| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 00:43 PDT
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that was great i love how you delt with ther amotions leding up to and delin with kikio that was great.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 23:02 PDT
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ok, i was going to go to bed a good 2 and half hours ago, but your story distracted me along with other stuff. this story is so amazing! i can't wait to see what's going t happen now! kikyo will release Inuyasha right? and then he'll build the house for Kagome, and all will be happy. what's going to happen with the Shikon no Tama? please make Kag live longer. the idea of her dieing before their pups grow up is so sad and depressing. they've worked so hard to be together, it doesn't seem right that they should be ripped apart again some 80 or so years down the line. that's hardly any time at all for them. i can't wait to see what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: Holy WOW
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 22:12 PDT
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How nice you are to Kikyo. It gives me some inspiration, a newer thought. I've always been compassionate to Kikyo, and gave her thoughts in one particular chapter, but I never thought of a turn like this. It is the wonder and grace of reading advanced work. As such, you are a wonderfully advanced author. I hope everyone gets the chance to read this, no matter which couple they like best. It truly is amazing. =^.^= The longer you keep up this fic, the better. 200 reviews is just the beginning - and I speak from experience. Granted, it was on ff.net, and people review a lot more there. Well, I think I've taken up enough time. Keep up the wonderful descriptions and light-hearted fluff! Until next chapter! (30)
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 21:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again I am rendered speechless and awestruck at your story. I truely believe that your story is without a dought the absolute best fanfiction I have ever read. Your story ranks in my top 10 for all literary works I have ever read. I truely hope that you are awarded for your great writing skills. The way you have captured the characters in nothing less than perfect. I will truely regret seeing an end to this fic, but I know that once it ends I will read it over many times. As for the situation with Kagome's life span, that is a hard decision for any writer to make. She could either wish for etended life, to become a hanyou, or even a sad ending with a character death. Though I would hate to see a character die simply because they would be dead, and there would be no happy ending after that in my eyes. I have the upmost faith in your writing skills to provide an ending worthy of your great work. As before, I can not wait until I am privlidged with yet another chapter in this wonderfull story.
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: Kestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!! YEA!!! ok, that's out of my system. I Love this story. I can honestly say that it's one of my absolute most favorite fanfictions, that I have ever read. The characters are (pun intended) in character and the storyline is original. The reactions that you've given the characters are real and very believable. I know that my mom would have gone balistic if I showed up out of no where with a baby period. Keep up the Great Work and I'm hoping for a sequal to this story because I honestly can't believe not seeing anymore IY fics by you.
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Reviewed By: Valdrianth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffs* just so wanderful
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Title: ive been reading...
Reviewed By: hollow angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the first fic on media miner i have ever read...and ill tell u...one of my favs..its funny when the first ones u read r great. anyway...i would like to know if you will have a sequel..or if you have any ideas for a new fic?
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Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update now it has been nearly two weeks since you've updated and your on my favorites list. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 02:57 PDT
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I was trolling for InuYasha fics and found this. WOW. Gotta say, I stayed up *way* too late reading it, as I just couldn't stop. Your story is very engaging, your characters are spot-on, and your writing is just wonderful. Probably the *only* complaint I might have is how Kagome's mom first reacted to her showing up with a baby she was obviously nursing. And I did have to keep reminding myself that the doctor was just trying to do what she thought was right, at least at first. Otherwise, I was all for InuYasha gutting her. ^_~ I'm going to be sad to see the end of this fic, but only because I'm so enjoying it. Keep up the way good work!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 23:12 PDT
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every time you wrote the word cough it made me have to. i'm just getting over a coughing cold and the whole thing made my throught tingle. :\ please do something so that Kagome lives a long time and Inuyasha doesn't have to deal with the pain of loosing her. i know it's terribly over used and kind of a cop-out but it's just so nice to know that she'll live as long as he will. please? i hate sad endings. well... ok so i don't really hate them, there are some good ones out there, but they're just so sad and depressing and we have enough of that in the real world. nehoo. i'm about to pass out so... up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Nikui On: April 27, 2004 19:20 PDT
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Where'd you go?! If you updated, I cant see it. T__T Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Janine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely and totally agree with you on your assessment of Inuyasha's character. It's really a shame that the majority of IY fans only know the Inuyasha of the dubbed version of the anime, which definitely does not cast him in the best light by making him overly loud and obnoxious. I do know that IY CAN be those the things but the dubbed version really overdoes it in my opinion. Anyways, love your story and I can't wait 'til I can read more. :)
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 19:46 PDT
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Still waiting ever so patiently for updates. Please! I'm begging!
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: April 25, 2004 23:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, sorry I havent reviewed lately. real life has been kinda stressful for me these last few weeks. And considering that you havent updated for a while I'd say that real life finally caught up with you too, huh? I loved the last chapters you wrote, and can't wait to see how the Kikyo confrontation finally works out. Every time I see an update from you it really maks my day, so I hope you update soon since I'm in need of something good. Keep on writing, you've made alot of fans! Later. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Patricia----- On: April 25, 2004 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A beuatiful fic which I read straight through. It message of love is excellent. As my male family members fight terrorism around the world this fic gives me hope. When the time comes for the completed Shikon no Tama, perhaps Inu Yasha should give Kagome the gift of life, so that she will die when he dies, so that their love will endure.
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