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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 12:54 PDT
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Great addition to this wonderful story! I really want to know what else Tetsu saw. I hope the baby and Kagome are alright. I can't believe Buyo was Kirara!!!!! That is so freaky!!!!! I hope I get a husband like Inuyasha who stills cares about pleasing me in bed so much!!!! Kagome is lucky!!!! Yukio is co cute when he does the "Sorry Sorry" in inu talk!!!! Awww who couldn't forgive him? I wonder what the baby is going to be, boy or girl. I can't really tell which would be better for them since they're good with both. Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: another good installment
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 12:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Your character interactions, both familial and sexual, continue to be among the most naturalistic and down-to-earth that I've ever read in fanfiction. Kudos for keeping it real while managing to show such deep bonds of love and affection between Inuyasha and Kagome and their various children. It looks like you're ready to move into the true climax of this story with the introduction of a jeopardy centering around the birth of Kagome's baby (or at least that's what you seem to be foreshadowing with the dragon-hanyou's vision). I like how you're bringing the end of this story back around to the beginning, with the introduction of a baby into the lives of Inuyasha and Kagome, and all of the consequences that follow. Keep up the good work...I'm sure you've heard this numerous times already, but you're a talented writer and I love spending time with your characters.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 11:52 PDT
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oh that was a nice chapter. but how many chaps are left??? and I'm curious to know what kagomes son saw when he touched her.
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Reviewed By: dragoninu2 On: June 07, 2004 08:44 PDT
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Thanks again for such a wonderful story! I can't wait to see what happens next. The dialogue and the maturing of the characters is absolutely endearing and enjoyable. There's no reason to give a rating because everyone knows your's is one of the best! Thanks again! I look forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: June 05, 2004 11:49 PDT
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all i can say is: this was another AWESOME chapter!!! lol inu is so portective -giggles-
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Reviewed By: darkempereror not signed in On: June 05, 2004 08:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very humorous chapter! I'm a guy, but if I was Kagome I would have sat INuyahsa for even pulling out Tetsusaiga on his own kids. I like the line about Sesshomaru bugging Kagome, thhat was just too good. Keep up the good work! And I will be joining Sharpieg in waiting for your next update. Don't take so long to update this time please!
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: June 04, 2004 12:14 PDT
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Once again.... this is awesome!!! I particularly loved that part when Inuyasha brought out Tessaiga. He showed all those kids who was the real alpha male... gotta love it! Can't wait until the next chapter comes.. until then, I'm sitting in front of my machine waiting.....
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 11:06 PDT
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awwww...i love how you did this. totally unexpected but it makes sense and it's really cool. the whole thing with inuyasha being sterile was really interesting too. you've really made a unique story. it's one of the best i've read and one of the most original and imaginitive. can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: HAILY On: June 04, 2004 09:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story out there! Keep up the great work, I love this story!
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Reviewed By: Chuu On: June 04, 2004 04:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'FREEZE AND SHUT UP' God, this story is to good!!! i dont wnat it to end!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 04:12 PDT
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that was such a good chapter. i'm going to be sad when this fic ends. i feel like it's been around forever. i know it would take a long time and some might find it a little boring but i would love it if you did and actual person by person introduction of all of Kag and Yash's kids. ok so maybe not a strait out person by person, but something along those lines. i think i'm starting to get them all strait but the ones that havne't been mentioned since they first showed up, and those that were never mentioned to begin with, are a little hard to keep track of and i'm curious to know what kind of hayou or youkai they are. and what they look like. i'm naturally curious. i can't wait to hear about what happens and the new baby. and Rin has to have made Sess go to the reunion, after all she's so fond of Kag and i would think she would want Sess to go just cause he's related. besides how can you miss an oppertunity to have him and Yash crack insults at each other? up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: dragoninu2 On: June 04, 2004 01:03 PDT
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I just wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed your fanfic! ! ! It is so well thought out and I just enjoy every minute of it! Thank you for such a great story! This ranks up there with "Hero in the 21st Century"!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 21:09 PDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIwould On: June 03, 2004 18:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great fanfiction. I was so happy when I saw an update. You're a great writer. This is my favorite fanfiction, EVER. I love how Yukio and Eri turned out! :-) Keep up the good work. PS- I'm not going to pester you about updating on the day you posted, but keep writing please!! YAAAAY! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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Title: The Lucky Ones
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 17:35 PDT
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thank you. Thank you very much, Inu has almost left the building, and I'm dreading it as much as I'm looking forward to the next update. You have done an outstanding job, and I appreciate it. Thanks for posting this story and giving me the chance to read it. You're Awsome. bartel222@comcast.net I gotta question about the story for you if you have the time.
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