| "The Lucky Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 1108 ] |
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Reviewed By: KokoroGirl On: April 15, 2004 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
greatly written! i must say your fic could be a book because of the emotional feelings the way it's written your fic deserves better credit that it's getting!
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Reviewed By: Hiromaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the chapter were it talks about Inuyasha out of character . Well . . . don't listen to those dumb asses , they don't know what there talking about . Even If he is a little out of character thats only because they have never seen Inuyasha in love or with a child . I would like to see there character stay the same when they find a hanyou pup and have to pick between two girls . and all that other stuff . Anyway , Inuyasha's character his perfect for this story .
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Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 16:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This story is the kind of story that deserves an award! Please email me when you update! And please let Kag&Inu be together without any trouble from Kikyou!
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Reviewed By: sayin_girl On: April 14, 2004 11:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, even though it almost made me cry. I know how hard it is to disaplin a child like that. It just rips your heart out, but it's something that has to be done to keep them safe. Doesn't make it any easier to do though. Also, I had a thought that wandered by me yesterday. Is Myoga gonna make one of his random appearances? I wonder what his reaction to his lord's adopted son would be? Or Yukio's reaction to him for that matter.(He he, I can just see Yukio torturing poor Myoga thinking he's some kind of new toy) Well, I look forward to reading more, and am very interested in what Kouga is going to have to say since I assume that was who you meant when you said that someone would be coming back with 'their tail between their legs'. And he's the only Youkai that I know of that has a tail besides Sesshomaru, and the Western lord hasn't done anything wrong lately(not that he'd admit it if he had anyway,*Sigh* stubborn dog-demons) Well, write soon I'll be waiting! Later. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 23:59 PDT
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i'm so sorry. i just noticed you've up dated cause mm is acting weird with my e-mail and it won't tell me when stories have been up dated like it usually does. but nehow. i haven't gotten to read the chap yet. i'm really tiered other wise i'd read it now. sorry again for the late review. i'm sure the chap it wonderfull like always. i'll read it soon! promis!
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Reviewed By: FictionQueen On: April 13, 2004 12:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE BEST FANFICTION I'VE EVER READ, and believe me, I've read alot. Please finish!! I loved this one, and I think Inuyasha's character was dead on. PS- Kikyo must DIE.
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic! It's perfect how you've tied Inuyasha and Yukio together. They had similiar pasts but Inuyasha can help Yukio to grow up with a great life. What you did with Kagome and Inuyasha was perfect also. Keep writing! I can't wait 'till you finish this story!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 12, 2004 19:56 PDT
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Woo hoo! Another chapter. Happy happy day! THis story is continuing to be fantastic. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 17:02 PDT
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Wait why is everyone talking about an ending?? this isnt the end of the story is it?? :(
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 17:00 PDT
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dito!! poor little yukio!! I felt so bad for him. but this chap was really good, but were is the story going?? when is kikyo gonna come let Inuyasha free and he finally says I Love U to kagome? thats how its gonna end right? ;)
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Reviewed By: Ummm.. lil ol' me! On: April 12, 2004 12:30 PDT
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Like always another great chapter. I await the next one anxiously! OK now that Im done sounding like a BIG nerd let me add this to it... HURRY UP AND UPDATE! I WANNA READ A NEW CHAPTER ASAP! lol Buy Buy!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 10:08 PDT
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that was funny when they had lost Yukio and were like "ahhhh! inuyasha is gonna skin us all alive!!!" but i think this is my favorite chapter so far. it was great. you're an awesome author. keep it up. i love you!
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Title: **OI!**
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 09:37 PDT
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Poor Pup.. he didn't mean it! /sniff/ but yasha IS right... anyway, you don't need me to tell you how great this story is.. my addiction speaks for itself! LOL.. will review next chappie! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: GunnerYunaGirl On: April 11, 2004 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I love this fic... I've been religiously reading this over and over again, and just now I was rereading it while waiting for a new chapter when the new one got up ^^;; I love this story, the only thing I think could be improved is longer description and detail. Otherwise, keep up the excellent good work and show us some more!
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 18:47 PDT
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That was a great great chapter. And I think that Inuyasha handle very well with the situation. He is a good father. Please, update soon.
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