| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: ricebabe On: June 13, 2004 18:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...can't wait... Go Yukio Go
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:43 PDT
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Funny and all over great chapter! Kutos to you for eveything!!
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Reviewed By: gahjula [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:17 PDT
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I love Lucky Ones, which begs the question of why I've never bothered to review it before..... I wanna see what Yukio does to the 'good doctor' lol
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Reviewed By: darkempereror not sgned in On: June 13, 2004 17:06 PDT
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Kirara is Buyo huh? I always thought Buyo was a boy,but hey if it works the story. As usual, you're doind awsome. Whoever wrote wow, thats short can go and get the brain checked because i think that chapter is very long. Nice happy ending to all and once again, this chapter, and every other chapter rocks.
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 16:46 PDT
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wow that was short.
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Title: What a wonderful chapter!!
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great to read - but I just have one question: when Yukio confronts Inuyasha and Kagome in their old room, why does he act then as if Kagome is more important to him than Inuyasha? And glad to see Kouga and Ayame mated! Is there still more to go? It's not over yet?? What happens with Kagome's pregnancy?? Can't wait to read more! ^_^ Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: June 12, 2004 18:37 PDT
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WOWIE I LOVE IT! what can i say? this chapter was superb! i cant wait to read more!
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Title: Oooooh WONDERFUL!
Reviewed By: dArK_pSyBoRg18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 05:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN! You've done it again! :D This chapter, like all your other chapter, was simply wonderful. I can't wait for more! (Thanks for updating :D) -Tiffany M.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Tiranth (never signed in) On: June 10, 2004 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been trucking through this for the last two days and I was waiting till I got to the end of what you have posted to review but when I got to this I just had to say: Bravo! Your rebuttal is one of the best I've seen. You explain yourself and cite examples, something as you pointed out, your accusers never do. Now for the story, I am absolutly loving it. DelKaidin told me about this a couple months ago and I never had the chance to start reading it. I finally was unable to sleep one night and pulled it up, now I'm hooked. It is well written and you are true to the character in my humble opinion. Del has also clued me in to the whereabouts of your other story (the vampire one) and I am going to read that when I am finished with this. Thank you for posting this, I am very much enjoying it. Tiranth
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Reviewed By: Krista On: June 08, 2004 10:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I've never read a story like this, and it's so enjoyable! I hope there's a good ending out of this, because it would match with an awesome story! =D Keep up the good work and keep updating! =D
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 19:52 PDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: June 07, 2004 16:54 PDT
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Yes! Another great chapter! This one had me giggling and even managed to bring some red to my cheeks (Which I give you credit for, because that doesn't happen often...). I'm also almost waiting in fear for Kagome's labor, after that whole thing with Tetsu. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, even though that means that the story is almost done. I'll be sad to see it go, but, at least I'll be able to go back and read it all over again. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: June 07, 2004 16:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you are nearing completion. Keep up the good work.
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Title: love it!!!!!!
Reviewed By: wildgirl4560 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far i just love this story its so good its made me laught and cry. but if you could let Yukio find someone to love that would be great.
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Title: Me again
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIwould On: June 07, 2004 15:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS Fan-FICTION!!! Although I have to say Yukio is a little more casual than I would be about his parents getting busy in front of him, even after a few hundred years I'd still be BUGGING OUT. But anyways, good story! Keep updating! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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