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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ryunosuke-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 17:53 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading you fic for some time now, and all I can say is you just keep on amazing me with your writing. This is my favorite fic of all time. I just wanted to tell you to keep on keepin on, and i hope you start another fic when this one is done.
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Title: Great chapters!
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 23:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have captured everyone's character so well! I loved reading these chapters! Sess is not the youkai everyone thinks he is; but I've always wondered why Rin and Jaken refer to themselves in the third person? Is that because they know Sess is dominanat to them? Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 09, 2004 21:38 PDT
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WOW!!! This fic totally rocks!!! I just spent all my spare time over the last two days reading it. It is absolutely wonderful! Thank you! Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: Gina C. On: April 09, 2004 19:32 PDT
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That ending was really, really sexy. Though you planned that... thank you.
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:28 PDT
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Did i love this chapter? YESSSSSSSSSSSS Love it. Good one. what did Inuyasha and Seshoumaru discover about them in their trip together? And...maybe..perhaps...Inuyasha have found Kikyou and she had loose him for good and he will start to build the HOUSE :-) Well, Kagome said to Youkio that she will come back before dinner but...she didn´t say of what day right :-)Please, update soon.
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Title: /snicker/ newlyweds
Reviewed By: caliko not signed in On: April 09, 2004 14:11 PDT
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^_^ YAY!!! Yasha-baby back home! LOL.. and i only wish i could actually SEE a drawing where Inuyasha told Sesshoumaru that he's just jealous! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 12:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is great i can't wait until you update please update soon
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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 05:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, what a _shocking_ display ^_-, there at the end. Most times people make a point of having Kagome being "marked" as Inuyasha's mate, it seems to increase her libido. This way it seems more natural, since Inuyasha hasn't quite claimed Kagome completely yet. He hasn't built the house yet, of course. Alas, poor Hojou-kun, you just didn't have a chance. So far, the villagers have wholeheartedly accepted Inuyasha and Kagome, and so far seem to have accepted Yukio. I wonder what will happen though, once Yukio begins to run around a bit on his own? His natural Youkai toughness will let him shrug off things that could really hurt a child, and he may know to be careful with his strength, claws and fangs. It'll be important at that stage for Shippou and Kirara to keep a good eye on him. True, Yukio will be traveling with Kagome and Inuyasha, but that will make things even more difficult. A child's natural inquisitiveness warring with directions to stay in the camp, or close by parents or packmates. Your obviously concentrating on the pup, and the new mothers and fathers in the Inutachi, but it might make for an interesting side note if Ayumi and Hojou end up a couple, since they share in the secret. ^_^ It looks like there has been something of a thaw in the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. Hope to see more interaction between them- perhaps the next time would involve jewel shards? Hopefully the next story arc will bring Kikyou back into the picture. For Kagome and Inuyasha to really be able to work towards a future, and a family together, that situation will have to be resolved. Since Kikyou hasn't been coming around, that does point to a change in the undead miko's nature, since before the events at Hakureizan she rarely left out an opportunity to remind Inuyasha of his duty to her. After Kagome had saved her from her final disintegration, she began to stay aloof- She didn't even go to see Inuyasha after her clay body was purified of Naraku's miasma. Hope I didn't spoil anything- I often assume authors writing continuations have been reading the scanlations available on the net... Love the story, can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 00:15 PDT
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hehe. i liked the ending. ^_^ is Inuyasha going to have Totosai make a sword out of his fang for Yukio? i'm glad that Inuyasha is back. can't wait to see what happens next. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: April 08, 2004 22:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU!! I loved the Hojou/Kagome scene. In fact I loved it all! I always do. Your kinda scaring me with the Kikyo thing, the longer it takes for her to show up, the worse the confrontation is going to be. I'm on pins and needles here! I can't wait to read more! I love this fic!!!! MORE I SAY! MORE!! He he, Later. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 00:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fan fic i have red so far and i have been doing alot of reading. You stay true to the real Inuyasha, a real chalange. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: ihavenonamebutifyouinsistiamthehobobehindthedumster On: April 07, 2004 17:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wooooohoo!keep on writing!! i lurve how inu and seshhy are working togetta!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 00:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there. I just started reading this fic today and have finished all of the completed chapters. First off, you're amazing!! yea, not kidding. =p Secondly, just wanted to shout out a "Hey shut the fuck up" to those who get pissy about "ooc'ness" and other stupid comments. Seriously folks, I do beleive that this author is entitled to a little creative freedom... if that was missing then it wouldn't be a fanfic but instead the tv show =p So stop your bitching or I'll beat you up! skjdfklsdjaflskdfjasl;fdj. Anyway, keep up the great work. I hope there's more soon. *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 14:19 PDT
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awwww...brotherly love. i like how you made sessy all fucked up and inuyasha helped him. that was really unexpected. can't wait for the next chapter
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