| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 17:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an excellent author and I love your fic. I'm gonna miss this story but it was amazing. I wish I could write like that. I look forward to reading more of your stories and seriously I almost cried...ok i did. :D
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Title: I'll miss this!
Reviewed By: Farah Layla On: September 08, 2004 12:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was abosolutly BEAUTIFUL! I'm going to miss the lucky ones so much! your an unbeleivable writer and i look foward to reading (i hope) more of your work. thank you so much for writing this it has been a pleasure reading it. F. Layla~
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Reviewed By: anrehah On: September 08, 2004 10:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's over... I will really miss reading this, and will probably just keep rereading it... ;D This is a beautiful story, and you should congradulate yourself for the wonderful job you've done! I hope you write other fics, and I look forward to reading them. In the mean time, thank you for sharing this story with us, and I hope you can go places with this. anrehah
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Title: Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: Nikikie On: September 08, 2004 04:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* Oh my god...that was most likely the best story I shall ever read in my life! I loved it sooo much! hehe =) Great...now I feel like crying =P
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Reviewed By: Lady Pantera On: September 07, 2004 21:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank-you, thank-you, thank-you!! You are an amazing author! Your writing, your story, your characters, the detail! Everything flows so perfectly and your story is so believable!! Thank-you for such a wonderful masterpiece! It's sad that it's now over, but that just means that you get to write a new story, and I can't wait to read what you come up with next. I know it'll be fabulous! Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: inu.ob On: September 07, 2004 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe its just me but the epilogue sorta stops in the middle of nowhere. Hopefully my computer hasnt messed up cuz if it has it has ruined the ending to the best story ever!!!! UHHH!! Anyways hopefully whatevers wrong gets fixed soon... I AM SOOOOO SADDD that the fic is ending. I love this fic so much I don't know if i can handle it!!! Keep writing, even if it isnt continuing with this story i'm sure it will be just as good! inuyasha_obsession (inu.ob)
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Reviewed By: Sango_the_darkwindwarrior On: September 07, 2004 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been meaning to comment on something I absolutly love about this fic and it's name is Yukio. I LOVE THIS BABY! I wish he was my son, he's so darling i could go on forever. I love him! great fic!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is sooo awesome. I love it, and I love you now too!! join the list of people that I love, and spread the joy!! YAY!! Huggles and roses and cookies for everyone!! total yayness all around!! and I think Ian is a cute name for the littlest one... you put a lot of thought into this whole story, and I think that you could write fiction novels for a living if you wanted to. well, anyhoo!! LUVED IT!! HOPE YOU WRITE MANY MORE WONDEROUS STORIES IN THE FUTURE!! ~~~Starlett~~~
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Reviewed By: gittelbug(when loged in) On: September 07, 2004 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story for so long! I can't believe that it's over! But it was great! I loved every minunte of it and how eveyone was in charater. I think we the readers are the lucky ones for reading this story!!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Inu-Yasha_15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 13:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was truly the best story I have ever read your writing style is close to perfect and the story just is i urge you to please do the one shots because i really want to know what happens to yukio ian and miroku and what happens to inuyasha and kagome, are they going to have another child... hell you could make a whole sequal based on all of that i just cant belive its over but everything has to end somewhere. please e-mail me at jenks_super_fan@yahoo.com and tell me if your writing any current stories Because I would love to read them. have a great time and godbless
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Reviewed By: BrightEyes326 On: September 07, 2004 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I absolutley LOVED this story it was so beautifully wonderful! I laughed, I cried and was angry and glad-its just so fantastic and realistic. I can not believe its over, its just so brillant you dont want it to really end but all good things must. I truly hope you continue writing fanfiction, you are a excellant writing. Thank you for you marvelous contribution of Art to us all.
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Title: sad to see it end
Reviewed By: Kanzen ne Tsuki On: September 07, 2004 09:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most wonderful and beautiful love stories I have ever read. It has so often filled me with humor, sadness, and hope that I have been constantly wanting more. It is one of the stories that will stay on my webpage for the diration of its lifetime, and I will consider myself lucky to have found it. It is a shining jewel that brings wealth and precious stones of wisdom with it. Thank you for sharing it with me and everyone else who has read it. God bless, Terri. I look forward to reading anything else you write. I think you deserve to have your own spotlight on my page. Keep writing... and I hope Kristin keeps drawing for you. Her portraits of your characters give a certain life to your stories that few ever gain. Don't ever stop, Kanzen ne Tsuki LadyInBlk4@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Sango_the_darkwindwarrior On: September 07, 2004 06:57 PDT
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InuYasha is so not out of character! I think he's just the way he should be! He's like that on the t.v. show... he just doesnt show it! lol
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: September 07, 2004 06:51 PDT
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It was beautiful. Made me cry. I'm really looking forward to anything you add to the story. Thank you for sticking with this story and finishing it! I've reread the whole thing a number of times and love it just as much each time. Thank you very, very much for writing! You have given me many happy days of joyful reading. Words can not express my gratitude.
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: YoukaiFate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 02:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful ending. I loved it, especially the tie-in at the end as to who the lucky one was. Sniffles. I love this story, and I urge you, desperately plea, actually, that you continue with your one-shots. I would like to know how Ayumi and Miroku will get on, and if Yukio will ever find a new mate. And if Kagome will have another pup, though Ian is perfect. Also, I would like to know if you have any published work out there, or urge you to consider it. Your writing is fantastic, and you have a loyal reader in me. I'll even pay for it! LOL. Take care and may the kami bless you as you have blessed me with this wonderful story. Fate
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