night Live character from a few years ago (i think like 6 or 7...that makes me feel a bit old, but anywho) i love it! i love it! i love! *even throws the way the character moved on the chair for extra measure* i have to read the other ones now!!! *sigh* great story and very very very well written....
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 03:32 PST
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i'm on chapter 24 and i can't put it down, or actually take it off the screen. it's 5:30am and i should at least get a couple hours of sleep. this is an awesome story and it makes me laugh and it makes me cry (and right now i'm worried about Sesshoumaru). this is in my top three!! well, i take that back...it's my favorite fanfic i've read!!! it's wonderfully written and the characters are true to the anime/manga. i love seeing inuyasha's sensitive side. i know it's there in the anime/manga, but sometimes you want more and this story gives it to me. the baby is cute too!!! i love how there's an inu-youkai language going on...i've never read that anywhere else and i like it. (it makes sense!) alright...i'll stop rambling and go to bed so i can wake up and read more.... (i can't wait to read the others)
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Title: Got enough great reviews yet?
Reviewed By: Another One On: November 03, 2004 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think there's anything good left to say that someone hasn't alreeady said, but I'll pretend i said it all first.
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Title: Aww, so sweet, i finally get the title
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 13:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IM so sorry i havent reviewed or read the end sooner... i kinda did that with three stories, yours, purity, and Amar Otra Ves. So now i have one more to go i think. This is a great story, so sweet. You write so well its amazing, i wish i could write this well, but then again maybe i can, i just dont read over my work, lol. Well, this is definatly the best written story i have ever read! to bad the story had to end but i guess all of them have to sometime or another right... i cant wait to tell my sis about it and some of my other friends...well, later ;)
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Reviewed By: i think it's funny On: October 30, 2004 11:37 PDT
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you know what i think is funny? at the end of chapter 34 you say there's only 2-3 (maybe 4) chapters left. i love this fic. it's so sweet.
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Title: the lucky ones
Reviewed By: saphirespride On: October 28, 2004 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats it thats the end?....NO U CAN'T DO THAT TO ME
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Reviewed By: sweet-craziness On: October 26, 2004 14:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!! I loved this story soo much!! I read it a couple of months ago and I loved it. I wanted to re-read it but I COULDN'T FIND IT!! I've been searching for it ALL week!! I felt like crying...I seriously had a nervous breakdown. Thank god I found. Wasn't it on fanfiction.net before? Because I couldn't remember where I read it. But anyways, really REALLY good story. Keep up the good work! I recommended it to ALL my friends.
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Title: um. long winded?
Reviewed By: Song-Bird On: October 16, 2004 17:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read a bunch of your stories and just realised i've never reviewed ^^ i loved this tender moment between the two of them, and its different from most other fics i've read. i like how hes not just being an ass to her for no reason like in other fics because i don't think thats how he is in the actual anime, hes also not all gushy and incredibly OOC like others. what i'm trying to say is, he stays in char. i'm so excited! there are so many more to read! (chapters) i am liking this 'dreamless' sleep thing. dreams in anime/manga usually mean bad omen type visions ~_~ that would totally ruin the 'mood' awesome writing!
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Title: Congratulations on a Masterpeice
Reviewed By: WarriorDrgnMageLH On: October 12, 2004 21:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to congradulat you on such persavernce and creativity. Truely this story is is masterpeice of skill and art worthy of the Manga and it might even surpass it! ~LH~
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm6/18/79 On: October 12, 2004 16:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. You're truly a gifted author. This is a wonderful and lovely story. I laughed I cried I smiled. I can't express how much I loved and enjoyed your story.
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Reviewed By: M@G8 On: October 11, 2004 18:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're so great!! I LOVE this story!! I searched so hard to find it because it was in fanfiction.net anymore!!! This story is so cute! Hope you could make another! You really don't know the art that you have, and I beg the god to give me yours. So continue I'm your #1 fan and if you want to know about me then....go on this site... http://www.fanfiction.net/~mg8 See you soon lol!! Mag
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