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 Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 11:23 PDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
 Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 10:51 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Aha! i knew it! You had depressing plans with Tetsu's sight and Kagome's Birth! Although, to me it shouldn't matter if Fluffy-sama's still got Tensaiga. I liked the chapter. I really like the irony of he racist doctor having a child with strong spiritual powers. The irony behind that is funny. Keep up the good work! You are an awsome writer!
 Title: good things come to those who wait
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 08:25 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I enjoyed this chapter so much... but I must admit it left me with a dark feeling as I began to wonder... is Kagome going to die in child birth and take herself and Inuyasha out of the world of the living? Is that how their immortality is finally going to come to an end? Are Yukio and Mariko going to be left to raise their pup? Some very interesting questions to ponder... I'm not sure yet how I feel about them. I do know I will patiently wait for your next update. Thank you, Terri Kanzen ne Tsuki
 Title: what a softie!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 07:04 PDT
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**big grin** yasha-chan is SUCH a softie! lol.. anyway, i think i know where you're going with the doctor (the witch) and the Baboon doctor.. but i'm keeping my mouth shut. I like waiting to see if i'm right or not. The tantalizing wait just ADDs to the experience! hehehe.. ok.. i'm a bit strange this morning.. lol Keep up the good work! ~Caliko
 Reviewed By: Farahlayla  On: July 09, 2004 06:21 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Amazing chapter as always! The Dr. having gifted child was quite interesting..i wonder what will come of that....but more over i'm worried as to what Tetsu really saw.....cant wait to read more!
 Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: KarissaEB  On: July 08, 2004 19:32 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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OMG. Wow. I read all of this in one night (stayed up until almost 5AM too) and am in a state of AMAZEMENT. I'm dying to read more!! :D Karissa :)
 Title: NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: wothless_poet  On: July 08, 2004 18:59 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!! WHERE IS THE REST?!!?!?!?
 Reviewed By: Rashell_Kouran [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2004 14:54 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awsome you should publish and get money that was just as good as any other you wrote you know how to make a great story and this is the 5 inuyasha story i have read and its the best one ever....you have to keep up the good work with all of it....cant wait for the next chapter and what about that weird docter filling in.....creepy....anyway good luck on finshing.
 Title: YAYYY!!@!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 07, 2004 08:22 PDT
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Ok - finally got to read it! /wheew (wiping sweat off forehead)/ was jonesing for the next installment! LOL.. Glad that everything is ok, and that Miroku is getting help! ~Caliko
 Reviewed By: ruinmew  On: July 06, 2004 10:28 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great story so far, can't wait for the update, i read fast so its good to know there are still really long stories out there
 Reviewed By: dArK_pSyBoRg18 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2004 12:47 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Awesome chapter! I was an inch away from the computer screen the whole time... I'm glad Miroku realized he was wrong... Can't wait for the next update! A loyal fan, Tiffany M.
 Title: ch 41
Reviewed By: AnimeObsessionFantasy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2004 23:26 PDT
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wowee... that's a lot of things thats happening lol XD i love the shirts tho!! funny as hell! hehe
 Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2004 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the first Inu Yasha fanfiction I've read and I am glad it is this one. I actually at a loss of words to say. I laughed and cryed and enjoyed reading this story. I find it very oringinal and feel that the big suprise is yet to come.
 Reviewed By: wiket  On: July 01, 2004 03:53 PDT
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That was one helluva chapter! I was literally bawling my eyes out in between laughing over the t-shirts. You are amazing! You could seriously earn a shitload of money doing this if you aren't already. You sure know how to pull those heartstrings! Keep it up! I seriously want to know how this ends, but since you have acquired such a following for this storyline, it would be extremely satisfying to be able to read a sequel or another sidestory to the TLO-verse. You seriously ROCK! Off tha Richter!!!
 Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2004 03:17 PDT
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that made me cry. the whole part with Inuyasha comforting Miroku. *sniff* so many things running through my head. such good parents. so sweet and understanding. *sniff* it's going to make me cry again. i feel like, yes, everything really is going to be ok. that is untill we find out what's happening to Tetsu. I hope he's ok. i don't know if my nervs can take another brake down. did he see something? is something going to happen? he said the pup would be born ok and alive, but that's not all he saw was it? the suspence is frightening. i'm so releaved that everything with Miroku is going to be ok and yet so worried that something bad is going to happen with Tetsu. eep. the conflicting emotions. i can't wait to see what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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