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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 16, 2004 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I am really really really upset about that damn doctor.
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: July 16, 2004 19:57 PDT
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omg....this story had my stomache in knots of the antcipation! this story is beyond wonderful! i hope they live ;_;
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: July 16, 2004 19:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. When ever I get tired of Inuyasha bashing fics, I turn to this and it just seems right so far. But this chapter, you had me in tears. I thought Kagome was going to die. I hope the next chapter comes out soon because you just ended it on a cliff hanger. I hope the next chapter is a happy one.
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Reviewed By: sharpieg On: July 16, 2004 18:55 PDT
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Oh... my... god... I've read this chapter twice now, and each time my heart was pounding. I hope that everything will turn out all right in the end, and that the story ends (although I'm not looking forward to the end...) with Kagome and Inuyasha getting to enjoy the new pup along with the rest of the family. And I also hope that the family goes after those doctors with all the legal force that they went after the other mean doctor with. Thanks again for another great chapter! And please update soon because I don't handle suspense well at all. :)
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Title: The Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: fluffytuffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the last chapter posted and .... WOW... That had me at the edge of my seat the whole time. I can not wait till the next one so please do not keep all your avid fans waiting to long. And I hope when this is all done that you find it in yourself to do another Inuyasha fic. This has just been wonderful. So please keep us posted. Thank you. ~~~ FluffyTuffy~~~
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 17:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon! oh please! dis is very scary. I am about to cry! Ahhhhhh!!;_: Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow--poor Kagome just has the absolute worst luck with doctors, doesn't she? And being a doctor herself...yikes! Very suspenseful chapter, beginning with Inuyasha behind the wheel through the Tokyo morning traffic. Ai-yi-yi...those poor delivery truck drivers must have had a collective heart attack! Great storytelling, as always, Terri!
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Reviewed By: Cat61 On: July 16, 2004 17:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...fantastic story so far..but what a horrible place to leave off! That's so mean! Although I understand the reasoning, it makes us wait for more...but ouch. Excellent excellent, keep up the fantastic work!
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Reviewed By: Haunt On: July 16, 2004 16:58 PDT
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YOU.ARE.EVIL!!!! Aaaaaaaaaaack!!! This had ME screaming for them all! That bastard Hattori...*grinds teeth* what the HELL was he thinking, letting her go that far under?! My hands are still shaking!!! Please, please, please update soon, and if you don't I'm going to hurt something...I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!
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Title: Perfection
Reviewed By: Kagome Kamiya On: July 16, 2004 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, I am blown away by the greatness of this story. This chapter had me shaking near tears with worry for everyone. The image of Inuyasha holding Kagome in the end of this chapter was beautiful. Everything about this story is perfect, flawless. Your story should be published, No. it deserves something much better. God, you are amazing. My only sadness if that you post this story on fanfiction sites when it makes everyone else feel like shit about themselves because this story is so awesome. Your writing makes everyone else's lower then dog crap. hehe. Hell, I don't even deserve to be reviewing this....No one does. You are amazing. I greatly look forward to the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your talent with us once again.
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Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: Kanzen ne Tsuki On: July 16, 2004 15:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have out done yourself, Terri. This was absolutely breath taking... and a good 2 kleenex cry. Grand work, dear. On a side note... I have 3 children... I went pre-eclampsic with the last 2. It is a frightening and uncertain experience. I wouldn't wish it on anyone. And the headache's... they really are horrible. My babies were always delivered ceserean to avoid the possibilities of complete eclampsia... but it is like walking through hell to hang onto yor baby long enough to bring it into the world healthy enough to survive. And mom's body... it's just never quite the same afterward.
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Reviewed By: Krista On: July 16, 2004 07:34 PDT
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Please update soon! I'm really anticipating the next chapter! :3 I check everyday to see if you've updated.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 13:42 PDT
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aaaaaawwww. when is the baby going to be born already>??? I'm stuck woundering if there is another plot goin on here and it'll make the stroy 3 story's in one.
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Title: Awesome story!
Reviewed By: Lady Pantera On: July 15, 2004 12:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic!! I love the way you connected everything from the past and the future! Even Kagome being Sango's decendent, that was perfect! I love that you have them all over the past and future. The story is very believable. Excellent attention to detail! Please email me when you have updated, I can't wait to read the rest! theladypantera@yahoo.com. Keep up the excellent work!!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just seems so real to me. Like this could actually be part of the story. It's wonderful. I would love to be emailed when it's updated. I want to finish reading it once you've finished writing it. nymphminxgoddess@aol.com
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