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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 02:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the stories I've read on mm.org and ff.net, this is definately one of my top three favorites. I adore this storyline; it is very plausible. The characters are written true: keeping their personalities, and have continued to develope in a believable way. I've added this fanfic to my favorites, and I'm looking forward to an update.
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Title: Comment and Question
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan (offline) On: July 14, 2004 04:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're a great writer! Very original! I was just wondering how you knew those different japanese phrases and translations. Is there a site you go to? If so please email me at Animebunny2007@aol.com if it's not too much trouble. Thanks for the enjoyable story!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 01:38 PDT
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aww. sorry about the late review. was out of town with no internet. such a good chapter. i like how you had us see the other side of the docter. i hated her so much when she was mean to Kagome, Inuyasha, and Yukio but now i feel kind of sorry for her. ... in a mad sort of way. i hope everything goes ok with the birth. you've gotten me all worried because of the visions and what not. and i'm not sure i like that new doctor either. well i've got to go. it feels late even with my slight jet lag. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: YES
Reviewed By: Inu-Yasha_15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My Computer has been f-ing up so i couldent read my fav fic (this one) but it only took me three days to read it lol. your doing a really great job and please keep going. by the way do you have any other fan fics?
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: kagome7 On: July 13, 2004 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKED HOW U MADE INUYASHA AND KAGOME REALISTIC TO THE SERIES.THE STORY WAS GREAT AND I HOPE U ADD MORE CHAPTHERS!WELL BYE THEN.
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Reviewed By: kagome7 On: July 13, 2004 11:58 PDT
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 12, 2004 23:01 PDT
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Yea! Another great chapter. Been feelin kinda stressed the last few weeks. This story makes me happy and takes my mind off my vexations. Thank you so much for writing!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 14:51 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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The story was recommended on the Hero21 board so I spent the weekend reading all extant chapters; very enjoyable. The most memorable line was something like "I just give her sweet spot a couple of licks and she's wet as a fish." For whatever reason, that just stuck with me. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next but I guess I'm afraid you will take the story all the way to Kagome and Inu Yasha's deaths -- which even at the end of looong happy lives is still kind of a downer unless you take it past death I suppose.
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Title: Man! This is good!
Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 09:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God! This fic is AMAZING! When I finished, i was speechless....I truly didn't have the words to describe it, except for amazing! I'm not the type of person to write a review in the middle of the story, but this one is definitely an exception! The way you were able to draw me into the fic and bring out every conceivable emotion was incredible! I felt as though I was actually in the story and feeling the same emotions as the characters. I felt their joy, their sorrow, their pain, their worry...I truly savored every moment! Your vocabulary and grammar was astounding, and the way you put so much information into the story did wonders! Your use of the colloquial japanese language and customs left me speechless. You are truly a treasure and should not let you talents go to waste! Now you definitely have to update....I have to know what happens to the baby and Kag. Please feel free to email or aim me so i know you received this. Keep up the x-cellent work! Corinthia.
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Reviewed By: EarthDragonette [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another extremely well done and *very* cute chapter. I think that it's good you kept up some of the tension between our two heroes. One would have thought that maybe, after four hundred years or so of marriage, they would've worked all the kinks out, but showing Kagome's stubborn side let us all know that, despite all the time together, both she and Inuyasha are still growing and learning. That was a wonderful point to make and your execution of said point was flawless. I also enjoyed getting some time with more of Kagome's children - and Yukio's punishment for Miroku was *priceless*. Wonderful, wonderful chapter overall =)
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: July 10, 2004 09:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still quite good, though you should settle the Ishmoro problem to get it out of the way.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: July 09, 2004 20:14 PDT
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I just love this story. Please continue again soon. Also I think Kagome's friend Ayumi (sp?) would be good for Kagome's son Miroku I think they would make a cute couple. I would have said Yukio but he already had a mate and most likely will not take another so soon (for youki/hanyou) after her death if at all. Anyway just my opinion Great story! Update soon
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 18:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm almost glad I waited until now to read this story. I got the joy of reading fourty chapters all at once. It took me three days total to read what's posted so far. I'm enjoying this story emensly, I look forward to the end.
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Title: Chapter 43
Reviewed By: dArK_pSyBoRg18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 12:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! This, of course, was yet another great chapter. You never cease to amaze me. Miroku was so cute! LoL... And Dr. Ishimoro's daughter... now THAT was interesting. I like the way you ended it too... LoL. Can't wait for another update! A fan, Tiffany M.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(signed on) On: July 09, 2004 11:39 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter! It would be so like Kagome to go to the doctor and try to make things right. You do an amazing job of keeping everyone in character. I thought it was seriously funny when Yukio was thwacking Miroku on the head and when Inuyasha said said he would get Kagome a pregnacy pad!! Please update as soon as you can.
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