| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Title: Noting Greatness
Reviewed By: wingless_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 11:44 PDT
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This fic is amazing and i have loved reading it so far personally io think your style of writing is something to be incrediably proud of.... and i know that whatever you have reserved for the last chapter it will blow your faithful readers away....like a tornado or maybe even a hurricane... -loved it
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 11:08 PDT
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Kawaii. Great chapter. Love the story. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Haunt On: August 14, 2004 09:47 PDT
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Eeeee, puppy has a na-ame! I like the name Ian, especially since it's in memory of one of Inuyasha's workers. It seems like the first Ian was a good friend of his. Humm, can't wait to see what they do to Hattori....I think Tetsusaiga needs to get a nice workout, ne?
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Reviewed By: Shadowed_Fang On: August 13, 2004 15:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fan fic!! u r a GODDESS/GOD! u and Kristin at Kristinsstudio.com u have such a unique style of writing and ur stoy is the most original fic i have ever read! (and i have read ALOT of fan fics...) the whole thing about the hanyou sterility was genious. i have been and are looking forward to the next installment to this extrodinary fan fic. S_F
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (not logged in) On: August 13, 2004 07:52 PDT
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ahhhhh! i love it! "The Mate" priceless! cant wait till the next update. gonna be sorry to see this one finish
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Reviewed By: emelynooopee(nli) On: August 12, 2004 23:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that really took me a long time to read of course i read it in a course of three days many chapter too many... well first of that was a well written original fic. i was completely engrossed within the first few chapters. the use of characters and the timeline worked as well... in some fics most timelines get screwed up. and the bit about hanyous being sterile and hard to sire excellent. and that was alot of children. oo my...i like tetsu alot and eri she is a fireball indeed. and miroku i always picture monk miroku i can't picture him as a hanyou, ya know... well i can't wait till the next installment
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: August 12, 2004 22:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter and its past midnight. I have writing editorials and giving speechs to condemn those so call "Swift Vets for truth" who are nothing but a pack of liars who did not even serve with Kerry. If you see them, denounce them. There slander is unethical and distasteful. Urrah Semper Fidelis
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 21:44 PDT
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ohh, only two more?!?! Maybe you'll write more little featurettes like the strip poker one! This was such a nice chapter to read...especially after all of the exitement that has been going on in the story lately. I love to see Kagome and Inuyasha interact with each other like this. It is just so touching. So most of the staff is scard of him, huh? I liked seeing the contrast between protective Inuyasha and the loving and cuddly Inuyasha. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. hehe
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Reviewed By: Michelle Perry On: August 12, 2004 14:10 PDT
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OOOHH, this is good, I like this, please keep updating, please keep updating!!!!!!
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Title: /happy sigh/
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 13:27 PDT
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awww!! a nice CALM chappy, with lots of fluff... THANK YOU!!! hehehehehe... i can't get enough of fluffy Yasha-chan ~Caliko
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Title: Coming full circle...
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 12:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the eagle-youkai nurse's reference to Inuyasha as "The Mate." Heh! And I like the symmetry with how this story is coming full circle, beginning and ending with a child for Inuyasha and Kagome. You've done a wonderful job with this story and these characters, and "The Lucky Ones" will definitely be one of the stories I read time and again. Thanks for sharing this with us!
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: August 12, 2004 11:24 PDT
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i fully enjoyed reading your newest chapter. so sweet, i love kag/inu moments^^ I will say out of all the fics i have read yours is excellent....it's sad to know the storys is ending soon. but i hope to be reading more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 02:28 PDT
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i really liked that chapter. it was so sweet. and i liked the part that was from a third party view. it was refreshing form the every day first or (non existant) third person. i'm a little sad that the story is so close to being done. i'll miss it. can't wait to see what they name the pup. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: joyce
Reviewed By: JLF On: August 12, 2004 02:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story and will hate it when to complete it. I even went back to reread many of the chapters. I read a lot of fanfiction but overall, the Lucky Ones is the best story I have read yet and you should win many awards for this well-written very creative and original story. I have one request: I would love for you to continue a part two of the Lucky Ones that would be abt the pup growing up and also I love the characters Yukio and Muroko (sorry about the spelling). I think it would by interesting to have a spinoff story about Yukio find another mate and find happiness. I just thought it was sad that his mate died. Please consider doing the spinoff about yukio and a sequel to the Lucky Ones. Thank for one of the most entertaining fanfictions I have yet to read. Joyce F
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 01:34 PDT
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that was a great chapter cant whait for the next
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